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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Love / Romance / Dating
- Published: 05/09/2015
He spoke to me
"Well, you shouldn't roam about in the night"
I retreated back and shot him with a furious look and answered
"Your concern Mr......."
"Mr Backfied...rather Master Backfied"
"Yes,your concern Master Backfied?"
He calmly replied
"Ummmmm.....Well am very chivalrous I guess!!!!"
"Well,then I guess I'm not in need of your chivalry at the moment"
"Hmmmmm........mmmm well you may need afterwards that means."
I realized I had said 'AT THE MOMENT'
"May I?" he asked with a gesture showing to walk with him
I said
"Huh?"
"Ummm..m.mmm I meant!If you don't mind can I walk you home....."
I was thinking what was the worse possible things that can happen if he once comes to know my place. Well,I guess I was thinking too hard that my thoughts came on my face. Reading my face he added
"Well, its okay if you don't want me to come....I mean just thought that maybe I can give you company....if you are not comfortable then its totally alright"
He started to walk off. I suddenly said
"Okayyy...if you insists!"
I couldn't help telling him a yes. After all I was not also feeling to go alone. So we started to walk. After a few minutes he asked
"Well, am Deiward...Deiward Backfied and you????
I shot him an irritated glance and replied
"I'm Harkot McCum."
"WOW!!!!!Harkot....Nice name....Well my friends call me 'Dee'"
I replied
"What am I supposed to do...?"
he grinned...I felt like smashing his head into pieces. He was obviously enjoying me getting irritated.
"No...just said thought may be you'll want to know afterwards"
I raised an eyebrow questioningly at his words. He seemed to understand my thoughts. But just looked away. All this while I couldn't see his face because it was quite a dark night. We walked in silence for a few more minutes and then I said
"Ummmm...there..... that's my house" and pointed to somewhere vague. Avoiding to tell him my proper residence as much as I could. But then at the same time he seemed to be more and more eager to go my place. He said
"You mind if I come to your house. I just need a glass of water"
I shot back at once
"So that's why you wanted to walk me back home right?"
"Hey....nnoonooo......don't take me wrong. It's fine.....I'l not go.....Anyways it was nice meeting you....bye and Take Care"
He turned about and started to walk off. Once again I called him
"Ummm.....its fine....come...Not a problem"
He turned to look at me....We stood there for a few seconds like within these seconds he wanted to know how much I wanted him to come or I said 'yes' just because it was water. Anyways he suddenly asked.
"You 're sure?"
"Yuppp...After all you dropped me home I can do this for manners at least......So come over...."
He smiled....at least I thought he did. We started walking again.
"You have problem with guys I suppose?"
"Your business??"
"Nothing!Just trying to figure you out????!!!!"
I stopped and said
"Mr. Deiward Backfied don't even take a chance on stressing yourself to figure me out. Because guys are not so talented so figure Harkot McCum!!"
He looked straight into my eyes and said
"If I can do????then?????"
"You can't!!!!Think you are too short right. Don't even try because I'm not like the other girls so its useless!" I snapped
"Hmmm....I see......" we started to walk again.
"Any reasons for disliking guys?"
"They try to act smart,clever and intelligent but they are actually duffers, fools and mainly can not respect we girls. And the worst part is they can take that a girl can be better than them. They can not tolerate that at many a times we are genuinely better than them and can do a lot more than them and can do a lot more than them. But they'll not accept that because you people are coward and run away from the truth and don't accept the truth. And then it'll be like 'WE ARE TRYING TO PROTECT YOU' and so we can't go out at night because some animals a.k.a boys will rape us. Great....!!!And after all this you expect me to like these creatures. WOW!!!" I just bursted remembering those days when I had a brother . My awesome parents thought him to be messenger of God and even after he raped my friend my parents decided to support him and they also forced me to do so he was sentenced to life imprisonment so from that day onward my parents disowned me as their daughter finally. And I started a new life changed my name...and all possible identities which could identify me as Mr.David Ames's daughter. From then I and my friend we started to live to together. Few months back she got married and moved out so I live alone now in the apartment.
"All guys are not the same" he tried to pacify me.
"99% are the same....only 1% are bit better"
"What about dad, brother and uncle????this people comprise more than 1% if I'm nor wrong"
"You are very wrong Mr. Backfied very wrong. Dad and brothers are sometimes the cause of ruin in your life. Some parents are so fools and idiots that they think we girls are less than boys just because boys bring in money by ruining another girl's life and we can't because we go to some other house and try to give them as much as happiness we can. Pathetic world I must say."
He didn't say anything after hearing my outburst he just kept quiet. We walked and then reached my house. I opened the door
"Here, have a seat" I said as I directed him to a sofa."
