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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Ghost Stories / Paranormal
- Published: 07/10/2020
THEY
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They are always watching you.
During your day, there are probably a half a dozen moments when you can’t see, if only for a split second. Not like blinking, of course, that’s far too quick. Just that moment when you’re taking off your shirt, or wiping your face with a towel. That brief instant where you’re plunged into darkness.
Every time that happens they are waiting, eagerly, to pull you into that darkness. One day you might open your eyes to find that you’re not where you were before. There are unsolved missing person cases every week. Those people?
THEY(Pratik)
They are always watching you.
During your day, there are probably a half a dozen moments when you can’t see, if only for a split second. Not like blinking, of course, that’s far too quick. Just that moment when you’re taking off your shirt, or wiping your face with a towel. That brief instant where you’re plunged into darkness.
Every time that happens they are waiting, eagerly, to pull you into that darkness. One day you might open your eyes to find that you’re not where you were before. There are unsolved missing person cases every week. Those people?
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Pratik
08/10/2020I don't know why am not getting in the mood to write stories nowadays.
Btw, first read the stories which I've already published. ;-)
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Gail Moore
07/10/2020Interesting, I like this kind of story Pratic.
It had the potential to be a whole lot longer :-)
What a scary thought though. Well done :-)
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Pratik
07/10/2020Thanks Gail.
I didn't know what to write next so I left it like that. Glad to know that it scared you.
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Hafsa bint-e-rashid
07/10/2020Oh Gosh!!! Pratik
This actually scared my life outta me!!
Great job as always
Keep writing...
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