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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Comedy / Humor
- Published: 06/15/2020
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*Time: 11 pm*
Me: *Playing PUBG*
Mom: Now leave it Pratik! It's already Eleven.
Me: Last game mom, please.
Mom: Okay, last! After that go for sleep.
Me: Sure mom.
*Mom goes to sleep*
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*Time: 5 am*
Me: *Still playing PUBG*
*I hear some noise from the kitchen (Mom woke up)*
Me: *Hides mobile and starts doing meditation on the bed*
*Mom enters my room*
Mom: What are you doing?
Me: *scared* Well..eh..mom… I was sleeping, no actually, I just woke up early…..ummm…well to be honest, I don't know what....
Mom: *clapping* Let's play Kaun Banega Crorepati (Who will become a millionaire?[a quiz game] ). In front of us, we have Mr. Pratik Patil who has to answer one very important question.
Me: *Confused*
Mom: So Mr. Pratik, ready for the question?
Me: *Still confused* What's going on Mom?
Mom: First and the last question, for your well being, on your screen… Now!
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Q) What were you doing before I entered your room?
Option A: You were sleeping
Option B: You were meditating
Option C: You were doing exercise
Option D: You were playing video game for 6 hours
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Me: *wiping off sweat from forehead* I think I'll quit!
Mom: Are you sure?
*Just then, my younger brother wakes up from deep sleep and shouts, “Pratik was playing video game for 6 hrs”, and then goes back to sleep*
Me: …….
Mom: *smiles*
Me: ……..
Mom: *smiles*
Me: Well… eh… I never asked for audience poll!
Mom: Mr. Computer, please lock option D- Playing video game for 6 hours.
Me: Waittttt…I never said I would go with audience opinion! This is cheating.
Mom: *Looks at screen* And here we would take a short break. Be right back!
Me: Short break? Why? Reason?
Mom: *smiles*
Me: *Recieves a flying slipper*
PUBG Addiction(Pratik)
*Time: 11 pm*
Me: *Playing PUBG*
Mom: Now leave it Pratik! It's already Eleven.
Me: Last game mom, please.
Mom: Okay, last! After that go for sleep.
Me: Sure mom.
*Mom goes to sleep*
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*Time: 5 am*
Me: *Still playing PUBG*
*I hear some noise from the kitchen (Mom woke up)*
Me: *Hides mobile and starts doing meditation on the bed*
*Mom enters my room*
Mom: What are you doing?
Me: *scared* Well..eh..mom… I was sleeping, no actually, I just woke up early…..ummm…well to be honest, I don't know what....
Mom: *clapping* Let's play Kaun Banega Crorepati (Who will become a millionaire?[a quiz game] ). In front of us, we have Mr. Pratik Patil who has to answer one very important question.
Me: *Confused*
Mom: So Mr. Pratik, ready for the question?
Me: *Still confused* What's going on Mom?
Mom: First and the last question, for your well being, on your screen… Now!
________________________________
Q) What were you doing before I entered your room?
Option A: You were sleeping
Option B: You were meditating
Option C: You were doing exercise
Option D: You were playing video game for 6 hours
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Me: *wiping off sweat from forehead* I think I'll quit!
Mom: Are you sure?
*Just then, my younger brother wakes up from deep sleep and shouts, “Pratik was playing video game for 6 hrs”, and then goes back to sleep*
Me: …….
Mom: *smiles*
Me: ……..
Mom: *smiles*
Me: Well… eh… I never asked for audience poll!
Mom: Mr. Computer, please lock option D- Playing video game for 6 hours.
Me: Waittttt…I never said I would go with audience opinion! This is cheating.
Mom: *Looks at screen* And here we would take a short break. Be right back!
Me: Short break? Why? Reason?
Mom: *smiles*
Me: *Recieves a flying slipper*
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Gail Moore
06/17/2020The clever mum that knows her son. If this was my son I would turn the power off and take his devices for a few hours every night just so as he got a good nights sleep.
All the same I understand teenagers as I have had many. I just go with the flow and pray like hell they come out the other end ok.
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Pratik
06/17/2020Your idea works. But it wouldn't have made the story funny. ;-)
Thanks for commenting.
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Hafsa bint-e-rashid
06/16/2020OH GOSH PRATIK
HOW COME YOU WRITE SUCH AMAZING PIECES
I COMPLETELY LOVE
THIS SO FUNNY
I can relate your mom to mine (laughs)
not exactly ;-)
but my brothers are the same as you in this story
best wishes, Hafsa...
:-)
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Surekha Padmam
06/15/2020And here's the next plot.
your mom: Congratulation. You've won the game.
You: Thank you .What is the prize amount?
your mom: oh.. your prize.. mobile phone.
you: really mom.. thank you.
your mom: you'll be given a keypad phone
you: ........
**your mom throws your smart phone on ground and smiles**
me: "Hey... Winner winner chicken Dinner.."
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Pratik
06/15/2020Hahaha... Nice one.
By the way, I read all of your stories and I would like to say that YOU WRITE AMAZING! Now I am a permanent reader of your stories.
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