I switched on the lights and for the first time I clearly saw his face. He had two large and keen black eyes. He was a little taller than me. He wore only a jacket and zipped it up a little showing off his well toned muscles adding up to his perfect physique. He wore a black jeans. A shock of his black hair fell on his forehead.
I asked
"You want anything else than water?"
"Nah!!thanks....only water will be fine."
"Sit!!!I'm coming " I said and headed towards the kitchen. I filled a glass of water and took a glass for me too and also some cookies in a tray and went to the sitting room where I found him fiddling with his cell phone.
"Here you are!" I said keeping the tray
"Oh!!!!!Yeah!!Thanks!" he said as he took the glass to drink. I reached for mine and we sat there drinking water. He was looking straight into me. I could feel his eager eyes trying to find the solutions of some unanswered question revolving in his head. We sat there in silence. The ticking of the clock sounded exceptionally louder than usual. After a while he started
"You stay here alone?"
"Well, what can you see?A sea of people roaming about in the house?" I snapped.
He smiled.
"Its quiet faraway from the city right?"
"No its a posh area!" I replied sarcastically.
He smiled once again. I gave him a nasty look.
"Umm..m..mmm"
"What?" I asked seeing his hesitation
"I was thinking .....can we took normally?"
"So,till now I was talking abnormally right???I mean like an alien or some one from a totally different place of natives huh?"
"No no, I didn't mean that . I meant can we talk without being sarcastic?"
I heaved a sigh and said
"Okaayyy!What's it"?
He looked straight into my eyes and spoke as if choosing the correct words to express himself which will not at least make me kick him out of my house
"I was thinking...."he started trying to comprehend my ability to take in his words the way he meant it to be taken in and understand what he was trying to tell me. He started again.
"Ummmm.........I was thinking...." he cut off short again. I had a good mind to tell him to stop so much of thinking and say what he wanted. But I kept quiet trying to make him comfortable so that he could at least finish his sentence.
"I was thinking...."he started with a determined voice determined to finish the line at his try.
"Why do you leave here alone...You seem to be a girl of 20 at the most...so???"
I was happy that he finished his sentence,though it was his third time still he finished at least.
"You' asking about my family I guess???"I said. This time it was my turn to see how much I could trust this stranger guy. Though stranger I felt an urge to tell him everything.
"Yeah..!!" he replied a bit more confident at my normal behavior.
"You know something unfair happened to me, you want to know what was that incident right?"
I said giving him a crooked smile. He heaved a sigh seeing that he was caught in his own trap
"Yeah!!!you are right" he admitted
"What made you think so?"
"What??.. that'll you'll answer me?" he asked. I could feel his confidence lowering again.
I quickly replied
"No!That something happened with me?"
He smiled and said
"It shows in your eyes."
"Oh!I see..." finding nothing to hide anymore I replied.
"So will you tell me?" he said inquiringly.
"Yeah....Well I had an elder brother Justin Ames, father David Ames and mother Herlin Ames.
Justin got drunk and raped my friend. But still my parents decided to support him and forced me too do the same, but then I turned to be opposite and supported my friend resulting my brother to be sentenced to life imprisonment. Furious, my parents kicked me out of the house. I started living here with my friend. She got married few months back and moved out with her husband and from then onward I am living alone." I blubbered out everything.
"Your friend's name? he asked
"Elinda Jones....why?" I asked back
Suddenly I felt a strange expression creeping through his face
"What?" I asked
"So this is why you hate guys..right?"
"Yeah...They are not fit to be brought on Earth. They are mentally ill."
"Oh!I see" he said
We sat in silence for a few seconds.
"You want anything else?" I said breaking the silence
"Nope....Thanks!" he said as he stood to leave.
"Well, it was nice meeting you!"
"Well, it wasn't for me" I said getting back to my own self once again.
He looked at me
"You'll never change!!!!
I replied it with a furious look.
"Okay...Bye...and take care!!!" he said before leaving. He walked down the road and I strained my eyes as much as possible trying to trace him in the dark night. Though initially I succeeded but afterwards he blended with the darkness of the night. I heaved a sigh. I cleaned up and went to bed.
Next morning I saw an envelope lying on my veranda. On opening it, I saw a short letter, it read
'Hi! You are Marina Ames right?Well, the girl who got raped by Justin Ames is Elinda Backfied. But since she got raped my dad didn't want to accept her and my mom died long ago when I was just six. Henceforth, she started to live with a new name with you.
Well, all I can say is Thank You for saving my sister. And one more thing, I hope I'm among that guys who comprise that 1% for you at least.
Bye,Take Care....
-Deiward Backfied'
As I read the letter, I could feel a mixed feeling creeping into me. I understood he had bore more than me.
The whole day I sat in front of the window staring blankly outside the window with an equally empty heart still bearing that unusual strange mixed feeling.
