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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 08/05/2015
Detective Danny Blaze
Scene 1: In School
This story starts off with a young teenager named Danny Blaze and his younger brother Chris Blaze. The two may have been born as twins but they couldn't be more different if you tried. Danny was always the unmotivated one and was only fixed on his video games. The fact that Danny was a super genius when it came to investigating crimes and profiling only made matters worse for Chris because Chris took care of him all the time. Chris wasn't as smart as Danny was but he was always working hard at school and at home. Blaze was barely passing his high school classes let alone working to get a job. Anyways let’s get to the story and it starts at Chris and Danny’s house while their parents are away for work and the two stay at the house by themselves.
An alarm goes off and it's around 1 PM and Chris was shouting at him, "Danny get your ass out of bed it's 1 pm and we have to head to school!" Danny was a red headed male with spikey hair forest green eyes and stood around 5' 10" and weighed around 189 pounds. He was mostly muscle which was kind of shocking since he didn't do much of anything but playing games.
As Chris walks upstairs he shouts out, "Danny get up!" He then kicks at the door loud and hard shouting for him to wake up. Danny groans and starts rubbing his eyes as he slowly sits up in his bed and stretches his arms, "what is it Chris!?" He shouts loudly and yawns as he gets to his feet. He had bed hair badly and was droopy eyed but he didn't care in the slightest. He just pulls on his blue jeans and then tugs his black shirt down over his head and then pulls his white socks on and opens his door. As he does a young male stood there he was identical to him. Danny gives Chris a glare, "what is it?" He says tiredly as he rubs his eyes again. Chris gave him a glare, "it's 1 in the afternoon and you're still in bed... You skipped school again didn't you!?" Danny just waved him off and walks down stairs, "you nag like a woman Chris just leaves me alone... I am the older brother after all." He walks to the TV and switches on his counsel.
As he sits there playing his games he hears a knock at the door and looks back, "Chris answer that will ya!?" Chris glares as he walks downstairs, "you were right there you lazy son of a.... Never mind!" He growls and walks to the door. As he opens it a woman the same age as the two stood there with a smile on her face. She had long black hair blue eyes and stood around 5' 8" and was about 145 pounds. She smiles, "hi Chris.... Is Danny here?" She asked cheerfully and Chris just sighs, "He’s in the same place he always is." The girl sighed, "Playing those damn games still huh?" Chris simply nods his head and looks back, "yo Danny Tina is here!" Danny looks back and then just looks back at the T.V. Going back to his games.
As Tina comes and sits down next to him she smiles, "so what you up to today Danny? Any plans other than playing video games?" Danny looks at her with an arched brow, "not really." He says then goes back to his game. Tina gives a soft sigh and looks around, "you know from what I gather you only play these RPG's because they are the only thing that can challenge your mind... What if I was to say that I know something that could challenge you much better?" Danny looks up at her, "really?" Tina gives a grin and nods her head, "yes it's a school that teaches you how to become the best detective possible... It's the most famous one in these states and they happen to be getting ready for entrance exams tomorrow morning you interested?" Danny looks at her, "you think it'll be a challenge for me?" Tina nods her head, "yes but you'll have to work hard." Danny slowly stands up and crosses his arms, "I highly doubt I'll need to put in much effort."
As he walks towards the stairs Tina looks at him, "where you going?" Danny looks at her, "I'll need to get to bed early if I want to get up in time for it." Tina laughs and stands up, "very well them, I'll meet you here and walk you to the exam hall." Danny just waves at her and heads back to his bedroom and goes back to sleep.
The next morning Danny wakes up yawning still looking quite tired and that's when the door flies open and Tina came flying inside his room. Danny's eyes shot right open and before he knew it he was flying out the window. Tina screams out the window, "you dumbass we're running late move it!" Danny looks up, "crazy bitch you kicked me out of the bedroom!!" Tina glares at him and walks down stairs sighing a bit, “what a dummy.” She whispers and as she comes down stairs Danny was walking back upward.
After he got done changing his clothes he walks back down and the two make their way towards the school building. As he walks up to the building Tina stops and smiles, “this is where I leave you to your own thing I’ll see you after.” She waves and walks away and Danny just simply sighs and walks inside his arms crossed over his chest as he does.
As he walks inside he looks around seeing people doing last minute studying and others looking like they are praying to god for help on the test. Danny just shrugs and flops down in a nearby chair and just closes his eyes waiting for the Procter to arrive and start the test. Danny opens his eyes and keeps scanning around noticing everyone seemed on edge. Danny just shrugs it off and looks at the ceiling thinking to his self and stretches out his arms.
A few minutes pass by before the Procter came in and claps her hands, “everyone put your stuff away and get ready for the test! I am Mrs. Thai and I will be your Procter! Danny opens one eye and sighs as he looks at the middle aged woman with long brown hair brown eyes and she was wearing a red dress that was an inch down passed her knees and matching heels. She had on black rimmed glasses and was looking around at all the takers and her eyes fixed on Danny. She thought to herself, “This boy seems either lazy or confident either way he looks like he’d be a handful if he passes… We’ll have to see won’t we?” She walks over and hands out the 3 page test and as soon as Danny got the test he looked through it and arched a brow, “are you serious?” He thought and he just rubs his chin, “some of these are quite tough….. Tina wasn’t lying when she said this school might challenge me.” As soon as the Procter handed the tests out she looks at the class, “begin!”
Danny didn’t waste much time before he started writing out the answers to the questions. He was actually excited about this test since he hadn’t had a real challenge for a while now and he wanted to see how far he could actually push himself. The first page was pretty simple for him to finish and so was most of the second page. The third page was a bit more difficult but he was able to finish it with a good probability that he got them all right. The final page was the tricky one and he grins a bit when he got to the scenario that he had to show his skill.
“There have been 4 killings in the past 4 weeks and they all appear to be the work of a serial killer…. The bodies were laid out like a cross and their blood was drained from puncture wounds on their wrists and ankles. They were laid out in the living room right in front of a mantle of Jesus Christ… Give us a profile on the suspect and how you would proceed in catching the suspect in question.”
Danny smirks a bit as he reads the scenario and rubs his chin, “hmmm well first I’d give the profile… The suspect is a Christian fanatic that is punishing people for their sins such as lusting after someone who’s not their spouse or even taking the lords name in vain… So I’d go and check the background of anyone that might have been close to the suspect that might have been abused by a charge orphanage or maybe someone who’s been in and out of foster care that was ran by Christians.” Danny nods his head, “then I’d run a check to see if they have had any psychological trauma and if that checked out I’d bring them in and if that doesn’t work out I’d start put a unit on each suspect and have them follow them and see where that leads me.”
Danny then turns in the paper and sits back down kicking up his feet and closes his eyes waiting for everyone else to finish and after he was done the Procter then dismisses them and Danny heads back outside. Tina watched him coming out and smiles, “how did it go?” Danny stops next to her, “you were right that was pretty challenging but I think I did fairly well.” He then walks away and Tina follows him and giggles, “You know if I didn’t know any better I’d say you had some fun in there.” Danny just waved it off and kept walking but in reality he really did have fun it was a rush that he hadn’t had in a long while. He looked at the sky, “States Detective School also known as S.D.S… I might like it here.” He thought to himself and stopped in front of his house and looked at Tina, “thanks...” He walks inside and closes the door and lays down sleeping.
The next morning Danny came to and stretched out his arms looking at the ceiling when he heard a phone call. Chris answers the phone, “hello? Yes he lives here… Wait what!? Yes one second!” He rushed to the bedroom and the door flies open and Danny shoots up, “what is it?” Chris shoves the phone into his chest and walks back out without saying a word. Blaze puts the phone to his ear, “hello? Yes I’m Danny Blaze.” A woman’s voice could be heard, “Danny I am Mrs. Thai, I was the Procter for the exam you took yesterday… We’re calling you because of your test and we wanted to tell you that you’re the first one to take this test that has ever scored a 100%... We need you to come down and have a chat with us so we can discuss your future plans.” Danny nods, “I’ll be there in a half hour.” He slowly stands and pulls on his same old blue jeans and black shirt. He then pulls on his socks and black boots, while stretching his arms out he walks to the door and grabs his wallet then heads out and waves to Chris, “be back later.”
While walking to the school he saw Tina waiting down the road for him with a smile on her face, ‘heard you got a call… What’s the verdict?” Danny walks passed her, “I got a 100 on it…” She froze in place and stood there with wide eyes, “I knew he was good but… He was actually able to get a 100% on the test? That’s… never been done before as far as I know….” She looks back and runs to catch up to him, “hey wait up!” Danny looks back, “I’m heading to the school to talk to the Procter you want to come?” Tina nods her head, “yes!” Danny laughed slightly, “very well let’s go then.” She nods quickly and follows behind him wanting to know more about what was going to happen.
As soon as the two got to the school Danny looked up at it with a curious look, “so you go here right?” Tina nods, “starting the same time you will when you get in.” He nods his head and the two walk inside and head to the office of the dean and Danny knocks on the door. He hears an older male’s voice telling him to come inside and Danny walks in with Tina to see a mid-40’s male sitting in a seat with Mrs. Thai next to him with her hands folded in front of her. Tina stood next to Danny her arms crossed over her chest with a curious look as well. The Dean stands and fixed his black dress coat and looks at the two, “I am Dean Crain and I must say that I’m impressed by your score and am willing to give you a full ride if you are willing to come here and put your full effort into your studies.” Tina looked at Danny who smirked a bit, “what’s the shortest time someone has graduated from here?” The Dean rubs his chin, ‘4 years if I remember right.” Danny smirks a bit, “I’ll do it in 2” He turns and walks out of the office followed by Tina who just shook her head laughing, “you got a boost of energy it seems.” Danny smirks a bit, “I’m going to enjoy this.” He looks at the ceiling and grins, “finally something worth getting motivated for.” He looks back at Tina, “get ready for a whole new look on me.” He walked out of the building with Tina who had a shocked look on her face.
Danny sighs as he walks outside wearing a nice dress shirt with a white jacket pulled over it. The jacket had gold trim on it with a triangle on it that had S.D.S stitched over it, he also had on blue dress pants and black dress shoes. Danny was walking along with Tina by his side who had a similar outfit on accept a blue skirt instead of pants. Danny had a bag thrown over his shoulder and had a tired look in his eyes. He wanted to be sure he got in as much gaming in before the semester started and he didn’t keep track of time and stayed late that night playing his last RPG. So he only got 6 hours of sleep instead of his usual 12. He simply sighs deeply and yawns loudly as they walk. Tina glares at him and looks over at him.
Once they got to school Danny waves, “I’m this way so I’ll see you later.” He walks away heading for the homeroom when he was stopped by a teacher. This teacher was tall kind of big but had an arrogant look on his face. He had combed back and was a real pretty boy. Danny glares up at him, “can I help you sir?” The teacher smirks, “I’m Mr. Simons and I’m your new home room teacher…. I heard you were some kind of profiling whiz kid or something…. You don’t seem too impressive to me though.” Danny sighs and then he saw a glimpse of what appears to be lipstick on his collar and noticed his jacket was unbuttoned and that his hair was wet…. He then grins a bit, “Well how about we go ask the female students about this?” Mr. Simons looked a bit nervous and eyes the student, “what do you mean?” Danny smirks a bit, “well you just combed your hair recently and your jacket is a mess… The biggest thing is the lipstick smear on your collar…. I suggest you get your priorities straight and quit harassing me before I report this!” The instructor balled his hands into fists, “how dare you! Those are very outrageous accusations!” Danny glares, “want me to prove them wrong? Why don’t we go to the dean and talk about it!?” The instructor growls but looks away, “I’ll let you have your way this time!” Danny smirks ab it, “I suggest you lay off the new students before you regret the actions.” Danny then walks into the home room and finds a seat in the back.
