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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 02/10/2017
It was around dusk, when a boy name Ashton and I were on the run from these killers. We were running and running until we came upon a old house with dim lights lit on the inside. We entered inside, walked around for a bit just looking around, until these two little children slowly walked out from the bedroom "hello." said the little boy. They didn't tell us their name but they were brother and sister, they seemed very nice. We explained we was in danger and we needed some help. They agreed they would help us. I walked over to this old wooden window and ran my fingers over the dusty window pane and as i looked up, I could see in the window reflection, that there was a shadow coming our way, I yelled and warned everyone. We all ran towards the window, unlatched the lock, and crawled out as quickly as possible, but the kids disappeared when we crawled out,you could hear them talking as if they were still next to us.. I looked beside me and asked the girl if she was a ghost? Ashton told me not to be rude. I exclaimed i'm not being rude! I can't see them, which is why i was asking. The girl faintly responded. Yes, we died back here in the swimming pool our dad built for us. As the little girl went to go on about the story, it was interrupted by the sound of footsteps. We quickly got down on your stomachs, crawled through the weeds so we could not be spotted. We got into a wooded area, where this swimming pool was. It's crystal clear blue water sparkled in the moonlight, it was extremely beautiful. Ashton asked the children "who drowned the both of you?". The little boy replied "We can not remember who it was but we do know it was a man, but in order for the us to help out and get you two into another dimension, is to react our death." they lied backwards and put their heads under the water. The ground started to shake, the moon became brighter and a huge abyss started to form in the middle of the pool. Ashton and I looked at each other and turned our heads towards the little children. "Is there a way we could repay you both?" I asked. The children nodded and said, "Until we meet again". We were not sure what they wanted help with, but all we knew was "Until we meet again." We waved and said our goodbyes. I stood my ground I did not want to go anywhere, I wanted to stay with the little children and help them. I closed my eyes tightly, I felt Ashton grab a hold of my hand and whisper into my ear, "We will find them again I promise" he pulled me towards him and held me tightly as we walked towards the abyss and fell in. I felt like I was in a deep sleep until I heard a boy telling me to wake up. I opened my eyes, everything was blurry, I was trying to make out the face of the boy in front of me, but my vision wasn't clearing up. My eyesight turned black and everything started to spin. "WAKE UP, WAKE UP!" the boy shouted. I suddenly woke up, regaining my vision. I look up to see Ashton above me and holding onto me. " You worried me to death! I thought you was dead!" Shouted Ashton. I looked around and noticed that we was in a dark and damp sanded cave. "Where are we?" I asked Ashton. "I have no idea but, i walked outside of this cave entrance and we seem to be in a cave underneath the ocean." Said Ashton. I tried to get up, but i struggled, so Ashton helped me up and we walked out. There was a weird glowing door that led out into the ocean, being afraid to open it, I stepped back away from the door and looked at Ashton. "Don't be afraid, we can breathe under water for only a mount of time." Said Ashton. I gave him the most strangest look ever and asked, "How is that even possible? Humans are not meant to breathe under water EVER!" I exclaimed. Ashton pulled out two necklaces that had a bright blue glowing essence in in it, and he said. "The little boy gave me them while you and his little sister were talking, he told me we would be in need of these at some point, and some point would be now." I looked at Ashton as he put the necklace around my neck, and smiled. He grabbed a hold of my hand opened the door and the ocean sucked us in. Minutes later, which felt like hours we were washed up onto the beach. We woke up, looked around and looked at each other. Not remembering anything I asked "What just happened?" Ashton looked down and noticed his clothes were not wet at all not one drop of water on him or even me. "Whatever happened, it was not reality." said Ashton. We got up off the sand and walked to the water together. I looked down into the clear blue water and I seen two little children. I kneel down and put my hand on the surface of the water, I close my eyes and I listen to the voices of the little children saying "Until we meet again."
Until we meet again(star f.) It was around dusk, when a boy name Ashton and I were on the run from these killers. We were running and running until we came upon a old house with dim lights lit on the inside. We entered inside, walked around for a bit just looking around, until these two little children slowly walked out from the bedroom "hello." said the little boy. They didn't tell us their name but they were brother and sister, they seemed very nice. We explained we was in danger and we needed some help. They agreed they would help us. I walked over to this old wooden window and ran my fingers over the dusty window pane and as i looked up, I could see in the window reflection, that there was a shadow coming our way, I yelled and warned everyone. We all ran towards the window, unlatched the lock, and crawled out as quickly as possible, but the kids disappeared when we crawled out,you could hear them talking as if they were still next to us.. I looked beside me and asked the girl if she was a ghost? Ashton told me not to be rude. I exclaimed i'm not being rude! I can't see them, which is why i was asking. The girl faintly responded. Yes, we died back here in the swimming pool our dad built for us. As the little girl went to go on about the story, it was interrupted by the sound of footsteps. We quickly got down on your stomachs, crawled through the weeds so we could not be spotted. We got into a wooded area, where this swimming pool was. It's crystal clear blue water sparkled in the moonlight, it was extremely beautiful. Ashton asked the children "who drowned the both of you?". The little boy replied "We can not remember who it was but we do know it was a man, but in order for the us to help out and get you two into another dimension, is to react our death." they lied backwards and put their heads under the water. The ground started to shake, the moon became brighter and a huge abyss started to form in the middle of the pool. Ashton and I looked at each other and turned our heads towards the little children. "Is there a way we could repay you both?" I asked. The children nodded and said, "Until we meet again". We were not sure what they wanted help with, but all we knew was "Until we meet again." We waved and said our goodbyes. I stood my ground I did not want to go anywhere, I wanted to stay with the little children and help them. I closed my eyes tightly, I felt Ashton grab a hold of my hand and whisper into my ear, "We will find them again I promise" he pulled me towards him and held me tightly as we walked towards the abyss and fell in. I felt like I was in a deep sleep until I heard a boy telling me to wake up. I opened my eyes, everything was blurry, I was trying to make out the face of the boy in front of me, but my vision wasn't clearing up. My eyesight turned black and everything started to spin. "WAKE UP, WAKE UP!" the boy shouted. I suddenly woke up, regaining my vision. I look up to see Ashton above me and holding onto me. " You worried me to death! I thought you was dead!" Shouted Ashton. I looked around and noticed that we was in a dark and damp sanded cave. "Where are we?" I asked Ashton. "I have no idea but, i walked outside of this cave entrance and we seem to be in a cave underneath the ocean." Said Ashton. I tried to get up, but i struggled, so Ashton helped me up and we walked out. There was a weird glowing door that led out into the ocean, being afraid to open it, I stepped back away from the door and looked at Ashton. "Don't be afraid, we can breathe under water for only a mount of time." Said Ashton. I gave him the most strangest look ever and asked, "How is that even possible? Humans are not meant to breathe under water EVER!" I exclaimed. Ashton pulled out two necklaces that had a bright blue glowing essence in in it, and he said. "The little boy gave me them while you and his little sister were talking, he told me we would be in need of these at some point, and some point would be now." I looked at Ashton as he put the necklace around my neck, and smiled. He grabbed a hold of my hand opened the door and the ocean sucked us in. Minutes later, which felt like hours we were washed up onto the beach. We woke up, looked around and looked at each other. Not remembering anything I asked "What just happened?" Ashton looked down and noticed his clothes were not wet at all not one drop of water on him or even me. "Whatever happened, it was not reality." said Ashton. We got up off the sand and walked to the water together. I looked down into the clear blue water and I seen two little children. I kneel down and put my hand on the surface of the water, I close my eyes and I listen to the voices of the little children saying "Until we meet again."
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