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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 03/06/2020
The Dance
Born 2000, M, from California, United StatesOnce there was a man named John, john was at his high school in the gym on prom night, he wore a black tuxedo. John stood with his best friends talking and laughing and looking at the girls across from where the guys were standing. John had his eyes set on this one girl who was talking to her friends as well. She had blonde hair, a pretty purple dress, and a black skirt. John asked one of his friends, Larry who that girl was and Larry told him her name is Alice. Larry saw John look at her and told John that he should ask Alice to dance with him but john was nervous.
John knew he wouldn't have another chance so he waited for Alice to be by herself then he walked up to her and asked her if she wanted to dance with him. Alice said yes and so they both went on the dance floor and they slow danced to jazz type music. John looked at Alice into her sky blue eyes and they both smiled. A hour later, John noticed the music hasn't stopped and he looked around again and was shocked, the whole gym was empty except for him and Alice. How long had he danced for? John didn't really know.
"Hey uh, where did everyone go?" John asked Alice but she just smiled at him. John got worried so he turned to leave to look for his friends when suddenly Alice grabbed John's arm hard. He looked at Alice and tried to get his arm free from her but she was too strong. "Alice let go, i need to find my friends!!" John said to her but she didn't listen. John then noticed Alice's eye color was now black somehow. "I DON'T WANT TO DANCE ANYMORE!!!" John yelled at her and with all his strength he yanked his arm out from her strong grip and the music stopped. But john didn't care, he ran to the nearest exit door and opened it.
He was back inside the gym again somehow. Alice walked towards him and asked "Would you like to dance?" John knew he could not escape so defeated, he took her hand and they began to dance again. Alice looked into john's eyes and John looked into hers. She was so beautiful that john couldn't help but lean to kiss her, alice leaned in too then they kissed. When they kissed the lights went off then back on and they both disappeared. The music, John, Alice, everything was gone.
The End
The Dance(Zachary Pereira)
Once there was a man named John, john was at his high school in the gym on prom night, he wore a black tuxedo. John stood with his best friends talking and laughing and looking at the girls across from where the guys were standing. John had his eyes set on this one girl who was talking to her friends as well. She had blonde hair, a pretty purple dress, and a black skirt. John asked one of his friends, Larry who that girl was and Larry told him her name is Alice. Larry saw John look at her and told John that he should ask Alice to dance with him but john was nervous.
John knew he wouldn't have another chance so he waited for Alice to be by herself then he walked up to her and asked her if she wanted to dance with him. Alice said yes and so they both went on the dance floor and they slow danced to jazz type music. John looked at Alice into her sky blue eyes and they both smiled. A hour later, John noticed the music hasn't stopped and he looked around again and was shocked, the whole gym was empty except for him and Alice. How long had he danced for? John didn't really know.
"Hey uh, where did everyone go?" John asked Alice but she just smiled at him. John got worried so he turned to leave to look for his friends when suddenly Alice grabbed John's arm hard. He looked at Alice and tried to get his arm free from her but she was too strong. "Alice let go, i need to find my friends!!" John said to her but she didn't listen. John then noticed Alice's eye color was now black somehow. "I DON'T WANT TO DANCE ANYMORE!!!" John yelled at her and with all his strength he yanked his arm out from her strong grip and the music stopped. But john didn't care, he ran to the nearest exit door and opened it.
He was back inside the gym again somehow. Alice walked towards him and asked "Would you like to dance?" John knew he could not escape so defeated, he took her hand and they began to dance again. Alice looked into john's eyes and John looked into hers. She was so beautiful that john couldn't help but lean to kiss her, alice leaned in too then they kissed. When they kissed the lights went off then back on and they both disappeared. The music, John, Alice, everything was gone.
The End
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