As the teacher begins the class Danny was looking off to the side sighing and thinking about what games he should play when he got home. Danny was then caught off guard by a chalk piece hitting him in the side of the head and looks up to see Mr. Simons glaring at him and he simply laughed a bit as he started to pay attention and took interest in the part about the academy taking note of all the achievements they would gain while being in this school. Danny nods his head taking in as much as he could and then the class bell rang and he stood up and made his way out of the class room.
As he made his way to the next class which was crime solving and report writing which is something Danny despises. He flops down sighing, “crap I hope this shit will be done and over with soon enough.” It was then that an alarm went off and it turns out that this school sends out the top notch students to go help police solve cases. It was then that Danny heard his name called and he looked up, “what?” Everyone was in awe that he was chosen to go out and he slowly stands and sighs, “Fine I’ll go, as long as I get out of doing this.” He says as he shoves his hands in his pockets and starts walking out of the room.
As he gets to the loading dock there were 7 others that were there as well loading guns and getting ready. Danny walks to a locker and pulls out a gun as well unsure of what he should do next he heard a laugh behind him. When he looks back he saw a woman with long red hair blue eyes standing there. She was around Danny’s height and weight around 150 pounds. She gave Danny a smile, “first time I take it?” Danny nods his head and laughed nervously as he looked at her. She grabs the holster and puts it on his belt and looks at him, “I’m Krystal it’s nice to meet you.” Danny waves to her, “I’m Danny Blaze…I have a question, are we allowed to carry fire arms without a license? She giggles lightly yes we are, since we’re all registered here now we all have license to carry a fire arm. He nods his head, “I’ve fired these before just never had to shoot at someone before. She nods her head and looks at him, ‘you’ll be okay don’t worry it’s probably just another suicide.” Danny nods his head and felt a little better about the situation.
As they go to the company van they all hop in and start getting ready to head to the crime scene and Danny was watching intently out the window. He sighs a bit and stretches his arms out and cracks his knuckles and sighs a bit.
After 20 minutes of driving the van comes to a sudden stop and the group see caution tape over a door way and Danny hops out rubbing his chin as he immediately starts scanning the area. He suddenly stops and that’s when notices something and Krystal looks over, “Danny what is it?” Danny looks at her, “I have to check something out go on ahead I’ll only be a minute.” Krystal nods and the rest head inside as Danny walks over to the alley way that was across from the crime scene. He kneels down looking around, “hmm this is the logical point I’d use to get away… Although…” He looks upward and notices a fire escape connected to the building next to him. He jerks the ladder down and starts to climb upward the building itself was about 8 stories tall and once he reached the roof he looks around. As he starts exploring he heard a noise behind the roof door and draws his gun. He holds it up and has a firm hold on the handle and his finger wasn’t on the trigger but right over it so he didn’t pull the by mistake.
As he opens the door he saw someone running downstairs and he quickly follows suit moving quickly. He was gaining ground but as he got closer the figure turned and drew a pistol. Danny quickly stopped and fell back to dodge the shot that was fired at him and he quickly jerked up to fire but the figure started running again. Danny quickly got to his feet and continued pursuit.
Krystal and the group heard a gunshot and she quickly ran out of the crime scene and she moved to the alley way where Danny was looking to see the fire escape ladder pulled down. She then looked for a door way inside and when she did she saw someone running down the flight of stairs and drew her gun as she hid against the wall and as soon as the figure reached the last stair way she smashed the butt of her gun against the persons face and quickly points her gun at the figure to see it was a male and Danny comes to a stop and saw the male knocked out and holsters his weapon, “well then…. Nice timing.” He says between gasps of breath and she looks at Danny, “you really need to work out more if you’re going to be a detective you know?” He holds up a finger as he catches his breath, “I’ve been playing games all my life give me a break.” He takes in a few deep breaths and then walks over the male and looks for a wallet.
As the male came to Danny was sitting there looking at the ID card, “Robert Damion address 4456 Baltimore Ave….. You want to tell us why you were on the roof?” Robert glares as he goes to move his hands only to find them cuffed and he growls, “I was curious as to what a bunch of cops were doing in my girlfriend’s apartment complex!” Danny arched ab row, “Okay and why were you running when I got to the roof and why the hell did you shoot at me!?” Robert looked away, “I want a lawyer!” Danny sighs and drops the wallet on his lap, “I’d say we let the cops take him in and we get back to the crime scene.” Krystal nods her head and after delivering Robert to the cops to take him in she glares at Danny, “why the hell did you go off on your own!?” Danny stops and looks at her, “what are you so mad for we got a suspect?” She slaps him, “you always call for back up! What if you got killed?! You need to think!” She walks back to the crime scene leaving Danny there rubbing his cheek.
As he walks inside the scene he looks around rubbing his cheek still with now had a red hand print forming on it Danny started scanning the area. He walked to the body and notices it was a female with long blond hair pale white skin probably from blood loss and blue eyes. He puts on some gloves and tilts her head to the side noticing bruised marks on her throat probably from being choked to death. He looks around for any other marks and notices her wrists had what looked like rope burns on them showing she was probably held down and her arms were bound together. He rubs his chin, “hmm these are all obvious though….To simplistic.” He thought to himself.” He then stands up and looks around and arched a brow, “no signs of a struggle so she must of known the person that killed her and that means it could very well be the boyfriend…. Why kill her though? Plus he didn’t know that she was the one that died he was just curious about why the cops were here… BUT that could have just been a cover… Although his body language gave no indication of lying he seemed genuinely worried.” He looks around rubbing his chin, “who else could it be?” He asked himself as he walked over to the desk he noticed a small camera.
He whistled to Krystal as he pulls the camera out and the two start watching it Danny’s eyes widen when he saw that Robert had the female tied to the bed they were having sex and he was choking her out at the same time. Danny covered Krystal’s eyes and she just pushed his hand away, ‘not the first sex film I’ve seen Danny.” She said sarcastically and Danny laughed a bit, “Well something I should know?” He teased and she smacked him playfully then the two watch as Robert started to leave to kill Roberts’s girlfriend… Who would have a motive for this?” Danny looks at her, “isn’t that we’re supposed to figure out?” She smiles, “looks like we have a murder on our hands.” Danny nods his head, “first suspect is Robert.”
As they continue watching the camera they saw another figure walking in and Danny arched a brow, “well this one looks a bit smaller then Robert and not to mention that chest is huge.” Krystal glares, “so you like big breasted psychos huh? I’ll keep that in mind.” Danny looks back at Krystal, “hey now I never said I liked big breasts I was just pointing them out.” Krystal snaps her head back, “kind of hard to miss those Danny! Just shut it and let’s keep watching!” Danny nods and as he goes back to watching his eyes widened as he saw the female pulling out plastic tubes and needles and she begins draining the female of all her blood and Danny instantly turned it off and sets it down, “no wonder she’s so pale she had all her blood drained!” He puts the camera in an evidence bag and walks out of the house rubbing his eyes.
Once they get back to campus they get word that the principle of the school wants to see them and Danny groans, “God damn now what?” He hangs his stuff up and walks with Krystal heading to the office and when they walk in they see him sitting there and Danny walks over and sits down in front of the desk and Krystal sits right next to him and Danny crosses his arms and looks at the Mr. Simmons.
As they sit with his arms crossed over his chest he begins to look around, “so what’s this about Mr. Simons?” The principle looks at him, “I hear you two figured out about a murder case?” They both nod their heads and the principle looks at them, “you know there’s a rule that says the detective that starts the case has to finish it and since you two are the ones that figured it out and since you’re both detectives in training you get to run the investigation…. I have faith you both will do us proud so get to it.” They both look confused but nod their heads, “yes sir we’ll do our best.” They turn and walk out of the office and Krystal looks at him, “looks like we’re working together until this case is over huh?” Danny nods his head and they head to the work room to begin and read the case files.
As they were reviewing the case files Danny noticed something odd about the victim and looked over at Krystal, “hey check this out.” Krystal looks over and glances at one of the pictures and notices the initials E.D. Danny looks at her, “you got any idea what that would mean?” Krystal shakes her head and sits down thinking and rubs her chin, “I have no idea it could mean anything you know?” Danny nods and leans against the back of his chair and sighs looking up at the ceiling rubbing his chin. He then looks back at the file, “let’s see here she drained around 65 % of the woman’s blood….. What would she do with all that blood?” He rubs his temples thinking and that’s when he narrows his eyes, “wait a minute…. Krystal…. What’s blood to a human?” She looks at Danny confused, “Uhhh it could be life force?” Danny shakes his head, “no it starts with an E.” She rubs her chin, “Wait Essence!?” Danny nods, “bingo… It’s our very Essence….. Now what would a person with a mentally unstable mind do with Essence?” She rubs her chin, “wait you don’t mean…. Oh my god!” Danny nods his head and looks at the initials and narrows his eyes, “it appears our suspect is calling herself Essence Devourer.”
After they report to the principle on what they had found out Mr. Simmons rubs his chin nodding his head, “I see so she’s drinking blood is she?” Danny nods with his hands behind his back, “yes sir and we think she’ll be striking again soon.” Mr. Simmons nods his head as he stands looking out the window, “I want you to catch this suspect as soon as possible.” Danny nods as he and Krystal walk back out of the office and Danny looks at her, “let’s get this shit over with shall we?” Krystal nods and the two head back to the room and Danny starts scanning the pictures slowly. He sighs rubbing his eyes and stands up slowly after studying the pictures and files for over 3 hours with Krystal and he sighs standing up, “dammit… This is growing frustrating!” Krystal moves beside him, “let’s call it a night Danny don’t want to over work your body.” Danny rubs his face and nods his head, “Very well I’ll head out then.” He stands and starts to make his way back to his house and sighs.
As he walks inside he throws his bag onto the seat and walks back to the couch and flops down and begins to play his video games. He sits there watching intently as he plays not caring about anything at all. He plays intently not paying much attention to anything until his brother Chris walks inside, “Danny you’re home late tonight everything okay?” Danny looks back at him, “not really, I just had a real bad day.” Chris walks over and sits down next to Danny, “Did something happen Danny?” Danny looks at his brother, “I actually got put on a real rough case…. The suspect is real psycho… I can’t say anymore because I might get into trouble, but she’s crazy man I never knew anyone like this could exist but……. I am actually afraid of what she could do…” Danny sighs and stands up turning off his game and looks back at Chris, “I’m going to bed I’ll see you tomorrow.” He then heads upstairs and lays down and Chris looked up at his brother worried.
The next morning Danny awoke and walks downstairs to see Tina was standing in the living room and Danny arched a brow, “Tina? What are you doing here?” Tina hugs him and whispers, “it’s okay Danny I know about the case they gave you and I’m sorry.” Danny blushed a bit, “Tina…. It’s okay I’ll be fine… I will get through it so don’t worry about me okay?” He put on a smile and grabs his bag to head out, “so should we get going we’re going to be late.” Tina nods her head and walks out with him.
Once they got to school Krystal met up with him and Danny looks back at Tina, “I’ll see you later Tina I have to get this done….” He smiles at her, “don’t worry I’ll be out with the rest of the school tonight.” Tina bites her lip and nods her head gently. Danny smiles and walks inside after he goes inside Krystal gave Tina a glare as she turned to walk away Krystal watched Tina walk away and then turns before walking away to head inside with Danny.
