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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 09/12/2020
The talking doll
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A newly married couple took a new home. The wife had a separate room for her beloved doll. She loved it so much that the husband was oddly jealous of it in an odd way. He checked the doll one day to see what's so special and only found a cord on it's back. He pulled the cord and the doll said, "Hello, I love my momma!" He pulled the cord again and the same words were repeated by the doll.
After a month, the husband came back home from work drunk and angry. He started throwing and breaking things. When the wife tried to stop him, he took the knife near him and killed her. He was sad for what he has done and then started crying. He picked up the doll and pulled its cord. This time the dolls eye changed from blue to red and it said, "Why did you kill my momma ??? I loved her !!" The husband was so shocked after listening to this that he ran away to his room and locked himself in.
The next morning when the police came, the husband was found dead in his room with the doll in his hand. When the police pulled the dolls cord, it said, "he killed my momma!! So, I killed him!!"
The talking doll(Riya)
A newly married couple took a new home. The wife had a separate room for her beloved doll. She loved it so much that the husband was oddly jealous of it in an odd way. He checked the doll one day to see what's so special and only found a cord on it's back. He pulled the cord and the doll said, "Hello, I love my momma!" He pulled the cord again and the same words were repeated by the doll.
After a month, the husband came back home from work drunk and angry. He started throwing and breaking things. When the wife tried to stop him, he took the knife near him and killed her. He was sad for what he has done and then started crying. He picked up the doll and pulled its cord. This time the dolls eye changed from blue to red and it said, "Why did you kill my momma ??? I loved her !!" The husband was so shocked after listening to this that he ran away to his room and locked himself in.
The next morning when the police came, the husband was found dead in his room with the doll in his hand. When the police pulled the dolls cord, it said, "he killed my momma!! So, I killed him!!"
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BEN BROWN
03/03/2021BEN BROWN
That was an amazing story. Whenever I read horror stories my mind wanders to Goosebumps, which I used to watch. Well done.
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JD
10/25/2020Wow, Riya, you sure do have a lot of FANS! It isn't often to find a story with SO MANY LIKES! Good for you! That was a creepy story and it definitely deserves to be featured for Halloween Week. Happy Short Story STAR of the Week, and Happy Halloween to you, Riya! Thanks for sharing your short stories on Storystar! : )
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Pratik
09/12/2020Your stories are mesmerizing. Grammatical errors is the only problem. They are few and negligible. They don't make much difference. But it also shows that you don't recheck your stories. Else, it deserves five stars.
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