ACCIDENTAL MEETING(alisha)
He spoke to me
"Well, you shouldn't roam about in the night"
I retreated back and shot him with a furious look and answered
"Your concern Mr......."
"Mr Backfied...rather Master Backfied"
"Yes,your concern Master Backfied?"
He calmly replied
"Ummmmm.....Well am very chivalrous I guess!!!!"
"Well,then I guess I'm not in need of your chivalry at the moment"
"Hmmmmm........mmmm well you may need afterwards that means."
I realized I had said 'AT THE MOMENT'
"May I?" he asked with a gesture showing to walk with him
I said
"Huh?"
"Ummm..m.mmm I meant!If you don't mind can I walk you home....."
I was thinking what was the worse possible things that can happen if he once comes to know my place. Well,I guess I was thinking too hard that my thoughts came on my face. Reading my face he added
"Well, its okay if you don't want me to come....I mean just thought that maybe I can give you company....if you are not comfortable then its totally alright"
He started to walk off. I suddenly said
"Okayyy...if you insists!"
I couldn't help telling him a yes. After all I was not also feeling to go alone. So we started to walk. After a few minutes he asked
"Well, am Deiward...Deiward Backfied and you????
I shot him an irritated glance and replied
"I'm Harkot McCum."
"WOW!!!!!Harkot....Nice name....Well my friends call me 'Dee'"
I replied
"What am I supposed to do...?"
he grinned...I felt like smashing his head into pieces. He was obviously enjoying me getting irritated.
"No...just said thought may be you'll want to know afterwards"
I raised an eyebrow questioningly at his words. He seemed to understand my thoughts. But just looked away. All this while I couldn't see his face because it was quite a dark night. We walked in silence for a few more minutes and then I said
"Ummmm...there..... that's my house" and pointed to somewhere vague. Avoiding to tell him my proper residence as much as I could. But then at the same time he seemed to be more and more eager to go my place. He said
"You mind if I come to your house. I just need a glass of water"
I shot back at once
"So that's why you wanted to walk me back home right?"
"Hey....nnoonooo......don't take me wrong. It's fine.....I'l not go.....Anyways it was nice meeting you....bye and Take Care"
He turned about and started to walk off. Once again I called him
"Ummm.....its fine....come...Not a problem"
He turned to look at me....We stood there for a few seconds like within these seconds he wanted to know how much I wanted him to come or I said 'yes' just because it was water. Anyways he suddenly asked.
"You 're sure?"
"Yuppp...After all you dropped me home I can do this for manners at least......So come over...."
He smiled....at least I thought he did. We started walking again.
"You have problem with guys I suppose?"
"Your business??"
"Nothing!Just trying to figure you out????!!!!"
I stopped and said
"Mr. Deiward Backfied don't even take a chance on stressing yourself to figure me out. Because guys are not so talented so figure Harkot McCum!!"
He looked straight into my eyes and said
"If I can do????then?????"
"You can't!!!!Think you are too short right. Don't even try because I'm not like the other girls so its useless!" I snapped
"Hmmm....I see......" we started to walk again.
"Any reasons for disliking guys?"
"They try to act smart,clever and intelligent but they are actually duffers, fools and mainly can not respect we girls. And the worst part is they can take that a girl can be better than them. They can not tolerate that at many a times we are genuinely better than them and can do a lot more than them and can do a lot more than them. But they'll not accept that because you people are coward and run away from the truth and don't accept the truth. And then it'll be like 'WE ARE TRYING TO PROTECT YOU' and so we can't go out at night because some animals a.k.a boys will rape us. Great....!!!And after all this you expect me to like these creatures. WOW!!!" I just bursted remembering those days when I had a brother . My awesome parents thought him to be messenger of God and even after he raped my friend my parents decided to support him and they also forced me to do so he was sentenced to life imprisonment so from that day onward my parents disowned me as their daughter finally. And I started a new life changed my name...and all possible identities which could identify me as Mr.David Ames's daughter. From then I and my friend we started to live to together. Few months back she got married and moved out so I live alone now in the apartment.
"All guys are not the same" he tried to pacify me.
"99% are the same....only 1% are bit better"
"What about dad, brother and uncle????this people comprise more than 1% if I'm nor wrong"
"You are very wrong Mr. Backfied very wrong. Dad and brothers are sometimes the cause of ruin in your life. Some parents are so fools and idiots that they think we girls are less than boys just because boys bring in money by ruining another girl's life and we can't because we go to some other house and try to give them as much as happiness we can. Pathetic world I must say."
He didn't say anything after hearing my outburst he just kept quiet. We walked and then reached my house. I opened the door
"Here, have a seat" I said as I directed him to a sofa."
