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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Nature & Wildlife
- Published: 07/07/2020
A little Rose blossom on an icy road
Blooming like a moon in the green sky
Predicting every directions to passerby
Singing with the butterfly
Playing volleyball with shinning pollens
Fighting with the wasps to save its seeds
Lightininh every dark face
Drowining with the monster weeds
Still smiling like a bee
On an icy road,
I see a winter rose.
---by CHHAVI
winter rose(Chaitali)
A little Rose blossom on an icy road
Blooming like a moon in the green sky
Predicting every directions to passerby
Singing with the butterfly
Playing volleyball with shinning pollens
Fighting with the wasps to save its seeds
Lightininh every dark face
Drowining with the monster weeds
Still smiling like a bee
On an icy road,
I see a winter rose.
---by CHHAVI
Cam Rascoe
07/11/2020I enjoyed the imagery; it really put me in a good place. Thank you Chaitali. :)
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Pratik
07/06/2020"Predicting every directions to passerby
Singing with the butterfly"
Passerby and butterfly rhyme but you should have written something before butterfly. Any word to describe it. The first sentence is long and the second one is short. So it's not possible to maintain a proper rhythm.
It's just my opinion. I maybe wrong.
But seriously, I loved the story. It's your first poem and it's sooooo beautiful. I never knew you are so good at writing poems! I am really impressed.
Keep up the great work Chaitali.
Regards.
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