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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Survival / Success
- Subject: Courage / Heroism
- Published: 02/07/2020
The Power of Peace
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There are people gathered all around me and the school bully outside my high school. His name is Tom, he's been picking on me and kids like me for too long and i just wanted it to stop. This all started when I told on Tom to my math teacher Mr. Mort, and he told the principal then the principal talked to Tom. The next day, I had to use the restroom so i walked in and saw Tom and his buddies picking on this skinny kid who i didn't know but i knew i had to help. Tom asked the kid if he was the one that told on him, the kid said no but Tom didn't believe him and shoved the kid to the ground.
I had to stop him but i have the option to walk away but i just can't. "Hey Tom" i said, Tom looks at me with anger in is eyes and says "What the hell do you want ugly"?
"I am the one that told on you". Tom approached me and he tells me "After school, meet me outside, your dead meat." then he shoves me to the ground and him and his buddies walk away. The skinny kid gets up and thanks me for sticking up for him, he introduces himself as William. "Are you ok William?" i asked.
"Yeah, i'll be fine but Tom is coming after you".
"I know, but i won't let him hurt anyone else". I said and i leave to my last class of the day.
During my science class, I think about what will happen in the fight, anything can happen really. But i do probably know i'll get beat up but the thing is: I won't fight back because i am going to do this the peaceful way. News about the fight spread like wildfire to other people A few hours later, the bell rings and everyone leaves and gathers at the front. I gather my stuff and my bag and walk out and see people gathering obviously wanting to see the fight between Me and Tom, i see Tom standing in the middle of the crowd looking at me with pure rage in his eyes. I am scared but i won't give Tom the satisfaction of showing my fear. I set my stuff down and walked up to him and said "Tom, i just want to talk there is no need for violence". "You got me in trouble so now YOUR gonna be in trouble with my fist!!!" then he punches me in the face and i go down. The pain was terrible, but i stand back up and face him again.
"I will not fight you, i am just telling you to stop picking on people".
"I DON'T CARE!!!!"
"I know you don't, but i do care. Beat me up instead of them, i'm the one that told on you". Suddenly the people started to cheer for me because they knew i am doing the right thing by standing up to Tom. Tom looks at the crowd angrily and then looks at me and i see the fire in his eyes. I wasn't gonna fight back so i told him "Tom, you can beat me up all you want but you know i'm right".
"SHUT UP, SHUT UP, SHUT UP!!!!!!" Tom then yelled and the crowd backed away. Then Tom shoves me to the ground and stands over me and he starts choking me with his bare hands. I hear the crowd telling him to stop but they're too afraid to stop him. I look at Tom's red face and still blazing angry fire in his eyes. He won't listen to me people like him never do but i did the right thing, i stood up to him and now my job is done. Then i black out.
I wake up in the hospital with family around me. I still have pain but not bad, but i smile. I ask what happened with Tom and my mother told me that the police were called and they came and got Tom but Tom didn't go without a fight but this was a fight Tom didn't win and he got arrest for assaulting officers. I know i did the right thing, i stood up to Tom, stood up for all my friends and actually lived through the fight.
The End
The Power of Peace(Zachary Pereira)
There are people gathered all around me and the school bully outside my high school. His name is Tom, he's been picking on me and kids like me for too long and i just wanted it to stop. This all started when I told on Tom to my math teacher Mr. Mort, and he told the principal then the principal talked to Tom. The next day, I had to use the restroom so i walked in and saw Tom and his buddies picking on this skinny kid who i didn't know but i knew i had to help. Tom asked the kid if he was the one that told on him, the kid said no but Tom didn't believe him and shoved the kid to the ground.
I had to stop him but i have the option to walk away but i just can't. "Hey Tom" i said, Tom looks at me with anger in is eyes and says "What the hell do you want ugly"?
"I am the one that told on you". Tom approached me and he tells me "After school, meet me outside, your dead meat." then he shoves me to the ground and him and his buddies walk away. The skinny kid gets up and thanks me for sticking up for him, he introduces himself as William. "Are you ok William?" i asked.
"Yeah, i'll be fine but Tom is coming after you".
"I know, but i won't let him hurt anyone else". I said and i leave to my last class of the day.
