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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 06/07/2020
The Blind Man's Favour
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 A lady was shopping in the mall. There was a huge crowd that day.
 While shopping, she saw an old 'blind' man walking towards her. He was making his way through the crowd with a lot of difficulties. She went to him and helped him pick up different items and also helped him get out of the mall and cross the road.
  He thanked her and asked her to do a favour. He gave her an envelope and told her to send it to an address which was written on it. It was on her way home, so she agreed.
 As she was walking away, she turned back to ask the old man if she could do something more for him. To her surprise, she saw that he was rapidly running in the opposite direction, without his sticks and black goggles. He wasn't blind!
 Without waiting for anything, the lady went to the police and explained everything. The police went to the address of the house which was written on the envelope. When they went inside they saw heaps of dead bodies and human flesh kept for sale. They opened the envelope and inside, it was written:
'This is the last one I am sending you today.'
The Blind Man's Favour(Pratik)
 A lady was shopping in the mall. There was a huge crowd that day.
 While shopping, she saw an old 'blind' man walking towards her. He was making his way through the crowd with a lot of difficulties. She went to him and helped him pick up different items and also helped him get out of the mall and cross the road.
  He thanked her and asked her to do a favour. He gave her an envelope and told her to send it to an address which was written on it. It was on her way home, so she agreed.
 As she was walking away, she turned back to ask the old man if she could do something more for him. To her surprise, she saw that he was rapidly running in the opposite direction, without his sticks and black goggles. He wasn't blind!
 Without waiting for anything, the lady went to the police and explained everything. The police went to the address of the house which was written on the envelope. When they went inside they saw heaps of dead bodies and human flesh kept for sale. They opened the envelope and inside, it was written:
'This is the last one I am sending you today.'
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JD
06/08/2020It was not scary... but it was horrific. Thank heaven she saw she had been duped before she became another one of the bodies in the house. Thanks for sharing your short stories on Storystar, Pratik.
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Pratik
06/11/2020Short story star of the day? Really? I never thought this would happen. Thanks a lot for selecting me as the short story star of the day. Right now, I went to 'Home' but I didn't see my story. When did it happen? I think I missed it. :-(
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Pratik
06/07/2020I know. This is my first 'scary' story because almost all of my other horror stories have some humour mixed I them. Did you find it scary?
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