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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Creatures & Monsters
- Published: 01/19/2016
In ancient times within the ruined temples of Japan there existed an order of elite Japanese warriors known only as the Nobu. These warriors were unlike any other and by any standard were regarded as the very best. The Nobu were however destroyed by an evil dark Kitsune spirit known as a Nogitsune
Our story begins in the year 2015 when the memory of the Nobu had become nothing more than a mere legend. Kiyoshi was an average girl who went day by day thinking that there was nothing more to her life than everything she had already gained, until that all changed forever.
Years ago a group of people who were descendants of the original order of The Nobu began searching for individuals of extraordinary character who met the incredibly specific requirements of a Nobu warrior. Strength, courage and honour were the three fundamental characteristics that one would have to possess and to her surprise Kiyoshi was recruited into the Nobu order.
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She arrived at the Ryuu Temple at noon. The firey embers of the sun illuminated the area and danced off the temple walls in a way she had never seen before. The colours felt so familiar and while starring in awe at the giant Dragon tower before her, the layout of her new surroundings became engraved into her mind and for the first time in her life she felt like she belonged. A tall figure with jet black hair and piercing green eyes approached Kiyoshi, his name was Hiroku. Hiroku explained all that Kiyoshi needed to know at that time. "The Order of The Nobu were the greatest warriors of ancient Japan and to this day are unmatched in every respect. The Nobu always work in pairs, a male and female perfectly suited for one another that work to become an extension to each other and have a connection like no other. The Dragon tower in front of us consists of different levels and each level belongs to a pair of Shinobi," he explained. Hiroku and Kiyoshi were the next pair of Shinobi warriors. They trained while the days became weeks and the weeks became months until, eventually Hiroku and Kiyoshi became fully fledged Nobu warriors taking their rightful place in the third highest level of the Dragon tower. However, things are never quite as they seem and Kiyoshi was about to learn that. During his explanation of what the Nobu were Hiroku had failed to mention one very important detail : the Nogitsune. (A Kitsune is a Japanese fox spirit with magical and powerful abilities. A dark/void Kitsune spirit or Nogitsune is known for causing chaos and distruction which it then feeds on.) Shortly after completing their training Hiroku and Kiyoshi discovered that their master Mitsuko had been taken over by a Nogitsune and had trained the Shinobi, learning all their strengths but more importantly their weaknesses. This would make this dark Kitsune spirit not only an obscenely powerful adversary but also one that would be impossible to destroy. However, it was also learned that although they were intensely trained they were not trained to their full potential giving them a glimmer of hope by bringing the prospect of defeating their ancient enemy just a little closer. Hiroku and Kiyoshi trained long and hard with the other Shinobi when finally the spirit possessed Master Mitsuko launched an attack like nothing our young warriors had ever seen before. Mitsuko tore through the remaining Shinobi and destroyed the temple with a supernatural strength. The temple lay in ruins as a cloud of dust suffocated the debris, the only thing that could be seen were the orange eyes of the Nogitsune. "Nobu scum, not a worthy adversary left amoung Japan's so called greatest warriors!" the Nogitsune thought to itself. Within the heart of the ruins the Dragon tower stood firm and from the highest level came a booming voice with a raspy, serious and unmistakable tone, "Moshe Moshe Kitsune." During his studies Hiroku had learned that language is not a strength of the Fox spirit and that the repetition of words could confuse them.In ancient times within the ruined temples of Japan there existed an order of elite Japanese warriors known only as the Nobu. These warriors were unlike any other and by any standard were regarded as the very best. The Nobu were however destroyed by an evil dark Kitsune spirit known as a Nogitsune
Our story begins in the year 2015 when the memory of the Nobu had become nothing more than a mere legend. Kiyoshi was an average girl who went day by day thinking that there was nothing more to her life than everything she had already gained, until that all changed forever.
Years ago a group of people who were descendants of the original order of The Nobu began searching for individuals of extraordinary character who met the incredibly specific requirements of a Nobu warrior. Strength, courage and honour were the three fundamental characteristics that one would have to possess and to her surprise Kiyoshi was recruited into the Nobu order.