As they look over the reports again Danny rubs his eyes, “Okay let’s look this over again… We know that this killer drains the blood to supposedly keep her young or something along those lines right?” Krystal nods her head and kicks her feet up, “We also know that she’s targeting a certain type of women and it’s also women that aren’t faithful to their lovers.” Danny nods his head and sighs rubbing his temples gently and leans back sighing deeply, “I can’t seem to figure this out.” He drops the file down and rubs his eyes, “Why is it this case has me stumped?” He lays his head back, “where is this suspect?” He looks at Krystal with a stumped look and she just smiled, “Don’t worry we’ll get her.” Danny nods and smiles a bit, “alright well let’s figure this out shall we?” She grins and nods her head as she walks over and sits back down.
They worked all through the day going through the files looking over pictures of the crime scene and that’s when they got the call that there was another killing last night. They move out quickly and begin to rush towards the crime scene at full speed. Once they get to the scene they begin to investigate and look for anything suspicious or out of place. Danny kneels down and that’s when he noticed a hand print and that’s when he whistles to the forensic team to come get it, “finally a break in this case…. Was hoping she’d slip up now we’ll hopefully figure out who she is and then all there is after that is to go get her. Krystal gave a light smirk as she crossed her arms, “well guess I have no choice but to take action now… I must get rid of them now…. He will be all mine…. No one will get in my way…”
That night after everyone walked home Krystal pulls out her knives and slides them in a belt and wrapped it around her waist and pulls a coat on and walks out of the building. She rushed out of her apartment and looked at a paper that had Tina’s address as well as Danny’s address. She smirks and walked to Tina’s house and begins to pick the lock and slithers her way inside. She drew out two of her surgical knives and as she moves upstairs and first moves into her parents’ house and quickly slits her mothers’ throat and stabs another right her fathers’ neck quickly taking both their lives instantly. She then steps out of the room and sneaks into Tina’s room and saw she was brushing her hair. She stands behind Tina and draws two knives and that’s when Tina noticed her from the mirror she was sitting in front of and quickly stood but it was too late Krystal was already on top of her and slams Tina into the mirror and tosses her across the room. Tina slams into the wall and Krystal walks over and grabs Tina by her hair and leans down whispering to her, “before you die I want you to know… Danny shall be mine…” She then puts the knife to her neck and quickly slits her throat and watches as the life drains from Tina and then lets Tina’s head drop into the puddle of blood and smirks walking out of the house.
Danny was on the couch playing his games while Chris was walking upstairs and that’s when he noticed the window was open and saw a woman standing in Danny’s room sniffing his pillow. Chris glared, “who are you?” He asked and that’s when Krystal draws two knives and throw’s one at Chris sticking it into his arm and caused him to hit the wall screaming out. Danny hears the scream and quickly stands and rushes upstairs only to see Chris lying in a puddle of blood and he saw Krystal standing over his body. Danny’s eyes widen, “nooo.. Krystal… Why!” She grins a bone chilling grin, “This is so I can have you as mine and only mine.” Danny glared and charges at her in a blind rage with tears stinging his eyes, “you bitch I’ll kill you!!” She quickly dodges his attacks and leaps out the window laughing as she runs away. Danny runs outside and looks for any sign of her and when he saw that she was gone he fell to his knees and screams out in a furious rage with tears streaming down his cheeks. Sirens were heard probably from a neighbor calling 911 from all the screams that could be heard from inside. It was then that Danny heard that about Tina being killed and he felt his world being split apart from both of the most important people in his life being taken away.
He skipped going to classes for the next few days to lay in bed his eyes red and his heart shattered from the last few days. It wasn’t until the end of the month he heard knocking on the door and when the door shot opened a woman walked inside and stomped upstairs. She kicks open the door to Danny’s bedroom and when Danny looked up saw Mrs. Thai standing over his bed and he arched a brow, “Mrs. Thai? What is it?” He asked as he sat up only to get a fierce slap delivered to his right cheek so hard it sent him rolling off the bed. He shot up and growled, “what the hell!?”He shouts as he rubs his cheek slowly, “what’s your problem!?” She glared, “You’re pathetic! Are you going to sit here and mop around?!” Danny looked away, “I have no reason to do any of this…” Another slap came to his left cheek making him hit the wall rubbing his cheek, “you think mopping around is going to make Tina happy or your younger brother!?” Danny growls, “what should I do?! Huh!? Tell me!! I have nothing left! My best friend and my brother are gone!” Thai glared, “why not become a great detective and catch the person who did it! Bring her to justice so she can’t kill anyone else’s brother or sister or family! How’s that?” Danny’s eyes widen a bit, “W.. What? But… I can’t catch her… She’s smarter than I am…. I didn’t even know she was in our school…. I should of noticed.” Thai rubs her eyes, “please detectives make mistakes…. You’re not perfect and no one will be….. The only way is to learn from that mistake and move on…” Danny looks down and nods his head, “very well then I will make sure to never make that sort of mistake again.” Danny walks to his closet and grabs his outfit and looks at her, “I’ll see you at school.”
Scene 2
Danny’s Big Decision
Year 2 rolls around and Danny was walking up to the school yard of the academy. He was moving towards the homeroom and stops when he sees Mr. Simmons standing there with his arms crossed. Danny glared a bit, “can I help you?” Mr. Simmons touches his shoulder, “I’m sorry for the loss of Tina and your brother….. I hope you catch Krystal and bring her to get the justice she deserves…..” He walks away leaving Danny in shock that the one teacher he didn’t like actually said what he did. He looks back and gives Mr. Simmons a bow, “I shall do so thank you.”
He walks into his home room class only to hear whispers about how Tina and Chris died and he rubs his eyes, “great now I get to deal with rumors.” He whispers and walks passed everyone to sit in the back seat and close his eyes as he leans back and sighs while waiting for the class to begin. As soon as the bell rang he watches as Mr. Simmons walks in and begins his lecture.
As the lecture went on Blaze found he was lost in his own thought as to what he should do and how difficult it was going to be to track down and bring down Krystal. He then looked out the window and he saw that it was beginning to rain down. He then heard thunder and saw lightning and that’s when he heard an announcement calling for him and 4 other students to go look at another murder. Blaze looks up and slowly gets to his feet and moves towards the changing rooms.
As he arrives he notices that they were 3 second years that were suiting up and Blaze was shocked that no seniors were there this time. He just shrugs it off and pulls his holsters over his shoulders and then grabs his jacket and pulls it on over his body. As he starts to make his way to the vehicles one of the students stops him, “Hey… Um I was curious… How do these runs usually turn out?” Blaze looks back at him and crosses his arms, “they usually turn out to be suicides but every once in a while we run into a murder…. Just remember what you’re taught and use your head.” The student nods once and they move to the vehicles and head out.
Once they arrive on the crime scene thankfully the main part was inside a 2 story house. Blaze makes his way into the scene and looks around. He looks at the 3 second years and whistles, “Hey…. I want you three to go outside and find any evidence that shows what kind of death this is.” The students nod and Blaze heads inside to check the body.
As Blaze moves inside he looks around at the house and noticed that it was a well-kept house. He then moves to go look at the body which was in the kitchen which was covered in blood… He thought to himself, ‘what a shame those are marble counter tops and now they are covered in blood.” He then goes to the corps and his eyes widen when he saw that the victim was a student at their school and he wondered why anyone would want a student at their school dead. He checks for the name and when he finds the student ID he quickly grabs his cell and calls the Dean, “Yes sir this is Danny….” He describes the situation and afterwards he nods his head, “Yes sir..” He sighs hanging up the phone and looks at the detectives, “We’ll handle this killer…. The victim belongs to our school.” The detectives nod and whistle for their crew to leave the area.
Danny looks back at the students, “Okay I’ll need your names since we’re working this case.” The one on the right with short blond hair nods and keeps his dark blue eyes straight ahead, “I’m Riaz Grioth pleasure to meet you sir.” Danny waves him off, “Don’t call me sir.” Riaz nods, “Yes sir….” Blaze glares a bit and turns to the next, “You what’s your name.” The female moves her long red hair from her face revealing her gorgeous brown eyes, “I’m Stacey… Nice to meet you.” She winks at him and Blaze blushes a bit quickly moving to the last student who looked nervous, “Umm I’m uhh Bob Williams.” Blaze arched a brow, “You seem nervous just relax and remember what you’re taught got it?” Bob nods his head and that’s when Blaze motions for them to gather evidence and sighs, “Here we go again.” He thought and sighs as he heads back inside to wait for the M.E.
While waiting Blaze decides he’ll take a look around and noticed that this wasn’t even the students’ house and he arched a brow, “What was he doing here?” He thought and started walking through a bedroom and it was then that the closet door shot open and a well-built figure shoulder charged Blaze into a nearby wall and started to punch his side over and over. Blaze growls and attempts to elbow drop the males back but the male threw him right into a nearby wall and then runs over and nails Blaze in the face knocking him down. The figure then bolts towards the window and jumps out it then sprints off.
Stacey and Riaz run inside hearing the commotion and they had their guns drawn and notice Blaze slowly getting to his feet spitting out some blood. He gets to his feet rubbing his jaw, “what you waiting for get after him!” He shouts as he draws his own gun and leaps out the window and the three begin chasing after the suspect.
Blaze sprints through yard after yard with Riaz and Stacey hot on his heels and Blaze finally comes to a stop panting hard, “Dammit!” He kicks a fence finally accepting the fact they had lost the suspect and begin to make their way back to the crime scene.
Bob had decided to wait at the crime scene for the M.E. To arrive and was taking pictures of the scene. He stops when he thought he heard a noise and slowly draws his pistol and starts to look things over. He moves into the living room his hands were shaky and his heart was beating hard from being so nervous. As he moves into the kitchen another figure moves behind him and jerks his head back and puts a knife to his throat and slits it quickly. Bob drops his gun and starts to spit up blood from his mouth as he holds his throat falling to his knees. Blood was spilling heavily from the wound and his body began to go cold and he fell over dead in a matter of seconds.
Blaze and the others came back inside and the figure was already long gone before they even realized what was going on. Blaze narrows his eyes, “Bob?!” He shouts out and after a few seconds Blaze drew his gun again and made his way through the house with Riaz and Stacey behind him. Blaze motions for Riaz to move to the right side of the room and they quickly but silently move to the kitchen and see Bobs lifeless body and Blaze’s eyes widen and rushes to his side, “BOB!?”
The M.E. Arrives a few minutes later and Blaze explains what had happened and they take both bodies back to the school building. When Blaze gets back he had thrown his stuff back into his locker and moves out of the room heading to the classroom when he was called into the dean’s office.
As Blaze walks inside the office he had his arms crossed over his chest and looking at him, “What is it?” The dean looks at him, “We’re sorry for the loss of Bob and we’ll make sure to give him a proper funeral but you can’t blame yourself for this.” Blaze glares a bit, “Yeah well someone has to take the blame and it might as well be me sir.” He turns walking out of the office and shoves his hands in his pockets as he makes his way back to class.
He sits down and rubs his eyes sighing, “What a major pain in the ass.” He thought and begins to finish up the work like it was nothing at all. As he stands up the whole class was watching him as he walks and turns in the papers and walks out of the class room to go start working on the case.
When he got to the case room he saw Riaz and Stacey sitting there and they look back and grin, “He there!” Blaze glared, “You two know you don’t have to work on this with me right?” They both shrug, “Yeah so we’re in this with you to the end so let’s get to work.” Blaze laughs ab it shaking his head and walks into the room sitting down and they begin to discuss the case.
Meanwhile somewhere across town
The two figures walk inside a small house and they look at a woman who was sitting on the black leather couch with a smirk, “Hello boys did you do as you were told?” They nodded and the bigger of the two steps forward, “although I did have to slug that Blaze fellow he found me and wouldn’t let me get away.” She walks over and quickly draws her surgical knife and slits his throat, “You dare hurt my Blaze!” She looks at the smaller one who falls back, “Sorry Krystal I never hurt him I just killed one of the guys that was working the case with him!” She grins, “Well then I guess we should see who’s left then huh?” The male nods while she was giving off this evil smirk, “Well Gray let’s go!” She walks out and he slowly follows her unsure of whether or not she was going to kill him or not.
