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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 11/18/2014
Ashton was riding her bike to the store which was a 7 mile trip there and 7 miles back. she was on her 4th mile when she got tired so she hopped off her bike, and started to walk it. Shortly down the road a black truck pulled up next to her and stopped. The man in the truck rolled down the window and said.
“Hello” She could tell that he was a couple years older than she was.
“Hi.” She said while she kept on walking he kept the truck right beside her.
“Need a ride?” He asked. She was about to say yes when she remembered not to take rides from strangers.
“No thank you.”
“Where are you headed?” He asked.
“Nowhere.” She answered.
“Are you sure you don’t want a ride, it would be my pleasure.” He Pleaded.
“I’ll Manage.” she said.
He pulled his truck over and got out and walked up beside her and he accompanied her to the store and from the store.
When they got back to the truck she thanked him for walking with her to the store. As she was thanking him and saying goodbye he leaned in and kissed her. She quick pulled back and slapped him across the face and hopped on her bike and rode away.
The next day, she was taking a walk, and decided to make it a quick walk, when she saw his black truck in front of her. She turned and was walking away when he saw her and he ran after her and when he got next to her he said. “Listen I am sorry than I kissed you without permission yesterday.”
“I’m sorry for slapping you like that, I shouldn’t have, even if I felt I needed to.” She said.
“Its fine, I deserved it.”
“No you didn't.” She said. Later on the way back to the truck, he asked “Do you have a boyfriend?”
“Ya.”
“Who?” He asked.
Then she answered “You.”
After that night, she didn't see him for three days, then she saw the black truck and another car pulled aside it was an awesome car, it was a limited addition, dark grey Durango. As she was walking up the sidewalk to the black truck, Terence got out and held his arms wide open, and she ran into them.
The Following year he proposed, and she said yes. They planned to get married in 4 months and they were looking for a house to move into after they were married. But her father thought that he wanted to move in with her before they were married, so he took his daughter, and locked her in her room, boarded the windows shut, and took any items away that she could be social with anyone, to tell them what was going on. Her father also sold her car, and made sure the wedding was off. Then the 3rd day she was in there she heard a gun shot and a man scream! She knocked her door down with her chair that belonged to her desk. She ran outside to see her father with a rifle in his hands.
She ran around to the side of the house where the driveway connects to the patio with a side walk and on that sidewalk lay a man with a pile of blood around him. She walked over to where she could see his face. It was Terence. She started crying. His handsome face was full of pain and hurt. She ran over to him and fell and laid his head on hers. And he said in pain “Ashton, I love you more than anything in the world.”
“I love you too” She said.
That day he got killed, for doing nothing. He joined God in Heaven.
The End
The Man In The Black Truck(Daisy L. Cook)
Ashton was riding her bike to the store which was a 7 mile trip there and 7 miles back. she was on her 4th mile when she got tired so she hopped off her bike, and started to walk it. Shortly down the road a black truck pulled up next to her and stopped. The man in the truck rolled down the window and said.
“Hello” She could tell that he was a couple years older than she was.
“Hi.” She said while she kept on walking he kept the truck right beside her.
“Need a ride?” He asked. She was about to say yes when she remembered not to take rides from strangers.
“No thank you.”
“Where are you headed?” He asked.
“Nowhere.” She answered.
“Are you sure you don’t want a ride, it would be my pleasure.” He Pleaded.
“I’ll Manage.” she said.
He pulled his truck over and got out and walked up beside her and he accompanied her to the store and from the store.
When they got back to the truck she thanked him for walking with her to the store. As she was thanking him and saying goodbye he leaned in and kissed her. She quick pulled back and slapped him across the face and hopped on her bike and rode away.
The next day, she was taking a walk, and decided to make it a quick walk, when she saw his black truck in front of her. She turned and was walking away when he saw her and he ran after her and when he got next to her he said. “Listen I am sorry than I kissed you without permission yesterday.”
“I’m sorry for slapping you like that, I shouldn’t have, even if I felt I needed to.” She said.
“Its fine, I deserved it.”
“No you didn't.” She said. Later on the way back to the truck, he asked “Do you have a boyfriend?”
“Ya.”
“Who?” He asked.
Then she answered “You.”
After that night, she didn't see him for three days, then she saw the black truck and another car pulled aside it was an awesome car, it was a limited addition, dark grey Durango. As she was walking up the sidewalk to the black truck, Terence got out and held his arms wide open, and she ran into them.
The Following year he proposed, and she said yes. They planned to get married in 4 months and they were looking for a house to move into after they were married. But her father thought that he wanted to move in with her before they were married, so he took his daughter, and locked her in her room, boarded the windows shut, and took any items away that she could be social with anyone, to tell them what was going on. Her father also sold her car, and made sure the wedding was off. Then the 3rd day she was in there she heard a gun shot and a man scream! She knocked her door down with her chair that belonged to her desk. She ran outside to see her father with a rifle in his hands.
She ran around to the side of the house where the driveway connects to the patio with a side walk and on that sidewalk lay a man with a pile of blood around him. She walked over to where she could see his face. It was Terence. She started crying. His handsome face was full of pain and hurt. She ran over to him and fell and laid his head on hers. And he said in pain “Ashton, I love you more than anything in the world.”
“I love you too” She said.
That day he got killed, for doing nothing. He joined God in Heaven.
The End
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