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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 08/09/2020
The Tale of Mr. Bwease
Born 2010, M, from Newport, Wales, United KingdomLegends says a long time ago in a land far away, there was a man called Jackson, he lived alone on an island near multiple islands. He lived there for a few weeks until he noticed something strange on another island. So, he decided to check it out. After three minutes of sailing to the island Jack realized it was overflown then he found a hole in the island and went down finding a sign saying Smuggler’s Passage. It was a passage to a whole new island, Jack found a grave on the island it said, rest In peace Mr. Bwease.
Jack found an abandoned house he went in finding a book saying diary one 16th May 1994.
(Mr. Bwease wrote) ”I just finished the bridge but, there he was again the man with the white eyes, he was staring at me from the other side of the bridge. I am starting to think this island is haunted but, I am not thinking to move any time soon. I don’t know anything about him but, all I do know is, he comes when it’s dark. Jack looked up to the sky seeing it was dark but, he thought it was a ridiculous prank, but when Jack turned around and saw the man, Jack got out of the house as fast as he could and ran to shore and swam back to his island trembling with fear and said, who was that?
Jack never wanted to go back to that island ever again but, he needed food so he dared his life to go back to the island. Jack found Mr Bwease’s man-cave, he went down the stairs. When Jack entered the man-cave he found food but, he also found a book saying diary two (22nd May 1994). "He has found me, I hear footsteps going down the stairs, he is coming! I need to go to my secret hatch, these may be my last words bye!"
Jack was scared half to death. he took a step back and fell into the secret hatch but, Jack couldn’t get back up because the ladder broke. The only way to get to the surface was to go into the maze. Jack found a book on the floor he picked it up it said diary three (22nd May 1994). "I made this maze to confuse him but he is too smart. He is at the other side of the hallway, if you’re reading this don’t turn around…" Jack slowly turned around and faced his fate.
We don’t know where the man is now but we know he is out there somewhere!
The Tale of Mr. Bwease(Sameer Noor)
Legends says a long time ago in a land far away, there was a man called Jackson, he lived alone on an island near multiple islands. He lived there for a few weeks until he noticed something strange on another island. So, he decided to check it out. After three minutes of sailing to the island Jack realized it was overflown then he found a hole in the island and went down finding a sign saying Smuggler’s Passage. It was a passage to a whole new island, Jack found a grave on the island it said, rest In peace Mr. Bwease.
Jack found an abandoned house he went in finding a book saying diary one 16th May 1994.
(Mr. Bwease wrote) ”I just finished the bridge but, there he was again the man with the white eyes, he was staring at me from the other side of the bridge. I am starting to think this island is haunted but, I am not thinking to move any time soon. I don’t know anything about him but, all I do know is, he comes when it’s dark. Jack looked up to the sky seeing it was dark but, he thought it was a ridiculous prank, but when Jack turned around and saw the man, Jack got out of the house as fast as he could and ran to shore and swam back to his island trembling with fear and said, who was that?
Jack never wanted to go back to that island ever again but, he needed food so he dared his life to go back to the island. Jack found Mr Bwease’s man-cave, he went down the stairs. When Jack entered the man-cave he found food but, he also found a book saying diary two (22nd May 1994). "He has found me, I hear footsteps going down the stairs, he is coming! I need to go to my secret hatch, these may be my last words bye!"
Jack was scared half to death. he took a step back and fell into the secret hatch but, Jack couldn’t get back up because the ladder broke. The only way to get to the surface was to go into the maze. Jack found a book on the floor he picked it up it said diary three (22nd May 1994). "I made this maze to confuse him but he is too smart. He is at the other side of the hallway, if you’re reading this don’t turn around…" Jack slowly turned around and faced his fate.
We don’t know where the man is now but we know he is out there somewhere!
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