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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 12/25/2014
THE PRIVATE SLEUTH
Angelica caught sight of the bald fat man she had been trying to find during the past two years. Yes, he must be him. Yes, he is like the man on the phantom picture. The phantom picture was drawn according to the instructions of the only witness after Angelica's father had been shot in his car two years ago. He had been in the bank in this square and left it with $500,000. he needed for starting his new business. A bold man followed him from the bank, fired his gone through the open car window, grasped the bag with the money and disappered quickly behind the corner. The police were unable to find him. So Angelia decided to solve the crime herself. Every day she came to this square in the hope the murderer would turn up one day and she would be able to recognize him with the help of the phantom photo.
The man entered a bar and Angelica followed him. He sat down at a table and ordered a beer. The girl seated herself at a nearby table facing him. She took a piece of paper and a pen out of her handbag and wrote on it "This man killed Mr. Burke on 2 July 2012" and put the paper back into her handbag. Then she ordered a coffee and paid the bill immediately.
When the bald man was leaving he put his purse in the pocket of his over coat. Angelica jumped up and they collided at the door. The girl quickly removed the purse from the coat pocket. The bald man realized the theft.
- Thief, pickpocket - he cried.
- Murderer - she echoed.
The doorman stopped them. Soon the police arrived.
Angelica told her story showing the piece of paper having been written prior to the theft.
- That was the only way I could figure out to get him detained.
The house search produced a gun and experts found it identical with the one that had put out Mr. Burke's life.
The private sleuth(Attila Toth)
THE PRIVATE SLEUTH
Angelica caught sight of the bald fat man she had been trying to find during the past two years. Yes, he must be him. Yes, he is like the man on the phantom picture. The phantom picture was drawn according to the instructions of the only witness after Angelica's father had been shot in his car two years ago. He had been in the bank in this square and left it with $500,000. he needed for starting his new business. A bold man followed him from the bank, fired his gone through the open car window, grasped the bag with the money and disappered quickly behind the corner. The police were unable to find him. So Angelia decided to solve the crime herself. Every day she came to this square in the hope the murderer would turn up one day and she would be able to recognize him with the help of the phantom photo.
The man entered a bar and Angelica followed him. He sat down at a table and ordered a beer. The girl seated herself at a nearby table facing him. She took a piece of paper and a pen out of her handbag and wrote on it "This man killed Mr. Burke on 2 July 2012" and put the paper back into her handbag. Then she ordered a coffee and paid the bill immediately.
When the bald man was leaving he put his purse in the pocket of his over coat. Angelica jumped up and they collided at the door. The girl quickly removed the purse from the coat pocket. The bald man realized the theft.
- Thief, pickpocket - he cried.
- Murderer - she echoed.
The doorman stopped them. Soon the police arrived.
Angelica told her story showing the piece of paper having been written prior to the theft.
- That was the only way I could figure out to get him detained.
The house search produced a gun and experts found it identical with the one that had put out Mr. Burke's life.
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