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She arrived at the Ryuu Temple at noon. The firey embers of the sun illuminated the area and danced off the temple walls in a way she had never seen before. The colours felt so familiar and while starring in awe at the giant Dragon tower before her, the layout of her new surroundings became engraved into her mind and for the first time in her life she felt like she belonged. A tall figure with jet black hair and piercing green eyes approached Kiyoshi, his name was Hiroku. Hiroku explained all that Kiyoshi needed to know at that time. "The Order of The Nobu were the greatest warriors of ancient Japan and to this day are unmatched in every respect. The Nobu always work in pairs, a male and female perfectly suited for one another that work to become an extension to each other and have a connection like no other. The Dragon tower in front of us consists of different levels and each level belongs to a pair of Shinobi," he explained. Hiroku and Kiyoshi were the next pair of Shinobi warriors. They trained while the days became weeks and the weeks became months until, eventually Hiroku and Kiyoshi became fully fledged Nobu warriors taking their rightful place in the third highest level of the Dragon tower. However, things are never quite as they seem and Kiyoshi was about to learn that. During his explanation of what the Nobu were Hiroku had failed to mention one very important detail : the Nogitsune. (A Kitsune is a Japanese fox spirit with magical and powerful abilities. A dark/void Kitsune spirit or Nogitsune is known for causing chaos and distruction which it then feeds on.) Shortly after completing their training Hiroku and Kiyoshi discovered that their master Mitsuko had been taken over by a Nogitsune and had trained the Shinobi, learning all their strengths but more importantly their weaknesses. This would make this dark Kitsune spirit not only an obscenely powerful adversary but also one that would be impossible to destroy. However, it was also learned that although they were intensely trained they were not trained to their full potential giving them a glimmer of hope by bringing the prospect of defeating their ancient enemy just a little closer. Hiroku and Kiyoshi trained long and hard with the other Shinobi when finally the spirit possessed Master Mitsuko launched an attack like nothing our young warriors had ever seen before. Mitsuko tore through the remaining Shinobi and destroyed the temple with a supernatural strength. The temple lay in ruins as a cloud of dust suffocated the debris, the only thing that could be seen were the orange eyes of the Nogitsune. "Nobu scum, not a worthy adversary left amoung Japan's so called greatest warriors!" the Nogitsune thought to itself. Within the heart of the ruins the Dragon tower stood firm and from the highest level came a booming voice with a raspy, serious and unmistakable tone, "Moshe Moshe Kitsune." During his studies Hiroku had learned that language is not a strength of the Fox spirit and that the repetition of words could confuse them. Hiroku used this to his advantage by greeting the spirit twice and with the Nogitsune temporarily stunned the Shinobi pair attacked. It was a ruthless battle that seemed hopeless as the Nogitsune was unimaginably powerful. The Shinobi than tapped into their shadow Dragon ninjitsu fighting style. They fought bravely and it almost appeared effortless. The tranquillity that once filled the air with sounds of the raging waterfall and florescent colours of nature all around was nowhere to be found. Here there was only the metallic smell of blood that stained the concrete floors. Hiroku and Kiyoshi seemed to fight as if they were in an infinite dance, finishing each other's attacks as if they were one. Two bodies functioning from one mind not even the slightest heartbeat was out of sink. Nogitsune quickly realised if he was to defeat these young Shinobi he would have to sever the sacred connection they shared. He struck Kiyoshi freezing every nerve and muscle in her body, paralyzing her. Pain rushed through Hiroku's body as if he himself had been struck with the lethal blow leaving him not only completely helpless but also vulnerable. Nogitsune struck him repeatedly tearing through his armour. His skin punctured from the rapid blows and blood gushed out of him. Hiroku fell to his knees as gravity plummeted his limp body onto the temple ruins. In his mind he realised he had done all he could do and awaited the final strike when Kiyoshi's lifeless body fell into his sight. His stayed locked on her with a deadly focus as life rushed back into his void eyes. His love for Kiyoshi awakened something inside of him that he could not explain. His green eyes lit up like emeralds in sunlight, he had unlocked the Ryuu or Dragon spirit within himself. Nogitsune lined up and delivered his final blow but to his surprise Hiroku caught his hand in mid air and broke it right off. The rest of the fight flew by in minutes and the strength Hiroku now possessed was far greater than that of the Nogitsune, he was destroyed and would never be a threat again. Hiroku stood taking in all that had happened as his new Dragon aura glowed red around him like a blazing fire. He walked slowly toward Kiyoshi with powerful and determined steps. He stood over her, arm outstretched to her heart, and his red aura flowed from the palm of his hand like a stream into Kiyoshi bringing her back to life. Hiroku and Kiyoshi were the last two remaining Nobu warriors and it now rested upon them to rebuild the greatest order of fighters the world has ever known.
