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By Laina
Born 2000, F, from Illinois, United States
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“Help”

Red
Is all I see
Red
The drips coming from my wrists
Someone help
Please
“Mom”
I scream
But no one comes
I just want to leave this horrible place
Please take me
The way people treat me
Makes me cry
No one loves me
I’d rather die
Nothing will help me
Nobody can do anything
No one can say anything
I bottle my emotions
People don’t know
Nor will they ever
My silent tears come from my eyes
My anger makes me hate the world
I think people hate me
But they don’t
In my mind my friends are enemies
My sadness kills me slowly
The hate towards everything fuels me
My conscience tells me lies that people say about me
People tell me to stop
But what do they know
No one can control the monster I have become

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Jysell Garcia- Alvarez

06/05/2019

I LOVED THIS PIECE. I AM NOT GOING TO LIE BUT THIS IS HOW I FEEL. I SUFFER FROM DEPRESSION SO SOME DAYS DEATH WOULD BE GOOD BUT SOME DAYS LIFE IS WHAT I WANT. THANK YOU FOR SHARING!

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Laina

06/05/2019

I am sorry you feel this way. I also feel this way. I am really glad you liked this, thanks for commenting!!
-Laina

Honesty

05/21/2019

I relate to this so much! I think your writing is so true and i love it! I think i am officially your biggest fan!

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Laina

05/22/2019

Thank you so much!
-Laina

Jd

05/20/2019

I feel so sad that you feel this way about yourself. But I am sure that you are not a monster and that no one else thinks that about you either. No doubt you are much harder on yourself than anyone else. I hope you will be able to start to focus on any and all of the good things in your life, and in the people you are close to. Once you start focusing on others, and on positive things, the bad stu...
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Jd

05/21/2019

I think life is change. Everything that is living is always changing, it is simply a part of life.
I'm really glad to hear that you are trying to focus on better things, Laina. Keep trying :-)

Laina

05/21/2019

Thank you. I have been trying to focus on the better things but there is always a part of me that will never change. Your feedback means the world to me.
-Laina

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