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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 02/21/2017
Many years ago in a castle beyond the town lived a King called Thomas with his family, (wife and daughter). They were the happiest family in Anda Lú. One day his daughter “Lola” wanted to leave the castle and also to discover the world. She was 10 years when she embarked on an adventure with her best friend “the lazy bear”. That afternoon it was raining, so she decided to wear boots and coat without forgetting the umbrella.
She took some money and left the castle. She walked miles looking for a place to stay at night. As soon as she looked back, she saw a hut which seemed beautiful to her because it wasn’t like the other huts, it had a big door, a beautiful garden, two big windows and one old tree called “magic”. She saw that name in the top of the tree because it was not bigger than the others.
However, she didn’t feel afraid and she decided to enter. When she crossed the door she found a lot of amazing things, more she can believe what she was seeing, there were hundreds of animals of different species. She walked more slowly surprised and saw that the hut was very big inside. Suddenly, her bear came to life and it went running, also a colorful horse asked her what she was doing there and the more important who was she? When she heard that, she muted and started to cry. The animals afraid started to sing their favorite song without think that the girl could be their friend. The song called “The zoo” stopped her crying and she sang with them.
Meanwhile in the castle her parents were so angry and worried, because they didn’t know where she could be. So they decided to wait for her, and pray to God for taking care of her. Well, in the hut the animals and Lola were delight of the dinner when by surprise the dog couldn’t control his mouth and told her a secret about the “magic” tree that apparently it wasn’t a common tree, it was the most awesome tree. That tree had magical powers and could carry you to other dimension. She wondered if could be possible to go there and the animals looked themselves and said – Yes come with us; they stood up and went outside.
She touched the tree immediately that turned on and said her what is your dream? She respond: I would want to go at home, I miss my parents, and I wouldn't want to get away again of them. The tree said, Lola, Lolita why did you go without permission? She lowered her head and told him the story and they were talking for a few minutes. When suddenly the tree said her, close your eyes and think in your dream, she did as he told her when she opened her eyes she was at home in her room with her best friend. He went down the stairs as fast as she could and entered the parents' room and saw that they were not there, she searched the whole house and shouted at them, where are you mom and dad?
Suddenly, a soft voice said, don’t worry your parents are in the yard looking at the stars, she ran there and they were actually, she hugged so hard them and promised never disappear.
The magic tree(Katherin)
Many years ago in a castle beyond the town lived a King called Thomas with his family, (wife and daughter). They were the happiest family in Anda Lú. One day his daughter “Lola” wanted to leave the castle and also to discover the world. She was 10 years when she embarked on an adventure with her best friend “the lazy bear”. That afternoon it was raining, so she decided to wear boots and coat without forgetting the umbrella.
She took some money and left the castle. She walked miles looking for a place to stay at night. As soon as she looked back, she saw a hut which seemed beautiful to her because it wasn’t like the other huts, it had a big door, a beautiful garden, two big windows and one old tree called “magic”. She saw that name in the top of the tree because it was not bigger than the others.
However, she didn’t feel afraid and she decided to enter. When she crossed the door she found a lot of amazing things, more she can believe what she was seeing, there were hundreds of animals of different species. She walked more slowly surprised and saw that the hut was very big inside. Suddenly, her bear came to life and it went running, also a colorful horse asked her what she was doing there and the more important who was she? When she heard that, she muted and started to cry. The animals afraid started to sing their favorite song without think that the girl could be their friend. The song called “The zoo” stopped her crying and she sang with them.
Meanwhile in the castle her parents were so angry and worried, because they didn’t know where she could be. So they decided to wait for her, and pray to God for taking care of her. Well, in the hut the animals and Lola were delight of the dinner when by surprise the dog couldn’t control his mouth and told her a secret about the “magic” tree that apparently it wasn’t a common tree, it was the most awesome tree. That tree had magical powers and could carry you to other dimension. She wondered if could be possible to go there and the animals looked themselves and said – Yes come with us; they stood up and went outside.
She touched the tree immediately that turned on and said her what is your dream? She respond: I would want to go at home, I miss my parents, and I wouldn't want to get away again of them. The tree said, Lola, Lolita why did you go without permission? She lowered her head and told him the story and they were talking for a few minutes. When suddenly the tree said her, close your eyes and think in your dream, she did as he told her when she opened her eyes she was at home in her room with her best friend. He went down the stairs as fast as she could and entered the parents' room and saw that they were not there, she searched the whole house and shouted at them, where are you mom and dad?
Suddenly, a soft voice said, don’t worry your parents are in the yard looking at the stars, she ran there and they were actually, she hugged so hard them and promised never disappear.
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