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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Courage / Heroism
- Published: 01/07/2018
Once upon a time, where humans held no negativity in their hearts, there was a world the people called ‘’Sentenheim’’ -- a place with a strong power unknown to man. Ever since they discovered the planet, humanity aimed to visit it upon selfish requests. However, little did they know what was about to happen to them. Upon the first visit to Sentenheim a slight tremor enveloped the ground, horns as sharp as a deadly blade stuck out from the darkness. Deep crimson red hands reached out, it’s claws gave way to a good stretch. Revealing the being, the demon named Senten stretched his entire body after being dormant for so long. Opening his eyes, a fierce gaze was shown through his mesmerizing black eyes. The gaze was directed at the human, which shivered frozen with fear. The demon thus spoke his words ‘’If thou shall interrupt my slumber, I will implant a plague into you.. Take it back to where you belong!’’
Ever since that day passed, humanity now had negativity increasing to the peaks in every corner. The people that had known their once peaceful world have gone insane, trying to find a solution to this plague. To no avail the people began losing hope, except for one person. That one person had no name, and was called Fineldiar as times passed by. Being an orphan wasn’t easy, but she saw the one thing people couldn’t.. The strings of darkness attached to everyone’s souls, they were everywhere. Bewildered and scared at first, she found peace in her own soul string. A golden soul string that brings positive thoughts back, known only to herself. As she walked towards her home, the ground shook uncontrollably and the strings of darkness began to grow bigger. As she lost her balance the ground stopped shaking, it is only a matter of time before the plague seizes all of Earth. At that very moment, only Fineldiar’s golden string expands to the size of a bridge aiming to the sky. After several thoughts of her own, she knew exactly what to do. Kneeling down on her knees, she prays for the golden string to fly away to the planet Sentenheim. The golden string felt her sadness, understanding it’s host the string start speeding off to Sentenheim’s core. The demon Senten senses the power, and thought to himself it can’t do anything even if it tried. As the string appears in front of the core, the ground begins to turn into gold. ‘’What!?’’ The demon shouts, as he reaches towards the string he turns into silver dust after touching it. A voice nears the string, and says ‘’Thank you..’’ in hopes of that it hears her. Down on Earth, the girl is still praying for the world to be saved. In an instant, an explosion can be seen in Earth’s sky. Golden glitter sways around the planet, and everyone returns back to normal. The end.
‘’Having hope can cause a miracle, even though negative thoughts pass by you can make it. Will you be like Fineldiar, or will you become the people who get saved? That choice is yours, follow your heart.’’
Glittery regards,
Verónika Lind E.
Reflection: The inner demon(Veronika Lind Efarsdottir)
Once upon a time, where humans held no negativity in their hearts, there was a world the people called ‘’Sentenheim’’ -- a place with a strong power unknown to man. Ever since they discovered the planet, humanity aimed to visit it upon selfish requests. However, little did they know what was about to happen to them. Upon the first visit to Sentenheim a slight tremor enveloped the ground, horns as sharp as a deadly blade stuck out from the darkness. Deep crimson red hands reached out, it’s claws gave way to a good stretch. Revealing the being, the demon named Senten stretched his entire body after being dormant for so long. Opening his eyes, a fierce gaze was shown through his mesmerizing black eyes. The gaze was directed at the human, which shivered frozen with fear. The demon thus spoke his words ‘’If thou shall interrupt my slumber, I will implant a plague into you.. Take it back to where you belong!’’
Ever since that day passed, humanity now had negativity increasing to the peaks in every corner. The people that had known their once peaceful world have gone insane, trying to find a solution to this plague. To no avail the people began losing hope, except for one person. That one person had no name, and was called Fineldiar as times passed by. Being an orphan wasn’t easy, but she saw the one thing people couldn’t.. The strings of darkness attached to everyone’s souls, they were everywhere. Bewildered and scared at first, she found peace in her own soul string. A golden soul string that brings positive thoughts back, known only to herself. As she walked towards her home, the ground shook uncontrollably and the strings of darkness began to grow bigger. As she lost her balance the ground stopped shaking, it is only a matter of time before the plague seizes all of Earth. At that very moment, only Fineldiar’s golden string expands to the size of a bridge aiming to the sky. After several thoughts of her own, she knew exactly what to do. Kneeling down on her knees, she prays for the golden string to fly away to the planet Sentenheim. The golden string felt her sadness, understanding it’s host the string start speeding off to Sentenheim’s core. The demon Senten senses the power, and thought to himself it can’t do anything even if it tried. As the string appears in front of the core, the ground begins to turn into gold. ‘’What!?’’ The demon shouts, as he reaches towards the string he turns into silver dust after touching it. A voice nears the string, and says ‘’Thank you..’’ in hopes of that it hears her. Down on Earth, the girl is still praying for the world to be saved. In an instant, an explosion can be seen in Earth’s sky. Golden glitter sways around the planet, and everyone returns back to normal. The end.
‘’Having hope can cause a miracle, even though negative thoughts pass by you can make it. Will you be like Fineldiar, or will you become the people who get saved? That choice is yours, follow your heart.’’
Glittery regards,
Verónika Lind E.
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