She slides into the passenger side of a sports car in the drive way and looks at Grey, “go get James and put him in the trunk!” Grey nods his head and quickly runs back inside and begins to drag James body out of the house then pops the trunk and throws his body inside and slams it shut. Grey slides into the driver’s seat and looks at her after starting up the car, “Where we goin?” She looks at him, “Well we’re going to pay a visit to the detective’s school of course silly!” He nods and pulls out the drive way and quickly drives off.
Night time hit and inside the school Blaze was leaning back in the seat wondering what the motive was for these two to kill one of the students and then kill Bob. He rubs his chin slowly and sits up looking at the evidence, “he was killed outside than brought inside and laid there.” He looks down at the picture of Bob, “Than they killed Bob shortly afterwards…. Slit his throat and left to bleed out…. Why?” He rubs his eyes and sighs deeply, “What is going on?” He thought then looks up at the other two and laughs a bit since they had fallen asleep and he stood and rubs his eyes as he walks outside.
He walks outside to get some air and notices a sports car parked their and he arched his eyes, “what’s this doing here?” He thought and walks over and notices a blood trail leading from the trunk and he quickly looks around and notices a trail leading back inside and Blaze quickly runs inside. His heart was racing and he could feel something was wrong in the pit of his stomach, “No I won’t lose anymore teammates!” He says to himself as he reaches the lockers and grabs his gun then quickly turns holding it up. He starts to make his way back to the case room and when he kicks it open he notices that the two were fine and sighs with relief.
As Blaze turns he notices a shadow running down the hall and he looks back at the other two and kicks their seats, “Get up!” He shouts and when they get up Blaze looks back at the hall, “Listen up… You two need to go get armed… Someone is here.” Blaze then rushes down the hall as Stacey and Riaz rush out to get their guns.
As Blaze rushes towards where he saw the shadow run off to he stops behind a wall and peeks out to make sure it was clear. He then quickly moves out gun held in front of him and starts clearing each room he saw. As he reaches the last room of the hallway he opens the door and that’s when his eyes widen when he saw Krystal standing over one of the dead suspects. Blaze glares, “What are you doing here?!” She grins, “I brought you a present my love.” Blaze growls, “I don’t want anything from you!” He goes to aim his gun and she snaps her fingers and that’s when he felt a sharp pain on the back of his head and he begins to fall forward unconscious.
She smirks and walks over to Grey who had caught Blaze and set him down and that’s when she jerked his head back and slits his throat and then throws him aside and kneels down to Blaze, “At last we are reunited my love….” She grabs his cuffs from his pocket and drags him towards the back of the room and cuffed him to a pipe.
When Blaze comes to he noticed he was cuffed and he tugs on the pipe and looks up to see Krystal and glares, “What are you doing!?” She walks over and straddles Blaze, “I’m here to take you away… Look I brought you a gift.” She points to the bodies of the two suspects he was chasing after and Blaze’s eyes widen, “Why do I get the feeling they were working for you?” She chuckles a bit, “Oh come on why would I kill my former class mates?” Blaze smirks a bit, “Probably because your psycho…. Are you two going to help me out here?” He looks at the door to see Stacey and Riaz standing there and Riaz laughs, “I don’t know Blaze you look pretty content.” They walk inside and push her over holding a gun to her head. They start cuffing her and pull her up as Blaze was freed and he starts calling it in.
As they sit and wait for the police Blaze was glaring at her, “so what’s your game Krystal?” She grins, “Why whatever do you mean my love? You all caught me fair and square.” Blaze glares, “Bull shit this isn’t your style… You’re more of a behind the strings killer so why are you being so direct?” She grins seductively, “You know me so well my love.” She then shoots up and throws a surgical knife into Blazes shoulder which sent him falling back and afterwards drew two more from under her top and as Riaz was attempting to draw his gun she already had a knife into his gut and turns to Stacey glaring at her, “There is only one woman that was meant to be with him and she’s not you!” She grabs Stacey’s neck and looks over at Blaze, “Don’t worry she’ll be dealt with shortly… Oh and that knife in your shoulder is laced with a powerful sedative so don’t try to move. She then glares at Stacey, “Time to deal with you… Afterwards I will take my love away from here.” She than proceeds to push Stacey into the next room which afterwards all he could hear was screaming.
After a couple hours Blaze slowly gets to his feet he noticed a swarm of locals and detectives all over the school. He was outside and his shoulder was wrapped and his body was weak. He made his way to another ambulance where he saw Riaz and he growls as balls his hands into fists ignoring the sharp pain in his right shoulder. He then notices the M.E. Taking another body out and he quickly moves over pushing them away and slides the blanket off. He saw Stacey laying there drained of nearly all her blood and Blaze stumbles back and looks away, “Dammit!” He falls to his knees and that’s when Mrs. Thai was walking out to see Blaze on his knees tears burning his cheeks, “Dammit dammit dammit!!!” He shouts punching the dirt and she quickly rushes over and stops him and pulls him into a hug, “it’s going to be okay Danny it’ll be okay!” He was in tears as he felt her arms around him and couldn’t bring himself to push away. He simply just fell apart crying now having lost another comrade and it just broke his heart completely tears staining his cheeks.
After a while Blaze and Mrs. Thai were on a bench outside the school and Blaze had his head bent down and was looking at the ground. Mrs. Thai sat there then looks over at him, “Blaze you’re nearly done with your school and then you’ll be able to work anywhere in the states as law enforcement… Have you decided where you want to go?” Blaze shakes his head, “I had requests from the FBI and the DEA but I told them all no… I want to be in a place where I can make a difference not some place that chooses where I go and which case is more important than the other.” Mrs. Thai smiles, “I see well I’m sure you’ll figure it out and make your brother and Tina proud as well as Riaz, Stacey, and Bob.” Blaze nods his head, “Bet your ass I will.” He stands and looks at her, “Thank you Mrs. Thai I appreciate the help.” He turns and walks away as Mrs. Thai looks at him and smiles, “He’ll be an amazing detective…. Skill is in a league of its own.” She thought to herself and stands walking away as well.
After two months of thinking and finishing all his work Blaze walks into the Deans office and looks at him, “I decided where I’m going to be working at.” The Dean gave him a smile, “Oh where will this be?” Blaze closes his eyes a bit and then takes in a deep breath and looks at him, “I’ll work as a detective personally for the school.” The both stop and look at him and the Dean arched a brow, “what do you mean Blaze?” Blaze crosses his arms over his chest, “I think we should open our own precinct…. Think about it we could do so many great things with our students rather than sending them off to other types of law enforcement… We could be so great.” The Dean had been waiting for someone to urge this on for some time but never thought that it would be this particular student since he lacked motivation but now he could see that the death of all his friends and family has spurred him into action. As Blaze stands there waiting for an answer he noticed Mrs. Thai was smiling at him and he smiles a bit in return. Afterwards the Dean stands and nods, “I have been waiting for a student with your skill say such a thing and I agree we should make a precinct for our students to join…. We shall do just that Blaze.
After they talked about the details Blaze walks from the office and smiles a bit as he balls his hands into fists, “Finally something real is happening!” He thought and his excitement grew and he looks out the window and whispers, “I will be coming for you Krystal… Just watch.” He walks down the hall and begins to think about how the details would work out.
As he walks outside he saw a few students whispering about him and he swallows a bit and sighs, “I am getting sick and tired of these damn rumors that are floating around…” He glared a bit and sighs knowing nothing that he did would be able to stop them now he would just have to bare it until the precinct was ready for him to join in.
Once he got home he looked around at the empty house and remembered his Brother Chris smiling at him and he rubs his eyes feeling his heart breaking. He leans back against the wall holding his chest as tears stream down his cheeks, “I’m sorry Chris I failed you and I failed Tina and the rest of them to… I don’t deserve to be happy right now… I’m so sorry!” He slides down the wall and leans onto his knees as tears drip down his cheeks and onto his pants sighing deeply.
After an hour he heard a knock and when he opens it he saw Krystal standing there and he went for his gun but she spins and kicks him in the chest sending him falling back and his gun slides from his hand. She grins as she kicks the gun away and Blaze watches as it slides under the window seal and attempts to stand. She smirks as Blaze walks over and starts to throw punch after punch but she dodges and blocks them and spins around kicking him upside his head and then grabs him by his hair and jerks him down and kisses him. Blaze’s eyes widen and he pushed off her, “What are you doing!?” She smirks, “I’m here to take away your pain my love… Let me help you.” Blaze glares and runs at him but she grabs a metal pot and smacks him upside the head sending Blaze rolling over the kitchen table and lands on the ground.
As he grabs his gun from under the window she steps on his hand and grabs it and throws it outside and pulls Blaze up to his feet and smirks, “you’re a good fighter but even the most intelligent men can’t fight without some sort of training love… I was trained in Taekwondo and several other types of Martial Arts.” She slams her palm into his gut knocking the wind right out of his lungs then whispers, “Time to say good bye my love” She whispers and takes one of her knives from his belt and thrusts it into his gut and his eyes widen as she whispers, “Isn’t this better? Death is the ultimate way of me to show you my love…. It will release you from your pain and your heart ache.” She stabs him again and again then lets Blaze’s body fall over and she smiles taking in a deep breath and walks out the back door and runs off.
A few minutes later Blaze coughs up some blood crawling over to the door and that’s when Mrs. Thai came inside and saw him. She gasped and quickly ran to his side after calling 911, “Yes my name is Katy Thai I need an ambulance and 8843 Elma Drive!” She heard a voice reply and was growing annoyed already, “Get your ass over here we have a male with 3 stab wounds to the stomach! Get here now!” She hangs up the phone and puts pressure on his stomach trying to stop the bleeding before it got to severe.
Blaze was looking up at her and laughs a bit, “It was her… She… She is really insane.” He whispers blood pouring from his mouth as he started feeling cold and his body was shivering as he starts to feel real tired and his eyes were beginning to close. Katy was attempting CPR once his eyes closed, “Danny no!!” She lays her head on his chest and that’s when the ambulance pulls in and the Medic’s rush inside and start to lift him onto the gurney and wheel him out as fast as they can and slide him into the ambulance. They rip his shirt open and Katy slides into the ambulance with him holding his hand.
She hadn’t realized that her feelings had grown for him but she couldn’t very well show it right now since he was still a student so she had to keep them at bay. She looked away as they started to rip his shirt open and begin to try to bring him back. The paddle him a few times and that’s when they hear the sound of his pulse coming back and that’s when Katy sighs with relief and looks down at him with a small smile.
A few months later
Blaze was slowly walking back into the school and holding his stomach which was still very sore. As he walks into the Deans office and that’s when the Dean smile standing, “welcome back Danny…. I got us a building and I’d like you to go take a look and see what you think…. We already have 10 other graduates who are willing to join up with you Blaze and they are top of their classes.” Blaze smiles and nods, “Great now let’s get this show on the road. We already have our first investigation don’t we?” The Dean nods in agreement, “Indeed we are to hunt down and capture Krystal and bring her to justice by any means necessary.” Danny drops his bag and that’s when the Dean moves over to him, “Might want to change I’d hate for your men to see you in your school uniform.” Danny laughs, “Yeah bad first impression.” He moves to the bathroom and a few minutes move by when he comes out wearing a dark blue outfit with a badge on his waist saying D.O.P (Department of Profilers.) Blaze walks out to the main lobby of the school and that’s when he looks around at over a dozen others wearing the same uniform and Blaze smirks a bit, “Shall we go?” They all nod and head outside to begin the next step of their journey after graduation.
