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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Ideas / Discovery / Opinions
- Published: 11/20/2019
X ray mode
Born 1953, F, from Auckland, New ZealandA shrieking call from his friend prompted Evan to stop writing his history essay and run down the alleyway two doors up from his home to visit his long time school mate.
Evan and Jack had been friends since kindergarten, both intellectuals from a very early age. This was their big exam year and both had already earned enough credits for a pass and extra credits that would automatically go into next years marking.
He thought at first Jack might just be nervous about tonight as both of them were going to be awarded the academic achievement award at the college end of year awards ceremony and had to give a speech.
Neither of the boys were comfortable with public speaking.
The call, “EVAN, COME NOW HURRY, I AM FREAKING OUT!“ Sounding like he was almost hyperventilating as he spoke.
Down the alley way, turn left, and one house up, Jack was pacing up and down on the deck waiting for backup you might say. Evan laughed as Jack was still in his undies. He always slept in his undies. Even when he stayed elsewhere it was always just the undies.
Then the thought went through his head with the look on Jack’s face, 'He’s murdered an intruder and wants me to help get rid of the body'. Yes that’s it. Maybe I should phone the police now. That thought went out the door and Evan went back to laughing as he noticed skid marks on Jack’s undies.
He yelled out to Jack. ”For the love of mankind go and change your underwear and get that skinny white frame into some clothing.”
Jack yelled out telling Evan he was going to stay put, ”can you please get me some clothing from my bedroom and then come up here.”
Back to his thoughts. “Hey is there a dead body in your room you haven’t told me about?”
Jack yells back, “technically no” then mumbled under his breath. “Not a fresh one anyway.”
Evan went into Jack’s room, fetched some clothing and underwear, and went upstairs to Jack’s parents bedroom and out onto the deck to give him his clothing. He could not help but notice his pastie white face. Jack stripped down bare on the deck, put fresh undies on, tee shirt inside out and then jumped over the deck onto the driveway.
Something he had never done before.
Evan walked through the house and grabbed the house keys from the hall table, locked the front door and met Jack on the driveway.
Okay, “what’s so important that I had to run from my house to rescue you?”
Jack explains to Evan that he won’t believe him, so he had to show him.
It’s all about the program we are writing.
Evan and Jack were developing a computer program that would allow your iPad or iPhone to X-ray any part of the body.
Evan had left Jack the night before with what was left to finish it. Hopefully it was all going to fall into place, and they would make their fortunes.
That was the grand plan anyway.
A quick sprint back to Evan's house and Jack immediately jumps on Evan’s computer.
“I sent it in an email before“ he said to Evan.
“BEFORE WHAT” demands Evan.
Jack asks Evan if he could go and get his dad before he opened any emails,
He follows his friend's instructions as he is quite concerned by his behavior.
Evan goes upstairs to summons his dad, very puzzled as to what’s going on with Jack.
He is on the phone so Evan picked up a pad and pen and writes.
Extremely worried about Jack’s behavior. Would you come downstairs ASAP.
They often communicated like this when his dad was busy.
“Dad will be down in a minute” says Evan.
2 minutes later Evan’s dad comes down and wants to know why they have taken him away from his work.
Jack had developed a nervous shake, was sweating and looked like he was about to cry.
Evan shrugs and Jack hops up from the computer and hands them the iPad that was sitting on the bed.
“Open that email and turn on our X-ray mode.”
“So it works then” Evan said with a grin.
Jack says nothing and opens X-ray mode, throws it at Evan’s dad and then jumps behind him.
“Hold the camera up and look around.” When it showed nothing he asked them to walk around, "keep walking you will see something shortly.”
All of a sudden Evan’s dad throws the iPad back on the bed and screams, "WHAT THE F—-K"
Evan had never heard his father scream in fright nor had he heard him swear. He always said that swearing was just a waste of words.
Evan picked up the iPad and looked at it. He repeats his fathers swear words.
“Everywhere, they are EVERYWHERE" he screams. Evan and Jack had inadvertently built a computer program that could see spirits. It didn’t take X-rays like it was supposed to. Instead, it was picking up spirits left, right, and center.
They had all fled to the office upstairs to talk. Evan’s dad paces and concludes that if they are on the iPad today then they have always been there. They are not hurting anyone so none of them need to worry. Although you could see he was bothered but trying to calm both boys.
He walks down stairs alone, picks up the iPad and goes back up to the boys. Sweat was on his brow.
He turns on the iPad and immediately sees one adult and one child spirit standing beside them that could obviously see that they could see them looking at them.
The figure was trying to talk.