During my science class, I think about what will happen in the fight, anything can happen really. But i do probably know i'll get beat up but the thing is: I won't fight back because i am going to do this the peaceful way. News about the fight spread like wildfire to other people A few hours later, the bell rings and everyone leaves and gathers at the front. I gather my stuff and my bag and walk out and see people gathering obviously wanting to see the fight between Me and Tom, i see Tom standing in the middle of the crowd looking at me with pure rage in his eyes. I am scared but i won't give Tom the satisfaction of showing my fear. I set my stuff down and walked up to him and said "Tom, i just want to talk there is no need for violence". "You got me in trouble so now YOUR gonna be in trouble with my fist!!!" then he punches me in the face and i go down. The pain was terrible, but i stand back up and face him again.
"I will not fight you, i am just telling you to stop picking on people".
"I DON'T CARE!!!!"
"I know you don't, but i do care. Beat me up instead of them, i'm the one that told on you". Suddenly the people started to cheer for me because they knew i am doing the right thing by standing up to Tom. Tom looks at the crowd angrily and then looks at me and i see the fire in his eyes. I wasn't gonna fight back so i told him "Tom, you can beat me up all you want but you know i'm right".
"SHUT UP, SHUT UP, SHUT UP!!!!!!" Tom then yelled and the crowd backed away. Then Tom shoves me to the ground and stands over me and he starts choking me with his bare hands. I hear the crowd telling him to stop but they're too afraid to stop him. I look at Tom's red face and still blazing angry fire in his eyes. He won't listen to me people like him never do but i did the right thing, i stood up to him and now my job is done. Then i black out.
I wake up in the hospital with family around me. I still have pain but not bad, but i smile. I ask what happened with Tom and my mother told me that the police were called and they came and got Tom but Tom didn't go without a fight but this was a fight Tom didn't win and he got arrest for assaulting officers. I know i did the right thing, i stood up to Tom, stood up for all my friends and actually lived through the fight.
The End
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Joshua Rena
02/12/2020Why is it “stupendous”?
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Gail Moore
02/10/2020Hi Zac, I had moments at school where I was bullied. I hate bullies but one day I did stick up for myself.
I wrote a story about it. Read it when you have some time.
It’s titled : (my first job )
Not under my usual name it was written under : (Shay )
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Zachary Pereira
02/10/2020Thanks Gail, you and the others have been really respectful to me. I never get that from many people. i really seriously appreciate you friend. :-)
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Gail Moore
02/08/2020Fantastic story Zac, keep writing them like that.
I hate bullies they are a pain in the butt. I don’t think there is a school that doesn’t have them.
The Toms of this world are the real losers.
:-) :-) Great job
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Zachary Pereira
02/10/2020Indeed. There's gonna be people out there like Tom picking on people. People need to stand up to the bullies and tell them to knock it off. Violence is never the answer to anything but you might have to defend yourself if necessary. You have a life and you have to fight for your life sometimes.
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Zachary Pereira
02/10/2020I'm just another writer like you Aziz and others. But i appreciate your kindness sir. Thank you :-)
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JD
02/07/2020Hey Zac, I think this is your best fiction story thus far. I gave it 4 stars for the message it gives and the quality of the story itself. However, if I was rating it based on the writing alone, I would probably have given you 2 stars, because you are lacking a lot of necessary punctuation, like commas and periods, that would make your story much easier for readers to fully appreciate. But other than the proofreading and correcting I think you should have done before you posted your story, I think it's great. Thanks for sharing your short stories on Storystar.
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JD
02/11/2020Also, Zac... I can see why you do not think that you need to improve your writing skills, since you have received a lot of praise and high ratings for this story, even though it has many writing errors. As I said earlier, it your best story so far, so I am glad you are receiving a lot of appreciation for it. However, as you have stated, you have difficulty communicating in other ways. That is why I think it is extremely important for you, for your life and your future, to become the best writer you can be, and to learn to communicate as effectively and as well in writing as you possibly can, so that others can fully understand and appreciate what you have to say.
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JD
02/10/2020I understand your point of view about it, Zac. But I'm coming from a reader point of view, and I want to believe that a writer respects me and other readers enough to put their best effort into their writing. It is also about respecting yourself and your writing enough to do the best work you can before you put it out there in the world for others to judge and rate. I'm only telling you these things because I hope that you will not be satisfied with less than you are capable of doing, and that you will always strive to do better. The more effort you put into your writing, the more others will respect and appreciate reading what you have written. Just sayin'.
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Zachary Pereira
02/10/2020As long people can read my stories and like them then that's all i want really. For people to appreciate my stories and inspire them to make their own stories.
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