Detective Blaze(Josh Richardson)
Detective Danny Blaze
Scene 1: In School
This story starts off with a young teenager named Danny Blaze and his younger brother Chris Blaze. The two may have been born as twins but they couldn't be more different if you tried. Danny was always the unmotivated one and was only fixed on his video games. The fact that Danny was a super genius when it came to investigating crimes and profiling only made matters worse for Chris because Chris took care of him all the time. Chris wasn't as smart as Danny was but he was always working hard at school and at home. Blaze was barely passing his high school classes let alone working to get a job. Anyways let’s get to the story and it starts at Chris and Danny’s house while their parents are away for work and the two stay at the house by themselves.
An alarm goes off and it's around 1 PM and Chris was shouting at him, "Danny get your ass out of bed it's 1 pm and we have to head to school!" Danny was a red headed male with spikey hair forest green eyes and stood around 5' 10" and weighed around 189 pounds. He was mostly muscle which was kind of shocking since he didn't do much of anything but playing games.
As Chris walks upstairs he shouts out, "Danny get up!" He then kicks at the door loud and hard shouting for him to wake up. Danny groans and starts rubbing his eyes as he slowly sits up in his bed and stretches his arms, "what is it Chris!?" He shouts loudly and yawns as he gets to his feet. He had bed hair badly and was droopy eyed but he didn't care in the slightest. He just pulls on his blue jeans and then tugs his black shirt down over his head and then pulls his white socks on and opens his door. As he does a young male stood there he was identical to him. Danny gives Chris a glare, "what is it?" He says tiredly as he rubs his eyes again. Chris gave him a glare, "it's 1 in the afternoon and you're still in bed... You skipped school again didn't you!?" Danny just waved him off and walks down stairs, "you nag like a woman Chris just leaves me alone... I am the older brother after all." He walks to the TV and switches on his counsel.
As he sits there playing his games he hears a knock at the door and looks back, "Chris answer that will ya!?" Chris glares as he walks downstairs, "you were right there you lazy son of a.... Never mind!" He growls and walks to the door. As he opens it a woman the same age as the two stood there with a smile on her face. She had long black hair blue eyes and stood around 5' 8" and was about 145 pounds. She smiles, "hi Chris.... Is Danny here?" She asked cheerfully and Chris just sighs, "He’s in the same place he always is." The girl sighed, "Playing those damn games still huh?" Chris simply nods his head and looks back, "yo Danny Tina is here!" Danny looks back and then just looks back at the T.V. Going back to his games.
As Tina comes and sits down next to him she smiles, "so what you up to today Danny? Any plans other than playing video games?" Danny looks at her with an arched brow, "not really." He says then goes back to his game. Tina gives a soft sigh and looks around, "you know from what I gather you only play these RPG's because they are the only thing that can challenge your mind... What if I was to say that I know something that could challenge you much better?" Danny looks up at her, "really?" Tina gives a grin and nods her head, "yes it's a school that teaches you how to become the best detective possible... It's the most famous one in these states and they happen to be getting ready for entrance exams tomorrow morning you interested?" Danny looks at her, "you think it'll be a challenge for me?" Tina nods her head, "yes but you'll have to work hard." Danny slowly stands up and crosses his arms, "I highly doubt I'll need to put in much effort."
As he walks towards the stairs Tina looks at him, "where you going?" Danny looks at her, "I'll need to get to bed early if I want to get up in time for it." Tina laughs and stands up, "very well them, I'll meet you here and walk you to the exam hall." Danny just waves at her and heads back to his bedroom and goes back to sleep.
The next morning Danny wakes up yawning still looking quite tired and that's when the door flies open and Tina came flying inside his room. Danny's eyes shot right open and before he knew it he was flying out the window. Tina screams out the window, "you dumbass we're running late move it!" Danny looks up, "crazy bitch you kicked me out of the bedroom!!" Tina glares at him and walks down stairs sighing a bit, “what a dummy.” She whispers and as she comes down stairs Danny was walking back upward.
After he got done changing his clothes he walks back down and the two make their way towards the school building. As he walks up to the building Tina stops and smiles, “this is where I leave you to your own thing I’ll see you after.” She waves and walks away and Danny just simply sighs and walks inside his arms crossed over his chest as he does.
As he walks inside he looks around seeing people doing last minute studying and others looking like they are praying to god for help on the test. Danny just shrugs and flops down in a nearby chair and just closes his eyes waiting for the Procter to arrive and start the test. Danny opens his eyes and keeps scanning around noticing everyone seemed on edge. Danny just shrugs it off and looks at the ceiling thinking to his self and stretches out his arms.
A few minutes pass by before the Procter came in and claps her hands, “everyone put your stuff away and get ready for the test! I am Mrs. Thai and I will be your Procter! Danny opens one eye and sighs as he looks at the middle aged woman with long brown hair brown eyes and she was wearing a red dress that was an inch down passed her knees and matching heels. She had on black rimmed glasses and was looking around at all the takers and her eyes fixed on Danny. She thought to herself, “This boy seems either lazy or confident either way he looks like he’d be a handful if he passes… We’ll have to see won’t we?” She walks over and hands out the 3 page test and as soon as Danny got the test he looked through it and arched a brow, “are you serious?” He thought and he just rubs his chin, “some of these are quite tough….. Tina wasn’t lying when she said this school might challenge me.” As soon as the Procter handed the tests out she looks at the class, “begin!”
Danny didn’t waste much time before he started writing out the answers to the questions. He was actually excited about this test since he hadn’t had a real challenge for a while now and he wanted to see how far he could actually push himself. The first page was pretty simple for him to finish and so was most of the second page. The third page was a bit more difficult but he was able to finish it with a good probability that he got them all right. The final page was the tricky one and he grins a bit when he got to the scenario that he had to show his skill.
“There have been 4 killings in the past 4 weeks and they all appear to be the work of a serial killer…. The bodies were laid out like a cross and their blood was drained from puncture wounds on their wrists and ankles. They were laid out in the living room right in front of a mantle of Jesus Christ… Give us a profile on the suspect and how you would proceed in catching the suspect in question.”
Danny smirks a bit as he reads the scenario and rubs his chin, “hmmm well first I’d give the profile… The suspect is a Christian fanatic that is punishing people for their sins such as lusting after someone who’s not their spouse or even taking the lords name in vain… So I’d go and check the background of anyone that might have been close to the suspect that might have been abused by a charge orphanage or maybe someone who’s been in and out of foster care that was ran by Christians.” Danny nods his head, “then I’d run a check to see if they have had any psychological trauma and if that checked out I’d bring them in and if that doesn’t work out I’d start put a unit on each suspect and have them follow them and see where that leads me.”
Danny then turns in the paper and sits back down kicking up his feet and closes his eyes waiting for everyone else to finish and after he was done the Procter then dismisses them and Danny heads back outside. Tina watched him coming out and smiles, “how did it go?” Danny stops next to her, “you were right that was pretty challenging but I think I did fairly well.” He then walks away and Tina follows him and giggles, “You know if I didn’t know any better I’d say you had some fun in there.” Danny just waved it off and kept walking but in reality he really did have fun it was a rush that he hadn’t had in a long while. He looked at the sky, “States Detective School also known as S.D.S… I might like it here.” He thought to himself and stopped in front of his house and looked at Tina, “thanks...” He walks inside and closes the door and lays down sleeping.
The next morning Danny came to and stretched out his arms looking at the ceiling when he heard a phone call. Chris answers the phone, “hello? Yes he lives here… Wait what!? Yes one second!” He rushed to the bedroom and the door flies open and Danny shoots up, “what is it?” Chris shoves the phone into his chest and walks back out without saying a word. Blaze puts the phone to his ear, “hello? Yes I’m Danny Blaze.” A woman’s voice could be heard, “Danny I am Mrs. Thai, I was the Procter for the exam you took yesterday… We’re calling you because of your test and we wanted to tell you that you’re the first one to take this test that has ever scored a 100%... We need you to come down and have a chat with us so we can discuss your future plans.” Danny nods, “I’ll be there in a half hour.” He slowly stands and pulls on his same old blue jeans and black shirt. He then pulls on his socks and black boots, while stretching his arms out he walks to the door and grabs his wallet then heads out and waves to Chris, “be back later.”
While walking to the school he saw Tina waiting down the road for him with a smile on her face, ‘heard you got a call… What’s the verdict?” Danny walks passed her, “I got a 100 on it…” She froze in place and stood there with wide eyes, “I knew he was good but… He was actually able to get a 100% on the test? That’s… never been done before as far as I know….” She looks back and runs to catch up to him, “hey wait up!” Danny looks back, “I’m heading to the school to talk to the Procter you want to come?” Tina nods her head, “yes!” Danny laughed slightly, “very well let’s go then.” She nods quickly and follows behind him wanting to know more about what was going to happen.
As soon as the two got to the school Danny looked up at it with a curious look, “so you go here right?” Tina nods, “starting the same time you will when you get in.” He nods his head and the two walk inside and head to the office of the dean and Danny knocks on the door. He hears an older male’s voice telling him to come inside and Danny walks in with Tina to see a mid-40’s male sitting in a seat with Mrs. Thai next to him with her hands folded in front of her. Tina stood next to Danny her arms crossed over her chest with a curious look as well. The Dean stands and fixed his black dress coat and looks at the two, “I am Dean Crain and I must say that I’m impressed by your score and am willing to give you a full ride if you are willing to come here and put your full effort into your studies.” Tina looked at Danny who smirked a bit, “what’s the shortest time someone has graduated from here?” The Dean rubs his chin, ‘4 years if I remember right.” Danny smirks a bit, “I’ll do it in 2” He turns and walks out of the office followed by Tina who just shook her head laughing, “you got a boost of energy it seems.” Danny smirks a bit, “I’m going to enjoy this.” He looks at the ceiling and grins, “finally something worth getting motivated for.” He looks back at Tina, “get ready for a whole new look on me.” He walked out of the building with Tina who had a shocked look on her face.
Danny sighs as he walks outside wearing a nice dress shirt with a white jacket pulled over it. The jacket had gold trim on it with a triangle on it that had S.D.S stitched over it, he also had on blue dress pants and black dress shoes. Danny was walking along with Tina by his side who had a similar outfit on accept a blue skirt instead of pants. Danny had a bag thrown over his shoulder and had a tired look in his eyes. He wanted to be sure he got in as much gaming in before the semester started and he didn’t keep track of time and stayed late that night playing his last RPG. So he only got 6 hours of sleep instead of his usual 12. He simply sighs deeply and yawns loudly as they walk. Tina glares at him and looks over at him.
Once they got to school Danny waves, “I’m this way so I’ll see you later.” He walks away heading for the homeroom when he was stopped by a teacher. This teacher was tall kind of big but had an arrogant look on his face. He had combed back and was a real pretty boy. Danny glares up at him, “can I help you sir?” The teacher smirks, “I’m Mr. Simons and I’m your new home room teacher…. I heard you were some kind of profiling whiz kid or something…. You don’t seem too impressive to me though.” Danny sighs and then he saw a glimpse of what appears to be lipstick on his collar and noticed his jacket was unbuttoned and that his hair was wet…. He then grins a bit, “Well how about we go ask the female students about this?” Mr. Simons looked a bit nervous and eyes the student, “what do you mean?” Danny smirks a bit, “well you just combed your hair recently and your jacket is a mess… The biggest thing is the lipstick smear on your collar…. I suggest you get your priorities straight and quit harassing me before I report this!” The instructor balled his hands into fists, “how dare you! Those are very outrageous accusations!” Danny glares, “want me to prove them wrong? Why don’t we go to the dean and talk about it!?” The instructor growls but looks away, “I’ll let you have your way this time!” Danny smirks ab it, “I suggest you lay off the new students before you regret the actions.” Danny then walks into the home room and finds a seat in the back.