Evan’s dad, a computer wiz himself, and who worked as a computer technician, sits and thinks.
The boys sitting so close to him that they were all squashed up on the couch.
He tells Evan to go and turn on the Bluetooth speaker in the kitchen.
Both boys get up together and turn on the Bluetooth.
Adjustments are made to the X-ray mode program to enable the spirits to have a voice. They try it and it works. Not well but it worked all the same. They were literally able to talk to ghosts, spirits or whatever anyone wants to call them.
An app that sees spirits, unbelievable.
Written by two teenage boys, unbelievable.
Part two:
One year on. The boys are no longer freaked out over their discovery. They slowly got used to the idea that spirits do exist.
The two boys, Evan and Jack, have trademarked their app. As yet it has not hit the market as not one spirit / ghost has been at all useful.
If you have a product to sell to the public it has to be useful for something or it has to do something and this app has done nothing. I will explain.
These spirits are just that, spirits. They have no reason to be in the place they stand and can sometimes stand in that spot for days. They have no purpose, or as far as they know they have no purpose.
Maybe this is like a purgatory or a stopover to someplace better or worse.
As yet they don’t have these answers. Not one spirit has been claimed as such by their beloved families so maybe they never belonged. Maybe they are aliens in a lost dimension that X-ray mode has picked up on.
Despite extensive advertising the faces of all the spirits on social media, not one family has recognised any of them.
X-ray mode can pick up a spirit in any room any outdoor area or anywhere that one might be hanging around. However the boys have questioned many over the past year since they discovered what the x-ray Mode app could do, and although they can talk, that’s it.
No information whatsoever.
Here is a typical conversation with a spirit.
Q What is your name?
A I don’t know
Q When did you die?
A I don’t know
Q Do you know who your family is?
A I don’t know
Q Do you have any feelings?
A I don’t know
Q Do you know why you are here?
A I don’t know
Anyway you get the picture. Despite this they have been offered a substantial undisclosed amount of money for the app from a well-recognized app company.
The boys are about to sign a contract making them extremely wealthy teens.
The boys also discovered an error in their program, it was simply two letters written the wrong way around.
Adjustments have been made and the original X-ray Mode has hit the ground running.
Sales exceeded expectations and are still soaring.
The End
X ray mode(Gail Moore)
A shrieking call from his friend prompted Evan to stop writing his history essay and run down the alleyway two doors up from his home to visit his long time school mate.
Evan and Jack had been friends since kindergarten, both intellectuals from a very early age. This was their big exam year and both had already earned enough credits for a pass and extra credits that would automatically go into next years marking.
He thought at first Jack might just be nervous about tonight as both of them were going to be awarded the academic achievement award at the college end of year awards ceremony and had to give a speech.
Neither of the boys were comfortable with public speaking.
The call, “EVAN, COME NOW HURRY, I AM FREAKING OUT!“ Sounding like he was almost hyperventilating as he spoke.
Down the alley way, turn left, and one house up, Jack was pacing up and down on the deck waiting for backup you might say. Evan laughed as Jack was still in his undies. He always slept in his undies. Even when he stayed elsewhere it was always just the undies.
Then the thought went through his head with the look on Jack’s face, 'He’s murdered an intruder and wants me to help get rid of the body'. Yes that’s it. Maybe I should phone the police now. That thought went out the door and Evan went back to laughing as he noticed skid marks on Jack’s undies.
He yelled out to Jack. ”For the love of mankind go and change your underwear and get that skinny white frame into some clothing.”
Jack yelled out telling Evan he was going to stay put, ”can you please get me some clothing from my bedroom and then come up here.”
Back to his thoughts. “Hey is there a dead body in your room you haven’t told me about?”
Jack yells back, “technically no” then mumbled under his breath. “Not a fresh one anyway.”
Evan went into Jack’s room, fetched some clothing and underwear, and went upstairs to Jack’s parents bedroom and out onto the deck to give him his clothing. He could not help but notice his pastie white face. Jack stripped down bare on the deck, put fresh undies on, tee shirt inside out and then jumped over the deck onto the driveway.
Something he had never done before.
Evan walked through the house and grabbed the house keys from the hall table, locked the front door and met Jack on the driveway.
Okay, “what’s so important that I had to run from my house to rescue you?”
Jack explains to Evan that he won’t believe him, so he had to show him.
It’s all about the program we are writing.
Evan and Jack were developing a computer program that would allow your iPad or iPhone to X-ray any part of the body.
Evan had left Jack the night before with what was left to finish it. Hopefully it was all going to fall into place, and they would make their fortunes.
That was the grand plan anyway.