Order of the Nobu(Priyanka Pakari)
In ancient times within the ruined temples of Japan there existed an order of elite Japanese warriors known only as the Nobu. These warriors were unlike any other and by any standard were regarded as the very best. The Nobu were however destroyed by an evil dark Kitsune spirit known as a Nogitsune
Our story begins in the year 2015 when the memory of the Nobu had become nothing more than a mere legend. Kiyoshi was an average girl who went day by day thinking that there was nothing more to her life than everything she had already gained, until that all changed forever.
Years ago a group of people who were descendants of the original order of The Nobu began searching for individuals of extraordinary character who met the incredibly specific requirements of a Nobu warrior. Strength, courage and honour were the three fundamental characteristics that one would have to possess and to her surprise Kiyoshi was recruited into the Nobu order.
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She arrived at the Ryuu Temple at noon. The firey embers of the sun illuminated the area and danced off the temple walls in a way she had never seen before. The colours felt so familiar and while starring in awe at the giant Dragon tower before her, the layout of her new surroundings became engraved into her mind and for the first time in her life she felt like she belonged. A tall figure with jet black hair and piercing green eyes approached Kiyoshi, his name was Hiroku. Hiroku explained all that Kiyoshi needed to know at that time. "The Order of The Nobu were the greatest warriors of ancient Japan and to this day are unmatched in every respect. The Nobu always work in pairs, a male and female perfectly suited for one another that work to become an extension to each other and have a connection like no other. The Dragon tower in front of us consists of different levels and each level belongs to a pair of Shinobi," he explained. Hiroku and Kiyoshi were the next pair of Shinobi warriors. They trained while the days became weeks and the weeks became months until, eventually Hiroku and Kiyoshi became fully fledged Nobu warriors taking their rightful place in the third highest level of the Dragon tower. However, things are never quite as they seem and Kiyoshi was about to learn that. During his explanation of what the Nobu were Hiroku had failed to mention one very important detail : the Nogitsune. (A Kitsune is a Japanese fox spirit with magical and powerful abilities. A dark/void Kitsune spirit or Nogitsune is known for causing chaos and distruction which it then feeds on.) Shortly after completing their training Hiroku and Kiyoshi discovered that their master Mitsuko had been taken over by a Nogitsune and had trained the Shinobi, learning all their strengths but more importantly their weaknesses. This would make this dark Kitsune spirit not only an obscenely powerful adversary but also one that would be impossible to destroy. However, it was also learned that although they were intensely trained they were not trained to their full potential giving them a glimmer of hope by bringing the prospect of defeating their ancient enemy just a little closer. Hiroku and Kiyoshi trained long and hard with the other Shinobi when finally the spirit possessed Master Mitsuko launched an attack like nothing our young warriors had ever seen before. Mitsuko tore through the remaining Shinobi and destroyed the temple with a supernatural strength. The temple lay in ruins as a cloud of dust suffocated the debris, the only thing that could be seen were the orange eyes of the Nogitsune. "Nobu scum, not a worthy adversary left amoung Japan's so called greatest warriors!" the Nogitsune thought to itself. Within the heart of the ruins the Dragon tower stood firm and from the highest level came a booming voice with a raspy, serious and unmistakable tone, "Moshe Moshe Kitsune." During his studies Hiroku had learned that language is not a strength of the Fox spirit and that the repetition of words could confuse them.In ancient times within the ruined temples of Japan there existed an order of elite Japanese warriors known only as the Nobu. These warriors were unlike any other and by any standard were regarded as the very best. The Nobu were however destroyed by an evil dark Kitsune spirit known as a Nogitsune
Our story begins in the year 2015 when the memory of the Nobu had become nothing more than a mere legend. Kiyoshi was an average girl who went day by day thinking that there was nothing more to her life than everything she had already gained, until that all changed forever.
Years ago a group of people who were descendants of the original order of The Nobu began searching for individuals of extraordinary character who met the incredibly specific requirements of a Nobu warrior. Strength, courage and honour were the three fundamental characteristics that one would have to possess and to her surprise Kiyoshi was recruited into the Nobu order.
