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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Life Experience
- Published: 05/03/2019
She adore apple drinks a lot and she love to lead a loveable life her name is barrey.One day she saw a girl who is acting like a kid Barrey like to talk with that girl her name is Dev.After that they met unexpectably in many places.They start to talk like frnds but barrey love dev and she tell her love to dev in pleasant night.Dev smiles at barrey they lead loveable days.Unfortunately barrey and dev put fight .Barrey suffered a lot without dev.Both love make them to join again.Whatever dev ask barrey will do that.But still now dev not tell her love to barrey.Barrey is waiting to hear that three magical words from Dev.
Love of a girl(Thanya) She adore apple drinks a lot and she love to lead a loveable life her name is barrey.One day she saw a girl who is acting like a kid Barrey like to talk with that girl her name is Dev.After that they met unexpectably in many places.They start to talk like frnds but barrey love dev and she tell her love to dev in pleasant night.Dev smiles at barrey they lead loveable days.Unfortunately barrey and dev put fight .Barrey suffered a lot without dev.Both love make them to join again.Whatever dev ask barrey will do that.But still now dev not tell her love to barrey.Barrey is waiting to hear that three magical words from Dev.
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JD
05/04/2019Thanya, I'm glad you are writing, but you have not developed your 'story' enough for it to be an actual story, and your writing is too full of English writing errors for readers to be able to appreciate reading it. I suggest you rewrite your story with more detail and very carefully check it for errors and correct them before you post again. Thanks.
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