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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Action & Adventure
  • Subject: Adventure
  • Published: 06/26/2016

Strangers in the Night

By Gail Moore
Born 1953, F, from Auckland, New Zealand
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Strangers in the Night
A thunderous noise came from out of nowhere. Before that it had been a lovely evening. I had even been sitting outside with a decaf latte and some chocolate biscuits. My favorite thing to do on a week day evening while I waited for Shane to come home from an evening shift.

Holy Moly, I thought. I have never heard thunder this loud in my whole entire life. I wondered if my hubby was inside a building or if he was out in this shocking weather on the runway of the Auckland airport where he was not due to finish for another two hours or more. I will bet ya bottom dollar he's out there with no rain jacket and he comes home looking like a drowned rat.

More thunder and a lighting display that out did anything I'd ever seen before. I would even go so far as to say it was better than last years guy Fawkes display that had cost the local council over half a million. Then with that last clap of thunder and brightest light that hurt ones eyes, sudden darkness. First the street lights, and I thought, yaa. I hate the street light on the roadside just outside our bedroom window and on the odd occasion that it blacks out I have a really good night sleep. I don't know how many times I have said I am going to have drapes made over the venetian blinds. Just to completely block that bloody street light. Just never got around to it.

Then with that thought still in mind the house lights went out as well. I was in complete darkness.
Strange, I thought. It's 7 o'clock in the evening. Normally it isn't this dark for another hour or so, or maybe it is and I'm just not used to the street lights blacking out. I fumble around for the phone to ring my daughter and the phone doesn't work. Can't see a thing, absolutely nothing. I need to get my mobile phone but its on charge. walking very gingerly into the hallway I find the phone and try to ring. The phone is completely dead. Dead as a doorpost. This is getting stranger by the minute. A great way to finish my birthday, I thought.

Outside there is complete silence and I feel like I've gone blind, that's how dark it is. Looking out the window into nothingness. No stars, No moon, No nothing. Just a spooky darkness.

I shiver and fumble out to the kitchen walking very slowly so as not to trip over anything and feeling my way with walls to guide me.

I praise myself for the junk I had removed out of the hallway just two hours before. If I hadn't I would be tripping over everything. Just as I had that thought I tripped over the vacuum cleaner and caught my balance just in time. My head was narrowly close to hitting the side of the kitchen door. I had had a really good spruce up that day because we were having a family gathering for my 50th birthday.

Finally I find the cupboard that's got the candles and the matches. As I pull them down a light bulb falls out of the container and smashes onto my foot. Buggar, I thought, as I could feel warm blood slowly dripping from the top of my left foot. I light several candles so I can assess the damage. Emmm, a piece of glass lodged into the top of my left foot. Exactly the same place I had been cut by a glass milk bottle as a child and still had a deep scar. I slowly removed the glass and reached for a paper towel that was sitting on the kitchen bench top. I just squatted in there for about 10 minutes, a bit scared to move in case I stood on more glass.

With the candles lit and put on a tray I began to move more freely through the house. I found a bandage and put it on my wound then hopped into bed and waited. I gave myself a pat on the back for putting all the essentials into one cupboard in case of an emergency. Well done, I thought.

Blowing the candles out, all but one, i fell asleep for god knows how long and when I awoke I just laid there listening to the silence. The one candle had long burned out.

At that time I realized I had not heard any traffic. Not even the odd siren you would hear on a night where all the power had gone out.
Waiting, Waiting, Waiting. Nothing but silence. No clock, No phone, How long did I wait. I have no idea.

I finally decide to leave the house. No power, Can't get the car out. With only a candle to light up the garage it was a struggle to open our internal garage door with no power and I really didn't have the strength to lift it all the way. After what seemed like 20 minutes or more it was up enough to get the car out. Thank god for that, I thought. I hop into the car and turn the key. Battery is as dead as.

What the heck is going on, and by this time I am shit scared.