As the teacher begins the class Danny was looking off to the side sighing and thinking about what games he should play when he got home. Danny was then caught off guard by a chalk piece hitting him in the side of the head and looks up to see Mr. Simons glaring at him and he simply laughed a bit as he started to pay attention and took interest in the part about the academy taking note of all the achievements they would gain while being in this school. Danny nods his head taking in as much as he could and then the class bell rang and he stood up and made his way out of the class room.
As he made his way to the next class which was crime solving and report writing which is something Danny despises. He flops down sighing, “crap I hope this shit will be done and over with soon enough.” It was then that an alarm went off and it turns out that this school sends out the top notch students to go help police solve cases. It was then that Danny heard his name called and he looked up, “what?” Everyone was in awe that he was chosen to go out and he slowly stands and sighs, “Fine I’ll go, as long as I get out of doing this.” He says as he shoves his hands in his pockets and starts walking out of the room.
As he gets to the loading dock there were 7 others that were there as well loading guns and getting ready. Danny walks to a locker and pulls out a gun as well unsure of what he should do next he heard a laugh behind him. When he looks back he saw a woman with long red hair blue eyes standing there. She was around Danny’s height and weight around 150 pounds. She gave Danny a smile, “first time I take it?” Danny nods his head and laughed nervously as he looked at her. She grabs the holster and puts it on his belt and looks at him, “I’m Krystal it’s nice to meet you.” Danny waves to her, “I’m Danny Blaze…I have a question, are we allowed to carry fire arms without a license? She giggles lightly yes we are, since we’re all registered here now we all have license to carry a fire arm. He nods his head, “I’ve fired these before just never had to shoot at someone before. She nods her head and looks at him, ‘you’ll be okay don’t worry it’s probably just another suicide.” Danny nods his head and felt a little better about the situation.
As they go to the company van they all hop in and start getting ready to head to the crime scene and Danny was watching intently out the window. He sighs a bit and stretches his arms out and cracks his knuckles and sighs a bit.
After 20 minutes of driving the van comes to a sudden stop and the group see caution tape over a door way and Danny hops out rubbing his chin as he immediately starts scanning the area. He suddenly stops and that’s when notices something and Krystal looks over, “Danny what is it?” Danny looks at her, “I have to check something out go on ahead I’ll only be a minute.” Krystal nods and the rest head inside as Danny walks over to the alley way that was across from the crime scene. He kneels down looking around, “hmm this is the logical point I’d use to get away… Although…” He looks upward and notices a fire escape connected to the building next to him. He jerks the ladder down and starts to climb upward the building itself was about 8 stories tall and once he reached the roof he looks around. As he starts exploring he heard a noise behind the roof door and draws his gun. He holds it up and has a firm hold on the handle and his finger wasn’t on the trigger but right over it so he didn’t pull the by mistake.
As he opens the door he saw someone running downstairs and he quickly follows suit moving quickly. He was gaining ground but as he got closer the figure turned and drew a pistol. Danny quickly stopped and fell back to dodge the shot that was fired at him and he quickly jerked up to fire but the figure started running again. Danny quickly got to his feet and continued pursuit.
Krystal and the group heard a gunshot and she quickly ran out of the crime scene and she moved to the alley way where Danny was looking to see the fire escape ladder pulled down. She then looked for a door way inside and when she did she saw someone running down the flight of stairs and drew her gun as she hid against the wall and as soon as the figure reached the last stair way she smashed the butt of her gun against the persons face and quickly points her gun at the figure to see it was a male and Danny comes to a stop and saw the male knocked out and holsters his weapon, “well then…. Nice timing.” He says between gasps of breath and she looks at Danny, “you really need to work out more if you’re going to be a detective you know?” He holds up a finger as he catches his breath, “I’ve been playing games all my life give me a break.” He takes in a few deep breaths and then walks over the male and looks for a wallet.
As the male came to Danny was sitting there looking at the ID card, “Robert Damion address 4456 Baltimore Ave….. You want to tell us why you were on the roof?” Robert glares as he goes to move his hands only to find them cuffed and he growls, “I was curious as to what a bunch of cops were doing in my girlfriend’s apartment complex!” Danny arched ab row, “Okay and why were you running when I got to the roof and why the hell did you shoot at me!?” Robert looked away, “I want a lawyer!” Danny sighs and drops the wallet on his lap, “I’d say we let the cops take him in and we get back to the crime scene.” Krystal nods her head and after delivering Robert to the cops to take him in she glares at Danny, “why the hell did you go off on your own!?” Danny stops and looks at her, “what are you so mad for we got a suspect?” She slaps him, “you always call for back up! What if you got killed?! You need to think!” She walks back to the crime scene leaving Danny there rubbing his cheek.
As he walks inside the scene he looks around rubbing his cheek still with now had a red hand print forming on it Danny started scanning the area. He walked to the body and notices it was a female with long blond hair pale white skin probably from blood loss and blue eyes. He puts on some gloves and tilts her head to the side noticing bruised marks on her throat probably from being choked to death. He looks around for any other marks and notices her wrists had what looked like rope burns on them showing she was probably held down and her arms were bound together. He rubs his chin, “hmm these are all obvious though….To simplistic.” He thought to himself.” He then stands up and looks around and arched a brow, “no signs of a struggle so she must of known the person that killed her and that means it could very well be the boyfriend…. Why kill her though? Plus he didn’t know that she was the one that died he was just curious about why the cops were here… BUT that could have just been a cover… Although his body language gave no indication of lying he seemed genuinely worried.” He looks around rubbing his chin, “who else could it be?” He asked himself as he walked over to the desk he noticed a small camera.
He whistled to Krystal as he pulls the camera out and the two start watching it Danny’s eyes widen when he saw that Robert had the female tied to the bed they were having sex and he was choking her out at the same time. Danny covered Krystal’s eyes and she just pushed his hand away, ‘not the first sex film I’ve seen Danny.” She said sarcastically and Danny laughed a bit, “Well something I should know?” He teased and she smacked him playfully then the two watch as Robert started to leave to kill Roberts’s girlfriend… Who would have a motive for this?” Danny looks at her, “isn’t that we’re supposed to figure out?” She smiles, “looks like we have a murder on our hands.” Danny nods his head, “first suspect is Robert.”
As they continue watching the camera they saw another figure walking in and Danny arched a brow, “well this one looks a bit smaller then Robert and not to mention that chest is huge.” Krystal glares, “so you like big breasted psychos huh? I’ll keep that in mind.” Danny looks back at Krystal, “hey now I never said I liked big breasts I was just pointing them out.” Krystal snaps her head back, “kind of hard to miss those Danny! Just shut it and let’s keep watching!” Danny nods and as he goes back to watching his eyes widened as he saw the female pulling out plastic tubes and needles and she begins draining the female of all her blood and Danny instantly turned it off and sets it down, “no wonder she’s so pale she had all her blood drained!” He puts the camera in an evidence bag and walks out of the house rubbing his eyes.
Once they get back to campus they get word that the principle of the school wants to see them and Danny groans, “God damn now what?” He hangs his stuff up and walks with Krystal heading to the office and when they walk in they see him sitting there and Danny walks over and sits down in front of the desk and Krystal sits right next to him and Danny crosses his arms and looks at the Mr. Simmons.
As they sit with his arms crossed over his chest he begins to look around, “so what’s this about Mr. Simons?” The principle looks at him, “I hear you two figured out about a murder case?” They both nod their heads and the principle looks at them, “you know there’s a rule that says the detective that starts the case has to finish it and since you two are the ones that figured it out and since you’re both detectives in training you get to run the investigation…. I have faith you both will do us proud so get to it.” They both look confused but nod their heads, “yes sir we’ll do our best.” They turn and walk out of the office and Krystal looks at him, “looks like we’re working together until this case is over huh?” Danny nods his head and they head to the work room to begin and read the case files.
As they were reviewing the case files Danny noticed something odd about the victim and looked over at Krystal, “hey check this out.” Krystal looks over and glances at one of the pictures and notices the initials E.D. Danny looks at her, “you got any idea what that would mean?” Krystal shakes her head and sits down thinking and rubs her chin, “I have no idea it could mean anything you know?” Danny nods and leans against the back of his chair and sighs looking up at the ceiling rubbing his chin. He then looks back at the file, “let’s see here she drained around 65 % of the woman’s blood….. What would she do with all that blood?” He rubs his temples thinking and that’s when he narrows his eyes, “wait a minute…. Krystal…. What’s blood to a human?” She looks at Danny confused, “Uhhh it could be life force?” Danny shakes his head, “no it starts with an E.” She rubs her chin, “Wait Essence!?” Danny nods, “bingo… It’s our very Essence….. Now what would a person with a mentally unstable mind do with Essence?” She rubs her chin, “wait you don’t mean…. Oh my god!” Danny nods his head and looks at the initials and narrows his eyes, “it appears our suspect is calling herself Essence Devourer.”
After they report to the principle on what they had found out Mr. Simmons rubs his chin nodding his head, “I see so she’s drinking blood is she?” Danny nods with his hands behind his back, “yes sir and we think she’ll be striking again soon.” Mr. Simmons nods his head as he stands looking out the window, “I want you to catch this suspect as soon as possible.” Danny nods as he and Krystal walk back out of the office and Danny looks at her, “let’s get this shit over with shall we?” Krystal nods and the two head back to the room and Danny starts scanning the pictures slowly. He sighs rubbing his eyes and stands up slowly after studying the pictures and files for over 3 hours with Krystal and he sighs standing up, “dammit… This is growing frustrating!” Krystal moves beside him, “let’s call it a night Danny don’t want to over work your body.” Danny rubs his face and nods his head, “Very well I’ll head out then.” He stands and starts to make his way back to his house and sighs.
As he walks inside he throws his bag onto the seat and walks back to the couch and flops down and begins to play his video games. He sits there watching intently as he plays not caring about anything at all. He plays intently not paying much attention to anything until his brother Chris walks inside, “Danny you’re home late tonight everything okay?” Danny looks back at him, “not really, I just had a real bad day.” Chris walks over and sits down next to Danny, “Did something happen Danny?” Danny looks at his brother, “I actually got put on a real rough case…. The suspect is real psycho… I can’t say anymore because I might get into trouble, but she’s crazy man I never knew anyone like this could exist but……. I am actually afraid of what she could do…” Danny sighs and stands up turning off his game and looks back at Chris, “I’m going to bed I’ll see you tomorrow.” He then heads upstairs and lays down and Chris looked up at his brother worried.
The next morning Danny awoke and walks downstairs to see Tina was standing in the living room and Danny arched a brow, “Tina? What are you doing here?” Tina hugs him and whispers, “it’s okay Danny I know about the case they gave you and I’m sorry.” Danny blushed a bit, “Tina…. It’s okay I’ll be fine… I will get through it so don’t worry about me okay?” He put on a smile and grabs his bag to head out, “so should we get going we’re going to be late.” Tina nods her head and walks out with him.
Once they got to school Krystal met up with him and Danny looks back at Tina, “I’ll see you later Tina I have to get this done….” He smiles at her, “don’t worry I’ll be out with the rest of the school tonight.” Tina bites her lip and nods her head gently. Danny smiles and walks inside after he goes inside Krystal gave Tina a glare as she turned to walk away Krystal watched Tina walk away and then turns before walking away to head inside with Danny.
