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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Fantasy / Dreams / Wishes
- Published: 04/18/2019
My Unforgettable First Crush
Born 2000, F, from Assam, IndiaI didn't even know how my time passed
As at every instant I wanted to get a glimpse of you.
I longed to see you everyday
But you didn't even know that I existed.
You didn't take notice of me and my desperation for you
As I was an ordinary girl with no extraordinary attraction.
My love is deeper like the ocean,
As I desperately missed you in the days of your absence
And even a glimpse of you from far away was a source for my happiness.
I was always dying to see a glimpse of your smile,
But you never even glanced your eyes on me.
I was always pining to talk to you
But it was the insurmountable fantasy of an introverted girl.
Yet you will always be my first crush
And an unforgettable and unfulfilled memory of true love.
My Unforgettable First Crush(Rini Gogoi)
I didn't even know how my time passed
As at every instant I wanted to get a glimpse of you.
I longed to see you everyday
But you didn't even know that I existed.
You didn't take notice of me and my desperation for you
As I was an ordinary girl with no extraordinary attraction.
My love is deeper like the ocean,
As I desperately missed you in the days of your absence
And even a glimpse of you from far away was a source for my happiness.
I was always dying to see a glimpse of your smile,
But you never even glanced your eyes on me.
I was always pining to talk to you
But it was the insurmountable fantasy of an introverted girl.
Yet you will always be my first crush
And an unforgettable and unfulfilled memory of true love.
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Kevin Hughes
04/20/2019Rini,
When I was in Eighth Grade most of us were 12 or 13 years old, with one precocious 11 year old, and two slightly behind 14 year olds- your story could apply to almost all of us. In fact, all three of my closest friends (two guys, and one girl) all had crushes on folks they never talked to.
One guy even had a crush on our teacher.
Your story is Universal.
Smiles, Kevin
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Bhartashree Gogoi
04/18/2019It's really a common story I believe ,,even with me...I have so many crushes? but ignore them all like hell whenever face 'em.
But yeah good write, it didn't die for unnecessary exaggerations n kept it simply smooth ?
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