I remember in our courtyard out back I have a lantern and make my way out to find it. The lantern was already filled with kerosene and was a small comfort when it lit for me with no problems. I go into a drawer on Shane's side of the bed and pull out an old watch that had belonged to his dad and hoped like hell it would wind up for me. It probably hadn't gone in 20 years. Waa laa, it worked and I set it at midnight even though I didn't know what time it was, I could at least keep an eye on how long I would be in darkness from that point.

I shut the garage door and it came down with an almighty bang as I couldn't slow it down. I was terrified someone might just walk in off the street if they saw it open.

Waited, Waited and Waited some more. No sign of Shane or anyone else. 4am, 5am, 6am comes and goes. It's still dark. Pitch black, not just dark, pitch black. As black as the ace of spades. 7am, 8am. Nothing changes and I have run out of kerosene. I find some in the garage cupboard and refill the lantern. Still complete darkness, complete silence.

I put on one of Shane's reflector jackets and venture outdoors. I knock on four of the neighbor's doors and nobody answers. I remember one of my neighbor's often rides a bike and go in search of it. Their dog isn't barking. In fact that's another silence, I thought to myself. Who am I kidding, I haven't ridden a bike in years, and start making my way by foot down to my daughters house just 1 kilometer from me.

I'm about 1 minute from home and in the middle of the park that is on the opposite side of the road to our home when I see a light. Shit this could be anyone, I think to myself, and freeze for just a second before I hear a ladies voice. "Hello, hello, I see your light" The voice sounded friendly so I answered.

"What the bloody hell has happened?" she asks me in a very shaken voice. I could tell by the sound in her voice she was crying. I put the lantern up to her face and recognize her from the local supermarket.

"I have no idea and you are the very first person I have seen since this black out."

She tells me it's the same for her.
Introductions take place and we fumble through the park and find a seat. "What an end to my 50th birthday" I say to her. She grabs my arm, laughs a little and says, "Hi birthday buddy, I also turned 50."

We decide to stay together and walk to my daughters home. We walk past a small block of shops and see lantern lights. Linda, my new friend, yells out, "Hello is anyone there?" An answer was returned, again a woman's voice. "Yes three of us over here." We make our way to them. Two women and a man.

"Can any one of you people enlighten us as to what's happened?" Of course what I heard next sounded so far fetched and upsetting that I didn't want to believe it. The man named Bryce spoke first. He asked Linda and myself, "Did the two of you turn 50 yesterday?" "Yes" We answer at the same time. "So did I and my new friends here." "Okay so now things are getting really, really strange" I said. "Five people all with the same birthday, how could that be?" "Well Maria here, our Irish lass, has a theory and it possibly makes a little sense, I think," said Bryce and he laughs a little.

"Actually it's not my theory and this might be a little like Chinese whispers but here I go. Before I came here I banged into a woman and a guy, and you guessed it, same birthday. The woman had walked up the Pakuranga Highway where she had spoken to some other people. One of those people had spoken to someone called Anna, She was from Scotland and this is what she was told." Here we go, I thought, a tall tale.
"As a child her birthday was going to be a special day in the year 1986. It was written in the Doomsday Book. All those born on the 6th of June 1966 shall survive and the earth shall be plunged into darkness for 20 days. It was knowledge of the whole town and further where this lady had originated from.
So we have to ask, What happened to 1986, it's been and gone, in fact it had been and gone exactly 30 years ago to the day."

"Holy crap" I thought out loud. "Whoever does the math for the big man upstairs wasn't using his calculator." Everyone laughed. "So what's next, I suppose we just wait out the next 20 days more or less depending on wrong dates and times and let's see what happens, shall we?"

"I suppose when you rationalize it all it could make some sense. We would have all been exactly 20 years old and of breeding age. The world was supposed to end and we were supposed to go out and copulate."

Well I was about to move on and head for my daughters place when one of the group described her final seconds before darkness fell. She said she was with all her family and about to blow out candles on her cake when they simply disappeared from right in front of her.

Are you kidding me, I thought, and with that thought the lights came on, traffic was around, everything was as normal as it could be. Not 20 days, it was more like 20 hours, and the guy Bryce checks his watch and says. "Exactly 20 hours to the minute."