As they look over the reports again Danny rubs his eyes, “Okay let’s look this over again… We know that this killer drains the blood to supposedly keep her young or something along those lines right?” Krystal nods her head and kicks her feet up, “We also know that she’s targeting a certain type of women and it’s also women that aren’t faithful to their lovers.” Danny nods his head and sighs rubbing his temples gently and leans back sighing deeply, “I can’t seem to figure this out.” He drops the file down and rubs his eyes, “Why is it this case has me stumped?” He lays his head back, “where is this suspect?” He looks at Krystal with a stumped look and she just smiled, “Don’t worry we’ll get her.” Danny nods and smiles a bit, “alright well let’s figure this out shall we?” She grins and nods her head as she walks over and sits back down.
They worked all through the day going through the files looking over pictures of the crime scene and that’s when they got the call that there was another killing last night. They move out quickly and begin to rush towards the crime scene at full speed. Once they get to the scene they begin to investigate and look for anything suspicious or out of place. Danny kneels down and that’s when he noticed a hand print and that’s when he whistles to the forensic team to come get it, “finally a break in this case…. Was hoping she’d slip up now we’ll hopefully figure out who she is and then all there is after that is to go get her. Krystal gave a light smirk as she crossed her arms, “well guess I have no choice but to take action now… I must get rid of them now…. He will be all mine…. No one will get in my way…”
That night after everyone walked home Krystal pulls out her knives and slides them in a belt and wrapped it around her waist and pulls a coat on and walks out of the building. She rushed out of her apartment and looked at a paper that had Tina’s address as well as Danny’s address. She smirks and walked to Tina’s house and begins to pick the lock and slithers her way inside. She drew out two of her surgical knives and as she moves upstairs and first moves into her parents’ house and quickly slits her mothers’ throat and stabs another right her fathers’ neck quickly taking both their lives instantly. She then steps out of the room and sneaks into Tina’s room and saw she was brushing her hair. She stands behind Tina and draws two knives and that’s when Tina noticed her from the mirror she was sitting in front of and quickly stood but it was too late Krystal was already on top of her and slams Tina into the mirror and tosses her across the room. Tina slams into the wall and Krystal walks over and grabs Tina by her hair and leans down whispering to her, “before you die I want you to know… Danny shall be mine…” She then puts the knife to her neck and quickly slits her throat and watches as the life drains from Tina and then lets Tina’s head drop into the puddle of blood and smirks walking out of the house.
Danny was on the couch playing his games while Chris was walking upstairs and that’s when he noticed the window was open and saw a woman standing in Danny’s room sniffing his pillow. Chris glared, “who are you?” He asked and that’s when Krystal draws two knives and throw’s one at Chris sticking it into his arm and caused him to hit the wall screaming out. Danny hears the scream and quickly stands and rushes upstairs only to see Chris lying in a puddle of blood and he saw Krystal standing over his body. Danny’s eyes widen, “nooo.. Krystal… Why!” She grins a bone chilling grin, “This is so I can have you as mine and only mine.” Danny glared and charges at her in a blind rage with tears stinging his eyes, “you bitch I’ll kill you!!” She quickly dodges his attacks and leaps out the window laughing as she runs away. Danny runs outside and looks for any sign of her and when he saw that she was gone he fell to his knees and screams out in a furious rage with tears streaming down his cheeks. Sirens were heard probably from a neighbor calling 911 from all the screams that could be heard from inside. It was then that Danny heard that about Tina being killed and he felt his world being split apart from both of the most important people in his life being taken away.
He skipped going to classes for the next few days to lay in bed his eyes red and his heart shattered from the last few days. It wasn’t until the end of the month he heard knocking on the door and when the door shot opened a woman walked inside and stomped upstairs. She kicks open the door to Danny’s bedroom and when Danny looked up saw Mrs. Thai standing over his bed and he arched a brow, “Mrs. Thai? What is it?” He asked as he sat up only to get a fierce slap delivered to his right cheek so hard it sent him rolling off the bed. He shot up and growled, “what the hell!?”He shouts as he rubs his cheek slowly, “what’s your problem!?” She glared, “You’re pathetic! Are you going to sit here and mop around?!” Danny looked away, “I have no reason to do any of this…” Another slap came to his left cheek making him hit the wall rubbing his cheek, “you think mopping around is going to make Tina happy or your younger brother!?” Danny growls, “what should I do?! Huh!? Tell me!! I have nothing left! My best friend and my brother are gone!” Thai glared, “why not become a great detective and catch the person who did it! Bring her to justice so she can’t kill anyone else’s brother or sister or family! How’s that?” Danny’s eyes widen a bit, “W.. What? But… I can’t catch her… She’s smarter than I am…. I didn’t even know she was in our school…. I should of noticed.” Thai rubs her eyes, “please detectives make mistakes…. You’re not perfect and no one will be….. The only way is to learn from that mistake and move on…” Danny looks down and nods his head, “very well then I will make sure to never make that sort of mistake again.” Danny walks to his closet and grabs his outfit and looks at her, “I’ll see you at school.”
Scene 2
Danny’s Big Decision
Year 2 rolls around and Danny was walking up to the school yard of the academy. He was moving towards the homeroom and stops when he sees Mr. Simmons standing there with his arms crossed. Danny glared a bit, “can I help you?” Mr. Simmons touches his shoulder, “I’m sorry for the loss of Tina and your brother….. I hope you catch Krystal and bring her to get the justice she deserves…..” He walks away leaving Danny in shock that the one teacher he didn’t like actually said what he did. He looks back and gives Mr. Simmons a bow, “I shall do so thank you.”
He walks into his home room class only to hear whispers about how Tina and Chris died and he rubs his eyes, “great now I get to deal with rumors.” He whispers and walks passed everyone to sit in the back seat and close his eyes as he leans back and sighs while waiting for the class to begin. As soon as the bell rang he watches as Mr. Simmons walks in and begins his lecture.
As the lecture went on Blaze found he was lost in his own thought as to what he should do and how difficult it was going to be to track down and bring down Krystal. He then looked out the window and he saw that it was beginning to rain down. He then heard thunder and saw lightning and that’s when he heard an announcement calling for him and 4 other students to go look at another murder. Blaze looks up and slowly gets to his feet and moves towards the changing rooms.
As he arrives he notices that they were 3 second years that were suiting up and Blaze was shocked that no seniors were there this time. He just shrugs it off and pulls his holsters over his shoulders and then grabs his jacket and pulls it on over his body. As he starts to make his way to the vehicles one of the students stops him, “Hey… Um I was curious… How do these runs usually turn out?” Blaze looks back at him and crosses his arms, “they usually turn out to be suicides but every once in a while we run into a murder…. Just remember what you’re taught and use your head.” The student nods once and they move to the vehicles and head out.
Once they arrive on the crime scene thankfully the main part was inside a 2 story house. Blaze makes his way into the scene and looks around. He looks at the 3 second years and whistles, “Hey…. I want you three to go outside and find any evidence that shows what kind of death this is.” The students nod and Blaze heads inside to check the body.
As Blaze moves inside he looks around at the house and noticed that it was a well-kept house. He then moves to go look at the body which was in the kitchen which was covered in blood… He thought to himself, ‘what a shame those are marble counter tops and now they are covered in blood.” He then goes to the corps and his eyes widen when he saw that the victim was a student at their school and he wondered why anyone would want a student at their school dead. He checks for the name and when he finds the student ID he quickly grabs his cell and calls the Dean, “Yes sir this is Danny….” He describes the situation and afterwards he nods his head, “Yes sir..” He sighs hanging up the phone and looks at the detectives, “We’ll handle this killer…. The victim belongs to our school.” The detectives nod and whistle for their crew to leave the area.
Danny looks back at the students, “Okay I’ll need your names since we’re working this case.” The one on the right with short blond hair nods and keeps his dark blue eyes straight ahead, “I’m Riaz Grioth pleasure to meet you sir.” Danny waves him off, “Don’t call me sir.” Riaz nods, “Yes sir….” Blaze glares a bit and turns to the next, “You what’s your name.” The female moves her long red hair from her face revealing her gorgeous brown eyes, “I’m Stacey… Nice to meet you.” She winks at him and Blaze blushes a bit quickly moving to the last student who looked nervous, “Umm I’m uhh Bob Williams.” Blaze arched a brow, “You seem nervous just relax and remember what you’re taught got it?” Bob nods his head and that’s when Blaze motions for them to gather evidence and sighs, “Here we go again.” He thought and sighs as he heads back inside to wait for the M.E.
While waiting Blaze decides he’ll take a look around and noticed that this wasn’t even the students’ house and he arched a brow, “What was he doing here?” He thought and started walking through a bedroom and it was then that the closet door shot open and a well-built figure shoulder charged Blaze into a nearby wall and started to punch his side over and over. Blaze growls and attempts to elbow drop the males back but the male threw him right into a nearby wall and then runs over and nails Blaze in the face knocking him down. The figure then bolts towards the window and jumps out it then sprints off.
Stacey and Riaz run inside hearing the commotion and they had their guns drawn and notice Blaze slowly getting to his feet spitting out some blood. He gets to his feet rubbing his jaw, “what you waiting for get after him!” He shouts as he draws his own gun and leaps out the window and the three begin chasing after the suspect.
Blaze sprints through yard after yard with Riaz and Stacey hot on his heels and Blaze finally comes to a stop panting hard, “Dammit!” He kicks a fence finally accepting the fact they had lost the suspect and begin to make their way back to the crime scene.
Bob had decided to wait at the crime scene for the M.E. To arrive and was taking pictures of the scene. He stops when he thought he heard a noise and slowly draws his pistol and starts to look things over. He moves into the living room his hands were shaky and his heart was beating hard from being so nervous. As he moves into the kitchen another figure moves behind him and jerks his head back and puts a knife to his throat and slits it quickly. Bob drops his gun and starts to spit up blood from his mouth as he holds his throat falling to his knees. Blood was spilling heavily from the wound and his body began to go cold and he fell over dead in a matter of seconds.
Blaze and the others came back inside and the figure was already long gone before they even realized what was going on. Blaze narrows his eyes, “Bob?!” He shouts out and after a few seconds Blaze drew his gun again and made his way through the house with Riaz and Stacey behind him. Blaze motions for Riaz to move to the right side of the room and they quickly but silently move to the kitchen and see Bobs lifeless body and Blaze’s eyes widen and rushes to his side, “BOB!?”
The M.E. Arrives a few minutes later and Blaze explains what had happened and they take both bodies back to the school building. When Blaze gets back he had thrown his stuff back into his locker and moves out of the room heading to the classroom when he was called into the dean’s office.
As Blaze walks inside the office he had his arms crossed over his chest and looking at him, “What is it?” The dean looks at him, “We’re sorry for the loss of Bob and we’ll make sure to give him a proper funeral but you can’t blame yourself for this.” Blaze glares a bit, “Yeah well someone has to take the blame and it might as well be me sir.” He turns walking out of the office and shoves his hands in his pockets as he makes his way back to class.
He sits down and rubs his eyes sighing, “What a major pain in the ass.” He thought and begins to finish up the work like it was nothing at all. As he stands up the whole class was watching him as he walks and turns in the papers and walks out of the class room to go start working on the case.
When he got to the case room he saw Riaz and Stacey sitting there and they look back and grin, “He there!” Blaze glared, “You two know you don’t have to work on this with me right?” They both shrug, “Yeah so we’re in this with you to the end so let’s get to work.” Blaze laughs ab it shaking his head and walks into the room sitting down and they begin to discuss the case.
Meanwhile somewhere across town
The two figures walk inside a small house and they look at a woman who was sitting on the black leather couch with a smirk, “Hello boys did you do as you were told?” They nodded and the bigger of the two steps forward, “although I did have to slug that Blaze fellow he found me and wouldn’t let me get away.” She walks over and quickly draws her surgical knife and slits his throat, “You dare hurt my Blaze!” She looks at the smaller one who falls back, “Sorry Krystal I never hurt him I just killed one of the guys that was working the case with him!” She grins, “Well then I guess we should see who’s left then huh?” The male nods while she was giving off this evil smirk, “Well Gray let’s go!” She walks out and he slowly follows her unsure of whether or not she was going to kill him or not.
