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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Drama / Human Interest
  • Subject: Politics / Power / Abuse of Power
  • Published: 09/21/2020

In a Land Full of Shit

By Aciis Khatiwada
Born 1988, M, from Biratnagar, Nepal
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In a land full of shit
The air was a mist
There lived a frog
And a crackling croc
They both fought for power
With no love to shower
Then there came a rat
With his mighty bat
He swung the bat forth
It was just about north
He cut meat for a broth and offered them the soup
They told him with the soup, he'd keep them in a loop
The power might be shared
For all that he cared
The rat cried in shame, called out a few name
He promised he's a friend
The croc said they don't comprehend
The frog jumped in fear
Cried "OH--MY--DEAR"
The frog then fled the scene
The rat thought it was mean
The croc was also keen
For he was on a gin
His thick head won't get
For he was on a med
In the mist vanished the frog
But then there came a dog...

In a Land Full of Shit(Aciis Khatiwada) In a land full of shit
The air was a mist
There lived a frog
And a crackling croc
They both fought for power
With no love to shower
Then there came a rat
With his mighty bat
He swung the bat forth
It was just about north
He cut meat for a broth and offered them the soup
They told him with the soup, he'd keep them in a loop
The power might be shared
For all that he cared
The rat cried in shame, called out a few name
He promised he's a friend
The croc said they don't comprehend
The frog jumped in fear
Cried "OH--MY--DEAR"
The frog then fled the scene
The rat thought it was mean
The croc was also keen
For he was on a gin
His thick head won't get
For he was on a med
In the mist vanished the frog
But then there came a dog...

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Gail Moore

11/18/2020

Fantastic. :-)

Fantastic. :-)

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Aciis Khatiwada

11/19/2020

Thank you dear Gail.

Thank you dear Gail.

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Jason James Parker

09/21/2020

Very cool work, Aciis. I really like the fable-type feel to this verse. There's something very modern about the structure and form of it. : )

Very cool work, Aciis. I really like the fable-type feel to this verse. There's something very modern about the structure and form of it. : )

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Aciis Khatiwada

09/21/2020

Thank you very much brother. It means a lot. However, I noticed later that there have been two spelling errors.

Thank you very much brother. It means a lot. However, I noticed later that there have been two spelling errors.

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