I switched on the lights and for the first time I clearly saw his face. He had two large and keen black eyes. He was a little taller than me. He wore only a jacket and zipped it up a little showing off his well toned muscles adding up to his perfect physique. He wore a black jeans. A shock of his black hair fell on his forehead.
I asked
"You want anything else than water?"
"Nah!!thanks....only water will be fine."
"Sit!!!I'm coming " I said and headed towards the kitchen. I filled a glass of water and took a glass for me too and also some cookies in a tray and went to the sitting room where I found him fiddling with his cell phone.
"Here you are!" I said keeping the tray
"Oh!!!!!Yeah!!Thanks!" he said as he took the glass to drink. I reached for mine and we sat there drinking water. He was looking straight into me. I could feel his eager eyes trying to find the solutions of some unanswered question revolving in his head. We sat there in silence. The ticking of the clock sounded exceptionally louder than usual. After a while he started
"You stay here alone?"
"Well, what can you see?A sea of people roaming about in the house?" I snapped.
He smiled.
"Its quiet faraway from the city right?"
"No its a posh area!" I replied sarcastically.
He smiled once again. I gave him a nasty look.
"Umm..m..mmm"
"What?" I asked seeing his hesitation
"I was thinking .....can we took normally?"
"So,till now I was talking abnormally right???I mean like an alien or some one from a totally different place of natives huh?"
"No no, I didn't mean that . I meant can we talk without being sarcastic?"
I heaved a sigh and said
"Okaayyy!What's it"?
He looked straight into my eyes and spoke as if choosing the correct words to express himself which will not at least make me kick him out of my house
"I was thinking...."he started trying to comprehend my ability to take in his words the way he meant it to be taken in and understand what he was trying to tell me. He started again.
"Ummmm.........I was thinking...." he cut off short again. I had a good mind to tell him to stop so much of thinking and say what he wanted. But I kept quiet trying to make him comfortable so that he could at least finish his sentence.
"I was thinking...."he started with a determined voice determined to finish the line at his try.
"Why do you leave here alone...You seem to be a girl of 20 at the most...so???"
I was happy that he finished his sentence,though it was his third time still he finished at least.
"You' asking about my family I guess???"I said. This time it was my turn to see how much I could trust this stranger guy. Though stranger I felt an urge to tell him everything.
"Yeah..!!" he replied a bit more confident at my normal behavior.
"You know something unfair happened to me, you want to know what was that incident right?"
I said giving him a crooked smile. He heaved a sigh seeing that he was caught in his own trap
"Yeah!!!you are right" he admitted
"What made you think so?"
"What??.. that'll you'll answer me?" he asked. I could feel his confidence lowering again.
I quickly replied
"No!That something happened with me?"
He smiled and said
"It shows in your eyes."
"Oh!I see..." finding nothing to hide anymore I replied.
"So will you tell me?" he said inquiringly.
"Yeah....Well I had an elder brother Justin Ames, father David Ames and mother Herlin Ames.
Justin got drunk and raped my friend. But still my parents decided to support him and forced me too do the same, but then I turned to be opposite and supported my friend resulting my brother to be sentenced to life imprisonment. Furious, my parents kicked me out of the house. I started living here with my friend. She got married few months back and moved out with her husband and from then onward I am living alone." I blubbered out everything.
"Your friend's name? he asked
"Elinda Jones....why?" I asked back
Suddenly I felt a strange expression creeping through his face
"What?" I asked
"So this is why you hate guys..right?"
"Yeah...They are not fit to be brought on Earth. They are mentally ill."
"Oh!I see" he said
We sat in silence for a few seconds.
"You want anything else?" I said breaking the silence
"Nope....Thanks!" he said as he stood to leave.
"Well, it was nice meeting you!"
"Well, it wasn't for me" I said getting back to my own self once again.
He looked at me
"You'll never change!!!!
I replied it with a furious look.
"Okay...Bye...and take care!!!" he said before leaving. He walked down the road and I strained my eyes as much as possible trying to trace him in the dark night. Though initially I succeeded but afterwards he blended with the darkness of the night. I heaved a sigh. I cleaned up and went to bed.
Next morning I saw an envelope lying on my veranda. On opening it, I saw a short letter, it read
'Hi! You are Marina Ames right?Well, the girl who got raped by Justin Ames is Elinda Backfied. But since she got raped my dad didn't want to accept her and my mom died long ago when I was just six. Henceforth, she started to live with a new name with you.
Well, all I can say is Thank You for saving my sister. And one more thing, I hope I'm among that guys who comprise that 1% for you at least.
Bye,Take Care....
-Deiward Backfied'
As I read the letter, I could feel a mixed feeling creeping into me. I understood he had bore more than me.
The whole day I sat in front of the window staring blankly outside the window with an equally empty heart still bearing that unusual strange mixed feeling.
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