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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Science / Science Fiction
- Published: 02/21/2017
The Secret on the Surface
Was upon a time, in 2155, the Earth planet was completely contaminated by the humans. All the beautiful nature and the cities that we used to know have disappeared. All they had, was lost; their inventions with animals created worrying situations in the planet’s surface furthermore it changed their lives. People lived underground the surface since five years, as result of strange animal invasion.
Under the Sahara Desert, lived a guy named Sam, he was a young boy and was 17 years old. He lived with his grandfather called Mark. Sam was a young human, slim and had white skin and short, straight, and blue hair. He was funny and creative. Also he liked to listen to electronic music, to share with people and some robots, to eat much organic food, and he was interested in explore new things. Sam took care about people for the wild bestias (who owned all the planets surface).
Talking about the wild and frightening creatures, were robot rabbits. “scientists muted them for technology experiments, poor animals!” -Said Sam’s grandfather- Their King was the biggest of them, their coat was white and their bodies were combined with metal and technology pieces. The R-Rabbits (Robot rabbits) were wild, but intelligent robots. They did not eat vegetables, but they ate rocks and human trash. So they were resentful because the bad human actions.
Sam was worried about that situation, he needed to find the solution of that horrible event, he felt like the only who were interested in get out the ground and live outside like before, while the others just minded on keep them alive. “They do not want to solve the problem! They just wait and watch the scientists work, yet they have not contributed nothing!” said Sam. “I do not know” said his grandfather “but it is dangerous to get out on the surface. I know it is not appropriate to say it, but I prefer stay waiting.”
That night, Sam was not agree with his grandfather. He was old and did not have any hope. Consequently, he decided to abandon his house and started to find a solution. He was very astute and passed the police security. So, he could explore the surface. When he was there, he noticed the air was not contaminated and he said “Why the police and scientists lie about the air?”, he continued and saw the “wild and bad” R-Rabbits. He was afraid of them, but they did not seem like upset or resentful. They were afraid for humans. Sam was hidden and saw the scientists was using the R-Rabbits to illegal experiments.
Sam deducted all the things people said about the animals were not truth. He recorded that event in his camera, however he could not back home, there were many watchers. He knew they were looking for him, but he had a good idea; to send the video recorded to everybody he knew. The video was shared for many people; they noticed what really was happening on the surface. Sam was waiting and suddenly, someone found him. It was his grandfather. “Oh Sam! you are a rebellious and crazy guy, but you are our hero. All of us know it now. Let’s fight against them!” said Mark. They fought with all the people against the real bad creatures: the scientists and the police. They could not resist and the people arrested them.
All the city was grateful to Sam, they sent the message to all the other cities and they did the same. All the R-Rabbits were afraid yet of people. Sam convinced the King R-Rabbit that they were not like the scientists and they just wanted to help and convive with them and all the animals. Then humans and the R-Rabbits joined and started to lived on the surface, as they lived before. The R-Robots helped a lot with reconstruct the cities, the people were surprised at that; they wanted to have one R-Rabbits in their homes now. Finally, Sam and his grandfather adopted a new friend in their home, the King R-Rabbit and lived on the surface happily and peaceably forever.
The end.
The Secret On The Surface(Daniel Gutierrez)
The Secret on the Surface
Was upon a time, in 2155, the Earth planet was completely contaminated by the humans. All the beautiful nature and the cities that we used to know have disappeared. All they had, was lost; their inventions with animals created worrying situations in the planet’s surface furthermore it changed their lives. People lived underground the surface since five years, as result of strange animal invasion.
Under the Sahara Desert, lived a guy named Sam, he was a young boy and was 17 years old. He lived with his grandfather called Mark. Sam was a young human, slim and had white skin and short, straight, and blue hair. He was funny and creative. Also he liked to listen to electronic music, to share with people and some robots, to eat much organic food, and he was interested in explore new things. Sam took care about people for the wild bestias (who owned all the planets surface).
Talking about the wild and frightening creatures, were robot rabbits. “scientists muted them for technology experiments, poor animals!” -Said Sam’s grandfather- Their King was the biggest of them, their coat was white and their bodies were combined with metal and technology pieces. The R-Rabbits (Robot rabbits) were wild, but intelligent robots. They did not eat vegetables, but they ate rocks and human trash. So they were resentful because the bad human actions.
Sam was worried about that situation, he needed to find the solution of that horrible event, he felt like the only who were interested in get out the ground and live outside like before, while the others just minded on keep them alive. “They do not want to solve the problem! They just wait and watch the scientists work, yet they have not contributed nothing!” said Sam. “I do not know” said his grandfather “but it is dangerous to get out on the surface. I know it is not appropriate to say it, but I prefer stay waiting.”
That night, Sam was not agree with his grandfather. He was old and did not have any hope. Consequently, he decided to abandon his house and started to find a solution. He was very astute and passed the police security. So, he could explore the surface. When he was there, he noticed the air was not contaminated and he said “Why the police and scientists lie about the air?”, he continued and saw the “wild and bad” R-Rabbits. He was afraid of them, but they did not seem like upset or resentful. They were afraid for humans. Sam was hidden and saw the scientists was using the R-Rabbits to illegal experiments.
Sam deducted all the things people said about the animals were not truth. He recorded that event in his camera, however he could not back home, there were many watchers. He knew they were looking for him, but he had a good idea; to send the video recorded to everybody he knew. The video was shared for many people; they noticed what really was happening on the surface. Sam was waiting and suddenly, someone found him. It was his grandfather. “Oh Sam! you are a rebellious and crazy guy, but you are our hero. All of us know it now. Let’s fight against them!” said Mark. They fought with all the people against the real bad creatures: the scientists and the police. They could not resist and the people arrested them.
All the city was grateful to Sam, they sent the message to all the other cities and they did the same. All the R-Rabbits were afraid yet of people. Sam convinced the King R-Rabbit that they were not like the scientists and they just wanted to help and convive with them and all the animals. Then humans and the R-Rabbits joined and started to lived on the surface, as they lived before. The R-Robots helped a lot with reconstruct the cities, the people were surprised at that; they wanted to have one R-Rabbits in their homes now. Finally, Sam and his grandfather adopted a new friend in their home, the King R-Rabbit and lived on the surface happily and peaceably forever.
The end.
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