A quick sprint back to Evan's house and Jack immediately jumps on Evan’s computer.
“I sent it in an email before“ he said to Evan.
“BEFORE WHAT” demands Evan.
Jack asks Evan if he could go and get his dad before he opened any emails,
He follows his friend's instructions as he is quite concerned by his behavior.
Evan goes upstairs to summons his dad, very puzzled as to what’s going on with Jack.
He is on the phone so Evan picked up a pad and pen and writes.
Extremely worried about Jack’s behavior. Would you come downstairs ASAP.
They often communicated like this when his dad was busy.
“Dad will be down in a minute” says Evan.
2 minutes later Evan’s dad comes down and wants to know why they have taken him away from his work.
Jack had developed a nervous shake, was sweating and looked like he was about to cry.
Evan shrugs and Jack hops up from the computer and hands them the iPad that was sitting on the bed.
“Open that email and turn on our X-ray mode.”
“So it works then” Evan said with a grin.
Jack says nothing and opens X-ray mode, throws it at Evan’s dad and then jumps behind him.
“Hold the camera up and look around.” When it showed nothing he asked them to walk around, "keep walking you will see something shortly.”
All of a sudden Evan’s dad throws the iPad back on the bed and screams, "WHAT THE F—-K"
Evan had never heard his father scream in fright nor had he heard him swear. He always said that swearing was just a waste of words.
Evan picked up the iPad and looked at it. He repeats his fathers swear words.
“Everywhere, they are EVERYWHERE" he screams. Evan and Jack had inadvertently built a computer program that could see spirits. It didn’t take X-rays like it was supposed to. Instead, it was picking up spirits left, right, and center.
They had all fled to the office upstairs to talk. Evan’s dad paces and concludes that if they are on the iPad today then they have always been there. They are not hurting anyone so none of them need to worry. Although you could see he was bothered but trying to calm both boys.
He walks down stairs alone, picks up the iPad and goes back up to the boys. Sweat was on his brow.
He turns on the iPad and immediately sees one adult and one child spirit standing beside them that could obviously see that they could see them looking at them.
The figure was trying to talk.
Evan’s dad, a computer wiz himself, and who worked as a computer technician, sits and thinks.
The boys sitting so close to him that they were all squashed up on the couch.
He tells Evan to go and turn on the Bluetooth speaker in the kitchen.
Both boys get up together and turn on the Bluetooth.
Adjustments are made to the X-ray mode program to enable the spirits to have a voice. They try it and it works. Not well but it worked all the same. They were literally able to talk to ghosts, spirits or whatever anyone wants to call them.
An app that sees spirits, unbelievable.
Written by two teenage boys, unbelievable.
Part two:
One year on. The boys are no longer freaked out over their discovery. They slowly got used to the idea that spirits do exist.
The two boys, Evan and Jack, have trademarked their app. As yet it has not hit the market as not one spirit / ghost has been at all useful.
If you have a product to sell to the public it has to be useful for something or it has to do something and this app has done nothing. I will explain.
These spirits are just that, spirits. They have no reason to be in the place they stand and can sometimes stand in that spot for days. They have no purpose, or as far as they know they have no purpose.
Maybe this is like a purgatory or a stopover to someplace better or worse.
As yet they don’t have these answers. Not one spirit has been claimed as such by their beloved families so maybe they never belonged. Maybe they are aliens in a lost dimension that X-ray mode has picked up on.
Despite extensive advertising the faces of all the spirits on social media, not one family has recognised any of them.
X-ray mode can pick up a spirit in any room any outdoor area or anywhere that one might be hanging around. However the boys have questioned many over the past year since they discovered what the x-ray Mode app could do, and although they can talk, that’s it.
No information whatsoever.
Here is a typical conversation with a spirit.
Q What is your name?
A I don’t know
Q When did you die?
A I don’t know
Q Do you know who your family is?
A I don’t know
Q Do you have any feelings?
A I don’t know
Q Do you know why you are here?
A I don’t know
Anyway you get the picture. Despite this they have been offered a substantial undisclosed amount of money for the app from a well-recognized app company.
The boys are about to sign a contract making them extremely wealthy teens.
The boys also discovered an error in their program, it was simply two letters written the wrong way around.
Adjustments have been made and the original X-ray Mode has hit the ground running.
Sales exceeded expectations and are still soaring.
The End
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Cheryl Ryan
04/29/2024It is a great story that catches my interest from the beginning to the end. The Author demonstrated an impressive talent for writing science fiction stories that can interest the readers. Thank you for sharing!