"Seriously, God turned too much water into wine," Bryce laughs. "Our math man got a lot wrong." Again we laugh before wishing well to everyone there and heading home.

Linda and myself head back towards the direction we had come from. I pointed out my home from standing outside hers and we promised to make frequent contact with each other.

Arriving home with my mind totally confused I was met by my beautiful ginger cat. The phone was ringing. I answer and it is Shane. "Got off early hon. Happy 48th Birthday." I didn't say anything. I just stood and thought, Is this a joke? I have come home to be greeted by a cat that passed away 2 years ago, A hubby wishing me Happy 48th Birthday, and the computer is telling me it's 6/6/2014.
So many unanswered questions. Is this going to be a case of ground hog day? What will happen two years from now when we all turn 50 AGAIN?

Maybe this has happened before and we just can't remember.
Maybe the doomsday book now has a revised date. Must check on that one.
Will this be all over the news tomorrow?
If I don't write it down now maybe I will forget.
Will I remember writing this?

Shane is yelling out from downstairs, "You have spent all night upstairs typing away. Come and enjoy what's left of your birthday!"

10/6/2014. Just found this story on the computer. Who wrote it? I know it sounds like it was written by me but I swear I can't remember. I am however puzzled as to how I cut my foot. Just thought is was a scratch from being out in the garden. Maybe not, Who knows.

The End
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Marla

05/17/2026

I remember this. :)
Thanks for pinning it. It was fun to read again!

I remember this. :)
Thanks for pinning it. It was fun to read again!

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Aleena Nawaz

05/16/2026

A truly good piece of writing

A truly good piece of writing

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Marla

07/05/2024

Creative!

Creative!

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Gail Moore

08/04/2024

Thanks Marla :-)

Thanks Marla :-)

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Vache Kosyan

04/07/2024

Nice Story!

Nice Story!

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Gail Moore

04/08/2024

Thanks so much :-)

Thanks so much :-)

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Vache Kosyan

04/07/2024

Nice!

Nice!

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Gail Moore

04/09/2024

Thanks so much. :-)

Thanks so much. :-)

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Valerie Allen

04/05/2024

This was a strange one! Really got me to thinking about life and the odd things that sometimes happen. Interesting.

This was a strange one! Really got me to thinking about life and the odd things that sometimes happen. Interesting.

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Gail Moore

04/08/2024

Thanks so much :-)

Thanks so much :-)

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Joel Kiula

04/01/2024

Incredible. What a turn around of events. I ENJOYED READING THE STORY

Incredible. What a turn around of events. I ENJOYED READING THE STORY

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Gail Moore

04/01/2024

Thanks so much Joel :-)

Thanks so much Joel :-)

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Gerald R Gioglio

04/01/2024

Bloody hell and a half, Gail. That was creepy fun. Happy Storystar month.

Bloody hell and a half, Gail. That was creepy fun. Happy Storystar month.

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Gail Moore

04/01/2024

Thanks very much Gerald :-)

Thanks very much Gerald :-)

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Cheryl Ryan

04/01/2024

I enjoyed this story! The author is a good writer and did a great job describing her view, frustrations and all the pains she went through during the horrifying night. This story will make a great movie as well.

Thank you for sharing!

I enjoyed this story! The author is a good writer and did a great job describing her view, frustrations and all the pains she went through during the horrifying night. This story will make a great movie as well.

Thank you for sharing!

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Gail Moore

04/01/2024

Thanks very much Cheryl :-)

Thanks very much Cheryl :-)

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Aziz

04/01/2024

Congratulations Gail on being selected the writer of the month. You are the shining sun of this beautiful community.

Congratulations Gail on being selected the writer of the month. You are the shining sun of this beautiful community.

