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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Comedy / Humor
- Published: 06/18/2020
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*At a barber shop with long hair*
Barber: Come, sit on this seat.
Me: *Sits on the seat*
*Barber starts cutting hair*
*After sometime*
Barber: This much, fine?
Me: No, shorter.
*Barber starts again*
Barber: This much?
Me: No, shorter!
*Barber starts again*
Barber: Okay now?
Me: *With a sad face* No, shorter!
*After sometime*
Barber: *makes my hair VERY short* Now?
Me: *Grabs a magnifying glass, looks at the hair, then at the barber, and then at my life*
*Thought bubble comes out*
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THOUGHT BUBBLE SCENARIO:
Me: Mom, I'm back!
Mom: *Looks at my hair*
Me: .....
Mom: You are looking like a WILD GRIZZLY BEAR! Go back to that barber and ask him to cut more!
Me: But mom, they are already quite short. And it won't look nice, to go back again! It's embarrassing.
Mom: No problem. Tell him, "Mom has said so!"
Me: But...
Mom: Goooooooo!!!
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*Thought bubble bursts*
Barber: *annoyed* Tell me? Is this much hair fine? Or else you would get bald!
Me: *Sobs* You keep cutting. I'll tell you when to stop!
Barber: Okay! Don't cry, at least.
*After sometime*
*ON THE VERGE OF GETTING BALD*
Me: *Shouts* STOOOOOOOOP!!!!
At a Barber Shop(Pratik)
*At a barber shop with long hair*
Barber: Come, sit on this seat.
Me: *Sits on the seat*
*Barber starts cutting hair*
*After sometime*
Barber: This much, fine?
Me: No, shorter.
*Barber starts again*
Barber: This much?
Me: No, shorter!
*Barber starts again*
Barber: Okay now?
Me: *With a sad face* No, shorter!
*After sometime*
Barber: *makes my hair VERY short* Now?
Me: *Grabs a magnifying glass, looks at the hair, then at the barber, and then at my life*
*Thought bubble comes out*
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THOUGHT BUBBLE SCENARIO:
Me: Mom, I'm back!
Mom: *Looks at my hair*
Me: .....
Mom: You are looking like a WILD GRIZZLY BEAR! Go back to that barber and ask him to cut more!
Me: But mom, they are already quite short. And it won't look nice, to go back again! It's embarrassing.
Mom: No problem. Tell him, "Mom has said so!"
Me: But...
Mom: Goooooooo!!!
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*Thought bubble bursts*
Barber: *annoyed* Tell me? Is this much hair fine? Or else you would get bald!
Me: *Sobs* You keep cutting. I'll tell you when to stop!
Barber: Okay! Don't cry, at least.
*After sometime*
*ON THE VERGE OF GETTING BALD*
Me: *Shouts* STOOOOOOOOP!!!!
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Gail Moore
06/20/2020Pratic, this is very funny. I liked your story.
I had a funny experience at the hairdressers not to long ago. Please read.
Title : It's just hair.
:-) :-)
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Helsa
06/19/2020Hahaha....I actually read this story to my Mom on how she reacts the same to my brother....We couldn't help laughing....I loved the story!! The situation that happens in every home!!! Good Job @Pratik!
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Pratik
06/20/2020I am glad that, you, your mom and your brother loved the story.
Keep laughing Helsa.
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Chaitali
06/18/2020not relatable to me , but yes to my brother though. hahaha.
interesting one Pratik
------cheers!
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Pratik
06/19/2020I really appreciate how you keep laughing in every comment. It makes other people think that I must be really funny. ;-)
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Bethlehem Eisenhour
06/18/2020That's why i don'tj go tto tthe beauuty salon, lol, they are VERY scissor happy. My daughter and I trim each other if we need.
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