The book thats only opened once

JD

I like the beginning of your story, Patricia. But it seems like just the beginning... as though you wrote the opening lines and then abandoned the story. There is not enough of the story written or developed to fairly judge it, as a reader, since it... Read More

I like the beginning of your story, Patricia. But it seems like just the beginning... as though you wrote the opening lines and then abandoned the story. There is not enough of the story written or developed to fairly judge it, as a reader, since it does not seem like a complete story, only the first few lines. But I liked the first few lines enough that I wanted to read more, so I hope that you will continue to develop this beginning into a complete story. And please take the time to correct your writing errors before you submit your stories so that readers can better appreciate what you have written. If you do not care enough about your writing to correct it before submitting it to readers, then how can you expect readers to care enough about it to judge it well?