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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 03/27/2019
She woke up. It was at 11:59pm,
Perfect. She said she'll end her suffering now. She's only 12 how can she do this?
Let me tell you what her life was like. She's only 12 and she already wants to give up. Well, there are many reasons why. She gets bullied. She gets abused by her family. She cuts, she starves herself.
She found someone with the same problem. Her partner, he's what made her sweet smile, laugh... Happiness, come back. She found her true love. She knew that something bad would happen and it did. She gave up she had enough.
That was short, yes. Here we are, in the present. It's 11:59pm, at exactly 12 she'll end it all.
She got ready. With the short time, she wrote her goodbye letter. She told god to forgive her for her sins and what she was about to do.
12:00am
It was time, she had her gun that her grandfather gave to her since he knew she loved guns.
It was time.
Her last thoughts...
"If I die tonight will anyone care?
Will anyone cry? Would anyone wonder why I died? Would anyone miss me? Would everyone just forget me? Will they just move on?
Let's find out.
I love you...my dear..."
My last night(Unknown)
She woke up. It was at 11:59pm,
Perfect. She said she'll end her suffering now. She's only 12 how can she do this?
Let me tell you what her life was like. She's only 12 and she already wants to give up. Well, there are many reasons why. She gets bullied. She gets abused by her family. She cuts, she starves herself.
She found someone with the same problem. Her partner, he's what made her sweet smile, laugh... Happiness, come back. She found her true love. She knew that something bad would happen and it did. She gave up she had enough.
That was short, yes. Here we are, in the present. It's 11:59pm, at exactly 12 she'll end it all.
She got ready. With the short time, she wrote her goodbye letter. She told god to forgive her for her sins and what she was about to do.
12:00am
It was time, she had her gun that her grandfather gave to her since he knew she loved guns.
It was time.
Her last thoughts...
"If I die tonight will anyone care?
Will anyone cry? Would anyone wonder why I died? Would anyone miss me? Would everyone just forget me? Will they just move on?
Let's find out.
I love you...my dear..."
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JD
03/27/2019I'm sorry, but I personally don't like stories about suicide very much, although I think your story is very well written. I think suicide, unless it is made in sacrifice to save the lives of others, is the most selfish thing anyone can do. It shows they don't care about anyone or anything in life and just want everyone to feel bad about not making things better for them, as if they think the whole world and everyone in it is supposed to make them happy. And once they are gone... if they do succeed in killing themselves, it is those left behind who must suffer. To me, suicide is is a very cruel thing to do to those who you will be leaving behind.
Don't do it.
Everyone goes through bad times, but usually the bad times don't last and there are lots of good times still to come.
If you quit too soon, you'll never know what good times you've missed, and you'll create a LOT of bad times for those you leave.
Suicide is a permanent 'solution' to what is usually a very temporary problem.
Don't do it.
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