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Joel Kiula
04/26/2024Great story of invention and great discovery of spirit that may have been there for a while.
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Shelly Garrod
04/26/2024Amazing story. I have always been intrigued by the notion of spirits. I once lived in a home that I'm
sure was haunted, but in a good way. Great job Gail. Loved this story.
Blessings, Shelly
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Sylvia Maclagan
02/09/2021I'm intrigued by your story. I didn't expect the spirits, but when they appeared, I thought they would communicate, not act like frozen robots! After all, some people have sessions to speak to their lost loved ones. I don't...sad. But I have had experiences, usually just before waking up, where a sort of materialised form of one or two of my loved ones appeared alongside my bed. I felt that I could touch them...sigh. Reality soon gets to one.
You write so well, Gail. I shall be searching for more of your stories. Bless you.
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Gail Moore
02/09/2021Hi Sylvia,
Thanks for reading. Even after the odd experience I have had in my lifetime I’m not sure if I believe in spirits or not. It’s strange you have had them just as waking and for me it’s just when I am drifting off to sleep.
It’s a subject I am intrigued with.
This story was a bit of a fun story I wrote for one of my grandkids.
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BEN BROWN
02/04/2021BEN BROWN
A very well written story. The world of spirituality fascinates me by a long way.
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Gail Moore
02/04/2021Thanks for reading Ben. I am also fascinated by the afterlife. If there is one. Maybe or maybe not :-)
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Gordon England
12/06/2020A fun read. As usual you write very well. This story might be truer than you think. We have had spirits in our house off and on and I wrote a play about them. That would be a cool app that would make the kids rich.
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Gordon England
12/06/2020It is called Ghost Tale. You can see it at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4hiu5OVEagI&feature=youtu.be or read it in my Story Star library as Ghost Story. My wife plays the lead and herself in this true story. Thank you.
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Gail Moore
12/06/2020Thanks so much for your lovely comment.
Gordon, What was your play called and may I read it?
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Jason James Parker
12/05/2020This is such a great read and more than worthy of pinning! I always enjoy your writing, Gail.: )
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Martha Huett
12/04/2020Spirits! So imaginative, Gail. I just loved how you mixed tech into your story. And a very happy ending, too (except for the spirits) Thanks for sharing it :)
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Pratik
06/29/2020Amazing. I really love such stories. Spirits was something I hadn't expected in the story. It's Interesting.
Your story won't let me sleep tonight. As now I know there are spirits around me.
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Gail Moore
06/29/2020Pratik, I am very happy it had an impact on you.
Sleep well my friend. Turn off the computer and your blue tooth. :-)
All jokes aside, happy you enjoyed :-)
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Christy
12/08/2019Wow! I love how detailed and enjoyable this story was. If that app was actually real, boy, all hell would break loose in my country; a particular set of tribes call spirits "Ojuju Calabar", which are basically evil spirits/ghosts that bring misfortunes and curses upon an individual.
But seriously though, nice choice of words and proper planning. I indeed enjoyed the story, alongside most of your readers.
xoxo, Christy
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Jason James Parker
12/02/2019A LOT of fun. Your writing is fluid and very pleasurable to read.
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JD
11/20/2019That was a really inventive and original story, Gail, but also kinda freaky. Personally, the last thing I would want to believe about my loved ones who have passed is that they are just hanging out somewhere with blank stares and blank minds, with no thoughts and no purpose. That sounds like hell, and I would not wish for anyone to go there, nor to think that such 'spirits' are surrounding me and us all in this life, on this side of veil. So that made it a bit of a horror story, for me. But it was also a comedy in that it was so far-fetched and strange you had to laugh. It was certainly an intriguing and thought provoking idea, and made for a great story, and a good laugh too, even though it was creepy! Well done! :-)
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Gail Moore
11/20/2019Thank you so much.
I suppose it is a depressing thought!!! It's just as well we don't know these things and hopefully never will.
Just imagine. :-)
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JD
11/20/2019PS - The idea of turning your phone into an x-ray machine is totally cool! You should patent the idea! :-)
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Kevin Hughes
11/20/2019Gail,
I loved this story. Especially the "Ghost Answers": "I don't know." Are you sure this wasn't a husband. LOL Seriously though, in many of the books I have read over the years, most spirits are unable to communicate with the living. In some the Spirits just seem to fade slowly over time until just a smidgen of endoprotoplasmic goop is left. LOL
But everyone would buy that app. Everyone.
Smiles, Kevin
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Gail Moore
11/20/2019Oh, you hit the nail on the head. Yes Shane this is you lol ”i don't know” hehe
Thank you, Kevin,
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