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Gail Moore

04/01/2024

Thank so much my lovely friend. Take care :-)

Thank so much my lovely friend. Take care :-)

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JD

03/31/2024

Gail, this story has the most views, shares, and nominations among all your stories, and also perhaps among all the stories on Storystar. So perfect story to feature as the story star of the day to also wish you, happy short story writer of the month! THANK YOU for all the outstanding stories you've shared on Storystar over the years, as well as your constant encouragement of other writers. You're...
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Gail, this story has the most views, shares, and nominations among all your stories, and also perhaps among all the stories on Storystar. So perfect story to feature as the story star of the day to also wish you, happy short story writer of the month! THANK YOU for all the outstanding stories you've shared on Storystar over the years, as well as your constant encouragement of other writers. You're awesome! :-)

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Gail Moore

04/01/2024

Thank you so much my friend. I’ve been a bit lacks lately. Have been moving house and busy with that.
Thanks so so much JD. :-)

Thank you so much my friend. I’ve been a bit lacks lately. Have been moving house and busy with that.
Thanks so so much JD. :-)

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Lulu

03/05/2024

Intriguing! So good!

Intriguing! So good!

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Gail Moore

03/20/2024

ThNk you :-)

ThNk you :-)

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Tallisman

12/16/2022

Wow! Brilliant!

Wow! Brilliant!

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Gail Moore

12/17/2022

Thank you very much :-)

Thank you very much :-)

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JackbackPakaye

07/28/2022

It looks Delicious

It looks Delicious

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Gail Moore

07/28/2022

I know, I really feel like cake now hehe :-)

I know, I really feel like cake now hehe :-)

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JackbackPakaye

07/28/2022

Awesome work and design
Especially the cake

Awesome work and design
Especially the cake

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Gail Moore

07/28/2022

Thanks so much Jack :-)

Thanks so much Jack :-)

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D.l. lewis

07/26/2022

Beautiful Story! Fantastic Work.

Beautiful Story! Fantastic Work.

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Gail Moore

07/26/2022

Thank you very much. :-)

Thank you very much. :-)

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Kevin Hughes

07/02/2022

Gail, how in the world did i miss this wild romp through your imagination? As you can tell from the thread...everyong feels like I did. What fun! I read in one of the comments that you wished for your fifty year old body back...I want my 70th body back! LOL It used to take decades to notice changes...now...well, a week or so will do. LOL

Great Job!

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Gail, how in the world did i miss this wild romp through your imagination? As you can tell from the thread...everyong feels like I did. What fun! I read in one of the comments that you wished for your fifty year old body back...I want my 70th body back! LOL It used to take decades to notice changes...now...well, a week or so will do. LOL

Great Job!

Smiles, Kevin

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Gail Moore

07/02/2022

Thanks so much Kevin, was just a bit of a fun piece to write. Or maybe it was wishful thinking :-)

Thanks so much Kevin, was just a bit of a fun piece to write. Or maybe it was wishful thinking :-)

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Shelly Garrod

06/29/2022

Wow Gail, this is an amazing story. I loved it. Very imaginative.
Shelly

Wow Gail, this is an amazing story. I loved it. Very imaginative.
Shelly

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Gail Moore

06/29/2022

Thanks very much Shelly :-)

Thanks very much Shelly :-)

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Lesley

06/28/2022

better to go to the movie after you turn 50

better to go to the movie after you turn 50

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Gail Moore

06/28/2022

Yep, I wish :-) thanks for reading :-)

Yep, I wish :-) thanks for reading :-)

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Lesley

06/28/2022

This would make a good movie

This would make a good movie

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Gail Moore

06/29/2022

Thanks Lesley :-)

Thanks Lesley :-)

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Aziz

06/28/2022

Very beautiful. I love it Gail

Very beautiful. I love it Gail

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Gail Moore

06/28/2022

Thanks so much Aziz :-)

Thanks so much Aziz :-)

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Herm Sherwood-Sitts

06/27/2022

Awesome! Over 10,000 views! Loved it Gail!

Awesome! Over 10,000 views! Loved it Gail!

