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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Survival / Healing / Renewal
- Published: 03/12/2019
Dear mom and dad
Teen, U, from Miami, florida, United StatesDear mom and dad,
I'm growing up
That's not bad
But it's time to wake up
Mom
I love you
but your a ticking time bomb
I can't do anything right but thats your point of view
I know you love me
But it doesn't always feel that way
You're always screaming at me like a banshee
And it is everyday
Dad
i basically grew up without a father
that's pretty bad
you left before I was even a toddler
You say you love me but you only hurt me
You missed it all
You missed what I could be
Now all I do is fall
I'm getting older
You two impacted my growth
now I’m bolder
I love appreciate you both
Thank you
Dear mom and dad(Wendoly Oviedo)
Dear mom and dad,
I'm growing up
That's not bad
But it's time to wake up
Mom
I love you
but your a ticking time bomb
I can't do anything right but thats your point of view
I know you love me
But it doesn't always feel that way
You're always screaming at me like a banshee
And it is everyday
Dad
i basically grew up without a father
that's pretty bad
you left before I was even a toddler
You say you love me but you only hurt me
You missed it all
You missed what I could be
Now all I do is fall
I'm getting older
You two impacted my growth
now I’m bolder
I love appreciate you both
Thank you
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Maria
03/12/2019Great ,Wendoly! This poem reflects a lot of your personality. You still have much more to express through writing.
Mrs.Coronado
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Ms. Chaca
03/12/2019Wow. This is beautiful and definitely what growing up feels like. I like how you can forgive and still appreciate. Keep writing.
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Wendoly Oviedo
03/13/2019Thanks. I tried to write from experience and capture what my life has been so far
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