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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Loneliness / Solitude
- Published: 06/03/2020
He in my Summer Memories
Born 1996, F, from Earth, IndiaGolden Summer
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The cicadas laugh out in song
To the red evening sunset
The way back home is long
But I promised to come here again tomorrow
The summer is in full bloom
Making you look more beautiful than ever
I thought the tale would never end
But I realize now that something comes after
The birds too took flight
And went somewhere far, far away
The summer flies by
To hide away its treasures till next year
I’ll never forget
Those golden summer days
That summer which brought joy
To my boring every day life
And look! Summer is here again
To help me keep my promise of that day
The summer is still in bloom
Making you look more beautiful than ever
I’ll never forget you
Who brought love in my life.
I am crying without you.
So, please come back to me again.
I miss you
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Thank you for reading. this is my first one here .
hope to get your support.
He in my Summer Memories(Firefly)
Golden Summer
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The cicadas laugh out in song
To the red evening sunset
The way back home is long
But I promised to come here again tomorrow
The summer is in full bloom
Making you look more beautiful than ever
I thought the tale would never end
But I realize now that something comes after
The birds too took flight
And went somewhere far, far away
The summer flies by
To hide away its treasures till next year
I’ll never forget
Those golden summer days
That summer which brought joy
To my boring every day life
And look! Summer is here again
To help me keep my promise of that day
The summer is still in bloom
Making you look more beautiful than ever
I’ll never forget you
Who brought love in my life.
I am crying without you.
So, please come back to me again.
I miss you
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Thank you for reading. this is my first one here .
hope to get your support.
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Pratik
06/15/2020Let me tell you that your writing is very beautiful. I don't believe that you are 18. Keep writing!
By the way, I think you love animes.
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Pratik
06/15/2020I've already built a time machine. But God rewind the time so I don't have it now. Read my story deja vu to understand it completely. And please comment. Suggestions from a writer like you will help me improve myself.
And sorry, we can't go to 2001 October 27 because now I don't have the time machine with me.
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Firefly
06/15/2020You've to believe Pratik. I'm 18.
and I can't go past to 2001, october, 27 to show you when i was born.. ha ha just kidding.
Thank you for letting me know that i write well.
on the way... I love Animes.
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Kanishka Roy
06/04/2020It was a structurally pleasant poem. It felt honest unlike many other romantic poems written by teens. Good work!
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