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Gail Moore

06/27/2022

Thanks so much Herm :-)

Thanks so much Herm :-)

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Mohammadreza

05/08/2022

Nice story

Nice story

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Gail Moore

05/08/2022

Thank you very much :-)

Thank you very much :-)

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Farnood

05/07/2022

brilliant story
the further the story went the more intresting and strange it became
actually it was a bit like a horror story

brilliant story
the further the story went the more intresting and strange it became
actually it was a bit like a horror story

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Gail Moore

05/08/2022

Thank you very much :-)

Thank you very much :-)

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Andre Michael Pietroschek

05/02/2022

I liked the writing style very much. The story isn't really my kinda story, but that doesn't make it bad. Comma placement, much like my own long list of failures, could be better. To join the debate: On date of writing, I am 49 years old. From a homeless winter 2015 outside, not in a shelter, to restoring the little life I live now... With medical issues best left unmentioned & more violent attemp...
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I liked the writing style very much. The story isn't really my kinda story, but that doesn't make it bad. Comma placement, much like my own long list of failures, could be better. To join the debate: On date of writing, I am 49 years old. From a homeless winter 2015 outside, not in a shelter, to restoring the little life I live now... With medical issues best left unmentioned & more violent attempts to end me than I can forgive our society and law... I am already happy, when I reach my fiftiest birthday at all, and while aging does take a lot of toll, I also learned to rejoice, to accept the inevitable, and to cherish the good moments. In my words: ``I did not survive to repeat the mistakes of my younger years!´´. I cannot say, how older people perceive it, but I hope that you won't find yourself abandoned & neglected. One worthy part of the story: The protagonist finding it hard to belief what is told was written splendidly well!

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Gail Moore

05/02/2022

Thank you very much Andre :-)

Thank you very much Andre :-)

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Ata akbarzadeh

05/01/2022

Thanks indeed
You have an extensive imagination
That's adorable

Thanks indeed
You have an extensive imagination
That's adorable

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Gail Moore

05/01/2022

Thanks so much Ata:-)

Thanks so much Ata:-)

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Doug Lay

04/27/2022

Very imaginative - Oh to be 50 again.

Very imaginative - Oh to be 50 again.

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Andre Michael Pietroschek

05/02/2022

I wish you well, but I could easily call that comment of yours more scary than every Creepypasta (horror) story i have read during my lifetime!

I wish you well, but I could easily call that comment of yours more scary than every Creepypasta (horror) story i have read during my lifetime!

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Gail Moore

04/27/2022

I know , maybe that was in the back of my mind when I wrote it.
Thanks Doug :-)

I know , maybe that was in the back of my mind when I wrote it.
Thanks Doug :-)

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Bernardo Mendes

10/25/2021

Amazing writing skills as usual Gail! I really love your style, thank you very much for presenting us with great story after great story!

Amazing writing skills as usual Gail! I really love your style, thank you very much for presenting us with great story after great story!

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Gail Moore

10/25/2021

Thank you so so much Bernardo. I really appreciate such great feedback :-)

Thank you so so much Bernardo. I really appreciate such great feedback :-)

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Martha Huett

10/21/2021

Gail, I loved this story months ago and was thrilled to read it again. So well-written. 'A scratch'. Oh my. You do that so well! :)

Gail, I loved this story months ago and was thrilled to read it again. So well-written. 'A scratch'. Oh my. You do that so well! :)

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Gail Moore

10/21/2021

Thanks so much Martha :-)

Thanks so much Martha :-)

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Radrook

10/21/2021

Nice Store Gail. Yes, sudden-darkness stories have been done before, but you managed to make yours unique. Not an easy task, but your imagination proved capable.

Nice Store Gail. Yes, sudden-darkness stories have been done before, but you managed to make yours unique. Not an easy task, but your imagination proved capable.

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Gail Moore

10/21/2021

Thank you so much Radrook :-)

Thank you so much Radrook :-)

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Lillian Kazmierczak

10/20/2021

Gail that was awesome. When I was freaking out for you, I was laughing...your victory of all emergency needs in one cabinet! So relatable. You are such a good writer!

Gail that was awesome. When I was freaking out for you, I was laughing...your victory of all emergency needs in one cabinet! So relatable. You are such a good writer!

