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Time to go

By Zachary Pereira
Born 2000, M, from California, United States
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Is it time already?
i guess i'm ready
Ready as i'll ever be.

What a life it has been!
So little of sin
I'll go out with a grin

I'll be missed but never forgotten
Even when my body is all rotten.

I love you family, i always will.
At least i don't have to pay any more bills!!

Time for the next adventure!!!

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Bethlehem Eisenhour

06/26/2020

Very good, keep writing. Have a nice day.

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Zachary Pereira

02/03/2020

I tried to make my poem here less depressing and sad you know? It's better saying death is the next big adventure.

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JD

02/01/2020

There is a famous quote by Helen Keller: "Life is either a daring adventure or nothing."
In your poem you imply that death is too....
I hope that both life and death hold adventures beyond our imagining....

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Gail Moore

02/02/2020

Well said.

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