¤¤¤
She arrived at the Ryuu Temple at noon. The firey embers of the sun illuminated the area and danced off the temple walls in a way she had never seen before. The colours felt so familiar and while starring in awe at the giant Dragon tower before her, the layout of her new surroundings became engraved into her mind and for the first time in her life she felt like she belonged. A tall figure with jet black hair and piercing green eyes approached Kiyoshi, his name was Hiroku. Hiroku explained all that Kiyoshi needed to know at that time. "The Order of The Nobu were the greatest warriors of ancient Japan and to this day are unmatched in every respect. The Nobu always work in pairs, a male and female perfectly suited for one another that work to become an extension to each other and have a connection like no other. The Dragon tower in front of us consists of different levels and each level belongs to a pair of Shinobi," he explained. Hiroku and Kiyoshi were the next pair of Shinobi warriors. They trained while the days became weeks and the weeks became months until, eventually Hiroku and Kiyoshi became fully fledged Nobu warriors taking their rightful place in the third highest level of the Dragon tower. However, things are never quite as they seem and Kiyoshi was about to learn that. During his explanation of what the Nobu were Hiroku had failed to mention one very important detail : the Nogitsune. (A Kitsune is a Japanese fox spirit with magical and powerful abilities. A dark/void Kitsune spirit or Nogitsune is known for causing chaos and distruction which it then feeds on.) Shortly after completing their training Hiroku and Kiyoshi discovered that their master Mitsuko had been taken over by a Nogitsune and had trained the Shinobi, learning all their strengths but more importantly their weaknesses. This would make this dark Kitsune spirit not only an obscenely powerful adversary but also one that would be impossible to destroy. However, it was also learned that although they were intensely trained they were not trained to their full potential giving them a glimmer of hope by bringing the prospect of defeating their ancient enemy just a little closer. Hiroku and Kiyoshi trained long and hard with the other Shinobi when finally the spirit possessed Master Mitsuko launched an attack like nothing our young warriors had ever seen before. Mitsuko tore through the remaining Shinobi and destroyed the temple with a supernatural strength. The temple lay in ruins as a cloud of dust suffocated the debris, the only thing that could be seen were the orange eyes of the Nogitsune. "Nobu scum, not a worthy adversary left amoung Japan's so called greatest warriors!" the Nogitsune thought to itself. Within the heart of the ruins the Dragon tower stood firm and from the highest level came a booming voice with a raspy, serious and unmistakable tone, "Moshe Moshe Kitsune." During his studies Hiroku had learned that language is not a strength of the Fox spirit and that the repetition of words could confuse them. Hiroku used this to his advantage by greeting the spirit twice and with the Nogitsune temporarily stunned the Shinobi pair attacked. It was a ruthless battle that seemed hopeless as the Nogitsune was unimaginably powerful. The Shinobi than tapped into their shadow Dragon ninjitsu fighting style. They fought bravely and it almost appeared effortless. The tranquillity that once filled the air with sounds of the raging waterfall and florescent colours of nature all around was nowhere to be found. Here there was only the metallic smell of blood that stained the concrete floors. Hiroku and Kiyoshi seemed to fight as if they were in an infinite dance, finishing each other's attacks as if they were one. Two bodies functioning from one mind not even the slightest heartbeat was out of sink. Nogitsune quickly realised if he was to defeat these young Shinobi he would have to sever the sacred connection they shared. He struck Kiyoshi freezing every nerve and muscle in her body, paralyzing her. Pain rushed through Hiroku's body as if he himself had been struck with the lethal blow leaving him not only completely helpless but also vulnerable. Nogitsune struck him repeatedly tearing through his armour. His skin punctured from the rapid blows and blood gushed out of him. Hiroku fell to his knees as gravity plummeted his limp body onto the temple ruins. In his mind he realised he had done all he could do and awaited the final strike when Kiyoshi's lifeless body fell into his sight. His stayed locked on her with a deadly focus as life rushed back into his void eyes. His love for Kiyoshi awakened something inside of him that he could not explain. His green eyes lit up like emeralds in sunlight, he had unlocked the Ryuu or Dragon spirit within himself. Nogitsune lined up and delivered his final blow but to his surprise Hiroku caught his hand in mid air and broke it right off. The rest of the fight flew by in minutes and the strength Hiroku now possessed was far greater than that of the Nogitsune, he was destroyed and would never be a threat again. Hiroku stood taking in all that had happened as his new Dragon aura glowed red around him like a blazing fire. He walked slowly toward Kiyoshi with powerful and determined steps. He stood over her, arm outstretched to her heart, and his red aura flowed from the palm of his hand like a stream into Kiyoshi bringing her back to life. Hiroku and Kiyoshi were the last two remaining Nobu warriors and it now rested upon them to rebuild the greatest order of fighters the world has ever known.
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