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Gail Moore

10/20/2021

Thank you very much Lillian. In reality, I would not have a clue where I put things. And ohhhh to be 50 again and have no aches and pains. Hehe
You are awesome :-)

Thank you very much Lillian. In reality, I would not have a clue where I put things. And ohhhh to be 50 again and have no aches and pains. Hehe
You are awesome :-)

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Gordon England

03/04/2021

CLEVER FICTION

CLEVER FICTION

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Gail Moore

03/04/2021

Thank you very much Gordon.

Thank you very much Gordon.

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Hazel Dow

03/03/2021

Loved it! Actually gave me chills :-O Well done on a great spooky story. Cheers

Loved it! Actually gave me chills :-O Well done on a great spooky story. Cheers

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Gail Moore

03/03/2021

Thanks so much for reading Hazel.
Glad you enjoyed it :-) have a great day.

Thanks so much for reading Hazel.
Glad you enjoyed it :-) have a great day.

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Kevin Hughes

03/02/2021

Okay Gail,
I am so glad I read this well after I turned fifty. If I came home to the greetings of a dead cat and a spouse who thought I was two years younger, the heart attack would have ended the day. Loved it.
Happy Fiftieth Birthday!
Smiles, Kevin

Okay Gail,
I am so glad I read this well after I turned fifty. If I came home to the greetings of a dead cat and a spouse who thought I was two years younger, the heart attack would have ended the day. Loved it.
Happy Fiftieth Birthday!
Smiles, Kevin

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Kevin Hughes

03/02/2021

Your note made me laugh. I want my sixty three year old body back! Fifty would be a dream come true. LOL I remember what my Mother told me once when I was discussing how men and women get along. She told me: " Under age ten, and after age fifty men a... Read More

Your note made me laugh. I want my sixty three year old body back! Fifty would be a dream come true. LOL I remember what my Mother told me once when I was discussing how men and women get along. She told me: " Under age ten, and after age fifty men and women can be friends. At the young end, just because we are all just children. Puberty hasn't changed us yet. At the old end (after fifty) we all look like dead grapes, so we can actually just like each other just as we are. "
Smiles, Kevin

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Gail Moore

03/02/2021

Thanks so much Kevin,
Ah yes to be fifty again, would be like being a youngster. Won't be too long before my kids are that age Lol. :-)

Thanks so much Kevin,
Ah yes to be fifty again, would be like being a youngster. Won't be too long before my kids are that age Lol. :-)

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BEN BROWN

02/23/2021

BEN BROWN

Awesome!!! What an amazing story. Well done.

BEN BROWN

Awesome!!! What an amazing story. Well done.

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Gail Moore

02/23/2021

Thank you so much Ben, I really appreciate you reading :-)

Thank you so much Ben, I really appreciate you reading :-)

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Martha Huett

01/03/2021

You've got a great imagination, Gail. And a talent to put it together in a highly entertaining story. Loved it! :)

You've got a great imagination, Gail. And a talent to put it together in a highly entertaining story. Loved it! :)

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Gail Moore

01/03/2021

Thank you so much Martha and thank you for reading :-)

Thank you so much Martha and thank you for reading :-)

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Chaitali

12/05/2020

what an amazingly written mystery. love it till the end!

what an amazingly written mystery. love it till the end!

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Gail Moore

12/05/2020

Thank you very much :-)

Thank you very much :-)

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JD

12/03/2018

Cool freaky story, Gail! Very intriguing mystery 'adventure' tale that keeps you guessing right up to the end.... Thanks for sharing it on Storystar! :-)

Cool freaky story, Gail! Very intriguing mystery 'adventure' tale that keeps you guessing right up to the end.... Thanks for sharing it on Storystar! :-)

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Gail Moore

12/03/2018

Thanks Julie, I am very pleased you liked it.
Was a day like that in Auckland today. Went out for coffee at 8:00 and it was pitch black.
Hundreds of lightening strikes and very loud thunder. My daughters firm got hit and the whole buil... Read More

Thanks Julie, I am very pleased you liked it.
Was a day like that in Auckland today. Went out for coffee at 8:00 and it was pitch black.
Hundreds of lightening strikes and very loud thunder. My daughters firm got hit and the whole building was shaking. The fire brigade turned up. Scary stuff.
This afternoon we have beautiful sunshine. Lol

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