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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Survival / Success
- Subject: Flash / Mini / Very Short
- Published: 08/23/2020
The Struggle
Born 1981, F, from -, CyprusThe Struggle
She sat alone on a tree stump with head down and shoulders slouched. The rain soaked her to the bone. Blue and yellow bruises in the shape of fingers covered her arms. Warm tears fell on cold hands. She had promised to be strong, she had promised to leave. The bottle of poison stuffed in her pocket was a sweet temptation as she reached in and touched it. It felt in that moment like a lover's embrace. The type that brings you to your knees. "Mommy! Can we go now? I'm cold." Her little daughter suddenly broke her trance. She got up slowly and took her baby's hand. As they walked off, her daughter looked behind. "Mommy, you dropped something back there." She ignored her and walked on knowing that one more day had been won.
The End
The Struggle(shur)
The Struggle
She sat alone on a tree stump with head down and shoulders slouched. The rain soaked her to the bone. Blue and yellow bruises in the shape of fingers covered her arms. Warm tears fell on cold hands. She had promised to be strong, she had promised to leave. The bottle of poison stuffed in her pocket was a sweet temptation as she reached in and touched it. It felt in that moment like a lover's embrace. The type that brings you to your knees. "Mommy! Can we go now? I'm cold." Her little daughter suddenly broke her trance. She got up slowly and took her baby's hand. As they walked off, her daughter looked behind. "Mommy, you dropped something back there." She ignored her and walked on knowing that one more day had been won.
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Gordon England
08/26/2020Life has difficult struggles, and the bottle is one of the worst. My father could not put his down and the family was destroyed because of it. Very well said
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JD
08/24/2020Beautifully written flash fiction short, Shur! There is so much pent up emotion and depth to it, and so much past history and future mystery packed between the lines. I think it is masterful. Thank you for sharing your short masterpiece on Storystar! : )
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