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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 08/03/2020
'Moonshine'
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The ferment, grains spitting their inside, losing their body;
'magic' is in process.
Bloody nerves, gasping and panting.
Soothe the drain pipe, the conscious lies within.
Al-mighty, transform the decay, is it honey?
It must be moonshine.
A pint or two, when you really don't know what to do.
It sure is moonshine.
Feeling the blues, blessed, you've the grain juice.
Ethanol, heating and cooling, bleeds purity.
How come, when on a ride to 'know-where land'
makes one 'impure'?
It's just moonshine.
'Moonshine'(Aciis Khatiwada)
The ferment, grains spitting their inside, losing their body;
'magic' is in process.
Bloody nerves, gasping and panting.
Soothe the drain pipe, the conscious lies within.
Al-mighty, transform the decay, is it honey?
It must be moonshine.
A pint or two, when you really don't know what to do.
It sure is moonshine.
Feeling the blues, blessed, you've the grain juice.
Ethanol, heating and cooling, bleeds purity.
How come, when on a ride to 'know-where land'
makes one 'impure'?
It's just moonshine.
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Jason James Parker
08/16/2020Congrats on Story of the Day, Aciis! This is such a great piece. : )
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Darlington Chukwunyere
08/16/2020Your words glisten and bloom as beautifully as the moonshine.
Happy story star of the day.
Keep shining, Aciis.
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Aciis Khatiwada
08/16/2020OMG! Thank you dear Aziz. This is your first comment on my work and i truly appreciate it.
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Jason James Parker
08/08/2020This is great, Aciis. Works as a poem and would also make an awesome blues track. You're very versatile in your style and subject matter. Great work. : )
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