She slides into the passenger side of a sports car in the drive way and looks at Grey, “go get James and put him in the trunk!” Grey nods his head and quickly runs back inside and begins to drag James body out of the house then pops the trunk and throws his body inside and slams it shut. Grey slides into the driver’s seat and looks at her after starting up the car, “Where we goin?” She looks at him, “Well we’re going to pay a visit to the detective’s school of course silly!” He nods and pulls out the drive way and quickly drives off.
Night time hit and inside the school Blaze was leaning back in the seat wondering what the motive was for these two to kill one of the students and then kill Bob. He rubs his chin slowly and sits up looking at the evidence, “he was killed outside than brought inside and laid there.” He looks down at the picture of Bob, “Than they killed Bob shortly afterwards…. Slit his throat and left to bleed out…. Why?” He rubs his eyes and sighs deeply, “What is going on?” He thought then looks up at the other two and laughs a bit since they had fallen asleep and he stood and rubs his eyes as he walks outside.
He walks outside to get some air and notices a sports car parked their and he arched his eyes, “what’s this doing here?” He thought and walks over and notices a blood trail leading from the trunk and he quickly looks around and notices a trail leading back inside and Blaze quickly runs inside. His heart was racing and he could feel something was wrong in the pit of his stomach, “No I won’t lose anymore teammates!” He says to himself as he reaches the lockers and grabs his gun then quickly turns holding it up. He starts to make his way back to the case room and when he kicks it open he notices that the two were fine and sighs with relief.
As Blaze turns he notices a shadow running down the hall and he looks back at the other two and kicks their seats, “Get up!” He shouts and when they get up Blaze looks back at the hall, “Listen up… You two need to go get armed… Someone is here.” Blaze then rushes down the hall as Stacey and Riaz rush out to get their guns.
As Blaze rushes towards where he saw the shadow run off to he stops behind a wall and peeks out to make sure it was clear. He then quickly moves out gun held in front of him and starts clearing each room he saw. As he reaches the last room of the hallway he opens the door and that’s when his eyes widen when he saw Krystal standing over one of the dead suspects. Blaze glares, “What are you doing here?!” She grins, “I brought you a present my love.” Blaze growls, “I don’t want anything from you!” He goes to aim his gun and she snaps her fingers and that’s when he felt a sharp pain on the back of his head and he begins to fall forward unconscious.
She smirks and walks over to Grey who had caught Blaze and set him down and that’s when she jerked his head back and slits his throat and then throws him aside and kneels down to Blaze, “At last we are reunited my love….” She grabs his cuffs from his pocket and drags him towards the back of the room and cuffed him to a pipe.
When Blaze comes to he noticed he was cuffed and he tugs on the pipe and looks up to see Krystal and glares, “What are you doing!?” She walks over and straddles Blaze, “I’m here to take you away… Look I brought you a gift.” She points to the bodies of the two suspects he was chasing after and Blaze’s eyes widen, “Why do I get the feeling they were working for you?” She chuckles a bit, “Oh come on why would I kill my former class mates?” Blaze smirks a bit, “Probably because your psycho…. Are you two going to help me out here?” He looks at the door to see Stacey and Riaz standing there and Riaz laughs, “I don’t know Blaze you look pretty content.” They walk inside and push her over holding a gun to her head. They start cuffing her and pull her up as Blaze was freed and he starts calling it in.
As they sit and wait for the police Blaze was glaring at her, “so what’s your game Krystal?” She grins, “Why whatever do you mean my love? You all caught me fair and square.” Blaze glares, “Bull shit this isn’t your style… You’re more of a behind the strings killer so why are you being so direct?” She grins seductively, “You know me so well my love.” She then shoots up and throws a surgical knife into Blazes shoulder which sent him falling back and afterwards drew two more from under her top and as Riaz was attempting to draw his gun she already had a knife into his gut and turns to Stacey glaring at her, “There is only one woman that was meant to be with him and she’s not you!” She grabs Stacey’s neck and looks over at Blaze, “Don’t worry she’ll be dealt with shortly… Oh and that knife in your shoulder is laced with a powerful sedative so don’t try to move. She then glares at Stacey, “Time to deal with you… Afterwards I will take my love away from here.” She than proceeds to push Stacey into the next room which afterwards all he could hear was screaming.
After a couple hours Blaze slowly gets to his feet he noticed a swarm of locals and detectives all over the school. He was outside and his shoulder was wrapped and his body was weak. He made his way to another ambulance where he saw Riaz and he growls as balls his hands into fists ignoring the sharp pain in his right shoulder. He then notices the M.E. Taking another body out and he quickly moves over pushing them away and slides the blanket off. He saw Stacey laying there drained of nearly all her blood and Blaze stumbles back and looks away, “Dammit!” He falls to his knees and that’s when Mrs. Thai was walking out to see Blaze on his knees tears burning his cheeks, “Dammit dammit dammit!!!” He shouts punching the dirt and she quickly rushes over and stops him and pulls him into a hug, “it’s going to be okay Danny it’ll be okay!” He was in tears as he felt her arms around him and couldn’t bring himself to push away. He simply just fell apart crying now having lost another comrade and it just broke his heart completely tears staining his cheeks.
After a while Blaze and Mrs. Thai were on a bench outside the school and Blaze had his head bent down and was looking at the ground. Mrs. Thai sat there then looks over at him, “Blaze you’re nearly done with your school and then you’ll be able to work anywhere in the states as law enforcement… Have you decided where you want to go?” Blaze shakes his head, “I had requests from the FBI and the DEA but I told them all no… I want to be in a place where I can make a difference not some place that chooses where I go and which case is more important than the other.” Mrs. Thai smiles, “I see well I’m sure you’ll figure it out and make your brother and Tina proud as well as Riaz, Stacey, and Bob.” Blaze nods his head, “Bet your ass I will.” He stands and looks at her, “Thank you Mrs. Thai I appreciate the help.” He turns and walks away as Mrs. Thai looks at him and smiles, “He’ll be an amazing detective…. Skill is in a league of its own.” She thought to herself and stands walking away as well.
After two months of thinking and finishing all his work Blaze walks into the Deans office and looks at him, “I decided where I’m going to be working at.” The Dean gave him a smile, “Oh where will this be?” Blaze closes his eyes a bit and then takes in a deep breath and looks at him, “I’ll work as a detective personally for the school.” The both stop and look at him and the Dean arched a brow, “what do you mean Blaze?” Blaze crosses his arms over his chest, “I think we should open our own precinct…. Think about it we could do so many great things with our students rather than sending them off to other types of law enforcement… We could be so great.” The Dean had been waiting for someone to urge this on for some time but never thought that it would be this particular student since he lacked motivation but now he could see that the death of all his friends and family has spurred him into action. As Blaze stands there waiting for an answer he noticed Mrs. Thai was smiling at him and he smiles a bit in return. Afterwards the Dean stands and nods, “I have been waiting for a student with your skill say such a thing and I agree we should make a precinct for our students to join…. We shall do just that Blaze.
After they talked about the details Blaze walks from the office and smiles a bit as he balls his hands into fists, “Finally something real is happening!” He thought and his excitement grew and he looks out the window and whispers, “I will be coming for you Krystal… Just watch.” He walks down the hall and begins to think about how the details would work out.
As he walks outside he saw a few students whispering about him and he swallows a bit and sighs, “I am getting sick and tired of these damn rumors that are floating around…” He glared a bit and sighs knowing nothing that he did would be able to stop them now he would just have to bare it until the precinct was ready for him to join in.
Once he got home he looked around at the empty house and remembered his Brother Chris smiling at him and he rubs his eyes feeling his heart breaking. He leans back against the wall holding his chest as tears stream down his cheeks, “I’m sorry Chris I failed you and I failed Tina and the rest of them to… I don’t deserve to be happy right now… I’m so sorry!” He slides down the wall and leans onto his knees as tears drip down his cheeks and onto his pants sighing deeply.
After an hour he heard a knock and when he opens it he saw Krystal standing there and he went for his gun but she spins and kicks him in the chest sending him falling back and his gun slides from his hand. She grins as she kicks the gun away and Blaze watches as it slides under the window seal and attempts to stand. She smirks as Blaze walks over and starts to throw punch after punch but she dodges and blocks them and spins around kicking him upside his head and then grabs him by his hair and jerks him down and kisses him. Blaze’s eyes widen and he pushed off her, “What are you doing!?” She smirks, “I’m here to take away your pain my love… Let me help you.” Blaze glares and runs at him but she grabs a metal pot and smacks him upside the head sending Blaze rolling over the kitchen table and lands on the ground.
As he grabs his gun from under the window she steps on his hand and grabs it and throws it outside and pulls Blaze up to his feet and smirks, “you’re a good fighter but even the most intelligent men can’t fight without some sort of training love… I was trained in Taekwondo and several other types of Martial Arts.” She slams her palm into his gut knocking the wind right out of his lungs then whispers, “Time to say good bye my love” She whispers and takes one of her knives from his belt and thrusts it into his gut and his eyes widen as she whispers, “Isn’t this better? Death is the ultimate way of me to show you my love…. It will release you from your pain and your heart ache.” She stabs him again and again then lets Blaze’s body fall over and she smiles taking in a deep breath and walks out the back door and runs off.
A few minutes later Blaze coughs up some blood crawling over to the door and that’s when Mrs. Thai came inside and saw him. She gasped and quickly ran to his side after calling 911, “Yes my name is Katy Thai I need an ambulance and 8843 Elma Drive!” She heard a voice reply and was growing annoyed already, “Get your ass over here we have a male with 3 stab wounds to the stomach! Get here now!” She hangs up the phone and puts pressure on his stomach trying to stop the bleeding before it got to severe.
Blaze was looking up at her and laughs a bit, “It was her… She… She is really insane.” He whispers blood pouring from his mouth as he started feeling cold and his body was shivering as he starts to feel real tired and his eyes were beginning to close. Katy was attempting CPR once his eyes closed, “Danny no!!” She lays her head on his chest and that’s when the ambulance pulls in and the Medic’s rush inside and start to lift him onto the gurney and wheel him out as fast as they can and slide him into the ambulance. They rip his shirt open and Katy slides into the ambulance with him holding his hand.
She hadn’t realized that her feelings had grown for him but she couldn’t very well show it right now since he was still a student so she had to keep them at bay. She looked away as they started to rip his shirt open and begin to try to bring him back. The paddle him a few times and that’s when they hear the sound of his pulse coming back and that’s when Katy sighs with relief and looks down at him with a small smile.
A few months later
Blaze was slowly walking back into the school and holding his stomach which was still very sore. As he walks into the Deans office and that’s when the Dean smile standing, “welcome back Danny…. I got us a building and I’d like you to go take a look and see what you think…. We already have 10 other graduates who are willing to join up with you Blaze and they are top of their classes.” Blaze smiles and nods, “Great now let’s get this show on the road. We already have our first investigation don’t we?” The Dean nods in agreement, “Indeed we are to hunt down and capture Krystal and bring her to justice by any means necessary.” Danny drops his bag and that’s when the Dean moves over to him, “Might want to change I’d hate for your men to see you in your school uniform.” Danny laughs, “Yeah bad first impression.” He moves to the bathroom and a few minutes move by when he comes out wearing a dark blue outfit with a badge on his waist saying D.O.P (Department of Profilers.) Blaze walks out to the main lobby of the school and that’s when he looks around at over a dozen others wearing the same uniform and Blaze smirks a bit, “Shall we go?” They all nod and head outside to begin the next step of their journey after graduation.
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