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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 07/29/2020
I am Rain
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I roll my tongue out into the cool drizzle,
The bitter zest of acid latches onto my taste buds,
I stand as still as time in a black hole,
My friend, oh rain! Corrode me away into concrete,
For what more is life, but a series of chemical reactions.
I surrender my being to the Gods on the clouds,
They collect prayers and vapours from the sailors and the seas,
And pour them on a burning city; my city,
That spat me away like the cloud spits raindrops,
For what more is rain, but an act of letting go!
I am Rain(Kanishka Roy)
I roll my tongue out into the cool drizzle,
The bitter zest of acid latches onto my taste buds,
I stand as still as time in a black hole,
My friend, oh rain! Corrode me away into concrete,
For what more is life, but a series of chemical reactions.
I surrender my being to the Gods on the clouds,
They collect prayers and vapours from the sailors and the seas,
And pour them on a burning city; my city,
That spat me away like the cloud spits raindrops,
For what more is rain, but an act of letting go!
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Jane Lockyer Willis
10/11/2021What a beautiful poem: the thoughts, the cadence. So moving. Who is your favourtite poet?
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Kanishka Roy
10/11/2021Thanks Jane! I haven't read much poetry but if I had to choose on Rabindranath Tagore would be my favorite poet
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Jason James Parker
08/13/2020Congratulations on Story of the Day, sir. It's a wonderful piece. : )
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Jason James Parker
07/29/2020Excellent work, Kanishka. You've very elegantly boiled down some very deep feelings into a single, compelling moment.
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Kanishka Roy
07/29/2020Ah yes! Less is more , they said
Less is extremely difficult, they forgot to mention
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