Love?

Love?(shur) Love?

I was in love with you once but now I see the annoying bit of flesh that you truly are. Don't think I didn't notice you picking your nose so deep that I'm sure you entered the vast emptiness of your cranium which matched the vapid look on your face. All the times that I worked overtime while you lazed in bed, sleeping for hours, blaming a bad back for your years of inconsistent employment, inconsistent love making (poor would be a good rating) and inconsistent fixing of things around the house. What demon's curse descended on me to even have fathomed falling in love with you. Beer gut and potato chips you worship, the TV your altar. I've packed my bags but you still don't notice. Maybe when I flatten the tires of your car you'll notice something's different. Maybe not. As a final goodbye, I put your TV dinner in the oven on broil, pick up my life and step out into the cool autumn air.

The End

Kevin Hughes

08/24/2020

Shur,

Ouch. As short as this story was, it packed all the pain of an angry ex lover wanting the smallest of revenges on their way out. I wouldn't want to meet an ex lover with this much angst, but boy oh boy, did you capture them in living color!

Smiles, Kevin

Shur,

Ouch. As short as this story was, it packed all the pain of an angry ex lover wanting the smallest of revenges on their way out. I wouldn't want to meet an ex lover with this much angst, but boy oh boy, did you capture them in living color!

Smiles, Kevin

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Shur

08/25/2020

thank you for the much appreciated comment :)

thank you for the much appreciated comment :)

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