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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Action & Adventure
  • Subject: Courage / Heroism
  • Published: 07/03/2020

Twelve

By Jason James Parker
Born 1976, M, from Whitechapel, Australia
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Twelve
There were twelve. Twelve of them and one of her. Some brandished blades and others had guns. One wore a helmet covered in spikes. Eyes bulged, as did muscle, hardened with use. Radiation had changed them—made them more than they were. Less too. Useable teeth were for the fortunate few; the few who would eat the meat of the fallen. Toxic wind added fingers and took away limbs and they lived hard on the dunes of the badlands. Reeving. Killing. Devouring.

She had seen them arrive as the village lay sleeping. A village of peace. A village of hope. They had feasted that night: mutant beef paired with hooch. Food was sparse and its finding led to careless elation. The sentries, too drunk to be any use. She met the enemy in front of the fence. Don’t come inside. Please don’t come inside. She asked that they wait. Wait and talk. Some of them laughed.

The largest one spoke. He spoke common-tongue in ragged staccato. They came for water and food; they came for women and men; they came “cos’ they could”. If she gave in, she’d be dispatched quickly. Put up a fight—there'd be pain, blood, and torture. She looked back at her home, at the toys left by children. They knew not what came.

She fell to one knee—tears in her eyes. The pain rose in her throat. This was the end and what an end it would be. Her hands and knees quivered as the twelve moved on in. Her biceps swelled and she screamed. The transformation: it hurt. Radiation had changed her—made her more than she was. Less too. Less afraid. There were twelve of them and one of her. They didn’t stand a chance.
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Kanishka Roy

07/03/2020

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.....or in this case, transformed. May we never have to cause such fury.
Intriguing story. But that's what you do.

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.....or in this case, transformed. May we never have to cause such fury.
Intriguing story. But that's what you do.

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Jason James Parker

07/04/2020

Thank you, Kanishka, for your very witty comments. I appreciate your encouragement--it makes me want to get back to the keyboard! : )

Thank you, Kanishka, for your very witty comments. I appreciate your encouragement--it makes me want to get back to the keyboard! : )

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Gail Moore

07/03/2020

Never cross an angry woman. Stay out means just that.
Awesome story Jason.

Never cross an angry woman. Stay out means just that.
Awesome story Jason.

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Jason James Parker

07/03/2020

Thanks, Gail. Excellent advice! : )

Thanks, Gail. Excellent advice! : )

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Kevin Hughes

07/03/2020

Jason,
I am so glad she won. If only we could always be the Victor against evil and power. And you are correct...transformations hurt, and not just in stories.

Smiles, Kevin

Jason,
I am so glad she won. If only we could always be the Victor against evil and power. And you are correct...transformations hurt, and not just in stories.

Smiles, Kevin

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Jason James Parker

07/03/2020

Thank you, Kevin. You're very perceptive--I've been thinking a lot about the pain of shedding one's past and becoming something new. It's often traumatic and painful but can bring with it new 'powers', as it were. : )

Thank you, Kevin. You're very perceptive--I've been thinking a lot about the pain of shedding one's past and becoming something new. It's often traumatic and painful but can bring with it new 'powers', as it were. : )

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Douglas Richards

07/03/2020

I really, really enjoyed this story!! Well done. Great writing with a fantastic twist, I did not see coming. :) Take care.

I really, really enjoyed this story!! Well done. Great writing with a fantastic twist, I did not see coming. :) Take care.

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Jason James Parker

07/03/2020

Thanks so much, Douglas. I really appreciate it. : )

Thanks so much, Douglas. I really appreciate it. : )

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JD

07/03/2020

I would not want to live in that time and place, but if I did, I would want to be her! : )

I would not want to live in that time and place, but if I did, I would want to be her! : )

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JD

07/04/2020

yeah... if I were living in that time and place... i'd definitely want the spiked helmet! : )

yeah... if I were living in that time and place... i'd definitely want the spiked helmet! : )

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Jason James Parker

07/03/2020

See, you say that, Jd, but you'd enjoy wearing a spiked helmet as much as the next person. Also, I'd want to be her too! : )

See, you say that, Jd, but you'd enjoy wearing a spiked helmet as much as the next person. Also, I'd want to be her too! : )

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Aziz

07/03/2020

Good job Jason.
while reading the story, I sensed you addressing yourself, maybe your fears or hopes, but I strongly touched that.

Good job Jason.
while reading the story, I sensed you addressing yourself, maybe your fears or hopes, but I strongly touched that.

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Jason James Parker

07/03/2020

Thank you, Aziz. You're right--I think the dystopian future trope is ripe for introspection. When the trappings of modern life are stripped away, it definitely holds up a mirror to your authentic self. : )

Thank you, Aziz. You're right--I think the dystopian future trope is ripe for introspection. When the trappings of modern life are stripped away, it definitely holds up a mirror to your authentic self. : )

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