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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Pain / Problems / Adversity
- Published: 03/15/2019
Scars
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I was afraid of them showing
They are usually hidden with my sleeves
But that day the wind wasn’t blowing
Not even a breeze
The lines on my arms went in every direction
I know that what i did isn’t good
I didn’t want anyone to see
I felt like there was no one who understood
I'm so afraid of staying alive
Coping with this pain is hard
I'm not sure if i want to survive
I really wanted to die
But the cuts weren't deep enough
I feel like this life is a lie
This is all so tough
I'm trying to get better
But it doesn't really work
things get worse with every letter
All of this help and not a single perk
Scars(Wendoly Oviedo)
I was afraid of them showing
They are usually hidden with my sleeves
But that day the wind wasn’t blowing
Not even a breeze
The lines on my arms went in every direction
I know that what i did isn’t good
I didn’t want anyone to see
I felt like there was no one who understood
I'm so afraid of staying alive
Coping with this pain is hard
I'm not sure if i want to survive
I really wanted to die
But the cuts weren't deep enough
I feel like this life is a lie
This is all so tough
I'm trying to get better
But it doesn't really work
things get worse with every letter
All of this help and not a single perk
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Hannah
03/19/2019You are always free to write on here and tell us anything you want! We'll help you get through this and stick with it. I love your stories and poems, by the way.
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Gail
03/17/2019I don't know what to say. Your poem makes me cry.
Remember there is always a way out.
Find someone to talk too that will be there for you 24 x7 a family member maybe.
You are not alone. I know you think you are but you are not.
My brother took his own life and it destroyed so many people for such a long time.
Always remember there are people that are their to help.
Your writing is awesome so maybe this is something you could take up to put your mind into a better place :-)
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JD
03/17/2019Wendoly, I'm sorry you're going through all this, but I believe you have the strength and ability to pull yourself out. We all have our own demons to battle and struggles to overcome. The best way I have found to get out of a dark hole is to focus on the light and climb toward it. Find ways to help those who are worse off than you, volunteer at your local animal shelter to give your attention to lonely pets desperate for love. If you spend all your time focusing on your own problems and misery you will just get more miserable. When you start to focus on others, and look for the positive things in yourself and in your life, you will surely start to feel better.
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Kevin Hughes
03/16/2019Wendoly ,
Two things, you are not alone. And there is a lot you can do to help yourself - like call a hotline, speak to a therapist, or seek treatment and diagnosis. What you are going through might have a name, a treatment plan, a support group. Talk to the experts. Good luck.
Smiles, Kevin
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Wendoly Oviedo
03/16/2019I am taking anti depressant medication and I am trying to get help yet it isn’t helping all to much :(
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