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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Drama
- Published: 11/02/2020
Lili
my name is Liliana Elena Smith, but everyone calls me Lili. Here’s a bit about me. I’m a blondie and I have close to pale skin. I’m a younger sister. My mother is divorced, my father is actually dead now from cancer, but they divorced before he died. My older sister is in 12th grade. Her name is Sara Olivia Smith. I’m in 11th grade. Everyone says that I’m one of the prettiest girls in my school, which is a huge compliment because there are like 800 people in our school (and half of the girls are models and boys are super-rich). I live in Jordan City. Which has thirty percent of the population of the USA! My mother is from Michael County. It’s a small town in Ser. Nobody that’s somebody knows what that is, basically what I’m saying is that my mother is a nobody.
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“Liliana, please pay attention! I know you get good grades but you have to pay attention!” Ms. Doria exclaimed. In school, I got really good grades and was like the star student even though I rarely paid attention. “Psst! Lili! Can you tell Brian I have a crush on him? I think he’ll listen to you since you guys are pretty close.” Whispered Diana. I’m really popular in school. Honestly, I don’t know why. When it was break I walked over to Brian. “Sup, Lili Mc Fily. Are you coming to tell me that you actually do have a crush on me?” Asked Lil Pete. His name isn’t actually Lil Pete (it’s Peter L’enoy), but he is so short so we call him that. He has a huge crush on me and is sure I have a crush on him. “My name is Lili, and no I don’t have a crush on you and you know it!” I reply. I walked over to Brian. He pulled me into a hug. “Hi, Little Miss Lili. How are you doing?” Asked Brian. Brian is so sweet. He's sweet enough for me to have a tiny crush on him. I looked him in the eyes. “Diana wanted me to tell you this. Diana has a huge crush on you.” I told him. He laughed, a beautiful laugh. The bell rang. He kissed me on the cheek and said bye. Okay. I have a tiny crush on him. I’m not going to hide that any longer.
Brian
Let me just tell you a bit about me. My name is Brian Joseph-O'Neil, but my close friends call me O’Neil, with an exception of Lili (she calls me Brian as do all the other girls). I have brown hair and close to pale skin. I’m a twin. My mother and father are divorced. My father lives in Michael county and my mother lives in Jordan city. My parents were both originally born in Milano. My twin is in 8th grade. I’m in 8th grade. Everyone says that I’m one of the most popular people in my school, which is really awesome because there are like 800 people in our school.
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“Brian you’re with Chloë. Jordan you’re with Cecilia. Andrew, you’re with…” Mr. Tumbler droned on and on. There are literally 60 people in our class and he always chooses to do things with partners. It’s so annoying! Especially when you always get put with girls that have crushes on you. “Brian pay attention!” Yelled Mr. Tumbler. I looked up. I always get the best grades in this class (science), without even paying attention. “Please meet with your partners. We will begin brainstorming for the project.” Mr. Tumbler whispers. For some reason, he does that. I think he thinks that’s a way to get us to be quiet. It doesn’t work. Chloë walked over. “Hi! My name is chloë! I’m so excited to work with you! I think that we should do the art of kissing! Doesn’t that sound fun! We need a test subject though. How about… to you!” She exclaims. “Um…” I reply. “Great! So basically we have to show the different emotions from kissing in certain spots!” She whispers yells “Um… I was kind of thinking we could do volcanoes. I find them really interesting.” I say. I actually don’t think it's interesting at all, but anything other than the “art of kissing with me as the test subject is great. “Uh… sure Brian,” she says sadly. “Class is over! Clean up!” Yells Mr. Tumbler. Chloë kisses me on the cheek and runs away.
I walked out to break meeting my friends along the way. We talk about the usual: NHL, NFL, NBA and sometimes a little about girls. I break off with Jona (my twin). “Jona, do you actually have a crush on Lili? You know how much I like her! Don’t you? Why don’t you have a crush on Michelle?” I basically screamed. “I don’t have a crush on Lili. I have a crush on Lila.” Says Jona. I sighed with relief.
During break, Lili walked over to me. As soon as she was in reach I pulled her into a hug. “Hi, Little Miss Lili. How are you doing?” I asked. She looked me in the eyes. I love her eyes. They’re soft and playful light blue. I smiled.“Diana wanted me to tell you this. Diana has a huge crush on you.” She says. I laugh. The bell rings. I kiss her on the cheek and say bye. I love her so much. She’s so beautiful, nice, smart, athletic and most of all she is just herself.
Lili
“Lili, aren’t you so excited! Brian just kissed you on the cheek! You guys are going to be the cutest couple! Oh My God! I just can’t wait! Can I be the one to dress you up for your first date?! I’m so excited! It’s probably going to be, like, tomorrow!” Michelle gushes. Michelle is making such a huge deal about the fact that Brian kissed me on the cheek. I don’t care, I mean we’ve been friends for like 10 years. We’ve honestly never had a crush on each other which is surprising, as in most books close friends like us end updating. I know that’s not going to happen. “Lili, don't you completely agree that Jona has a crush on me? I mean I don’t think anyone just stares at me like that,” says Michelle “I think Jona is cute, so this is a good start! Maybe we can be like the double daters! Do you know? I don’t think you’re listening to me.” She gives me a weird look. I sigh. She starts talking to Miga. Brian motions for me to come. “Michelle, I’m going to go study in the library,” I tell her. “You? Study? You never study. Oh No! Are you failing? I’ll help you cheat to get your grade up,” she gave me that are-you-even-listening-look “oh, never mind. You’re obviously lying to me. Tell me the truth! Sis?” She stops talking. “Why did you call me sis? Oh, whatever! I have to go! See you, after school. Um, actually, I can’t. Sorry! See you tomorrow! Bye!” I respond. As I walk away I feel like I’m betraying her. She is, like, basically my closest friend (not including Brian). I sigh. Sometimes you have to sacrifice something to get something else, and that’s what I did.
Brian pulled me into a huge hug. “I love you!” He whispered in my ear. I blushed and then kissed him on the cheek. I told him how Michelle was making a huge deal of him kissing me on the cheek. Brian smiled and laughed. I almost kissed him on the lips! “Wanna go out tonight? Or tomorrow night?” Asked Brian. I looked at him like he was crazy. “Um…,” I whispered “I don’t really know if I’m ready for this with you. Sorry” He looked heartbroken. I kissed him on the cheek with lots of love. “Sorry,” I repeated. I turned around and walked away.
Brian
“Are you going to do it? Is it finally your time?” Asked Jona. I sighed. He’d been bugging me about this forever. “Maybe. I don’t know.” I replied. Jona turned to listen to Kofi. Kofi was describing his latest basketball game. Jona was busy admiring Lila. Lila was busy talking to Caleb (her best friend). Caleb was busy talking to Lila. Michelle was busy gushing about something to Lili. Lili was pretending to listen to Michelle. I was busy looking around. Brian, one of the most popular people in the school, was not the center of attention. Big surprise. I was never the center of attention. I liked that. A lot. What no one knows is that I’m secretly shy. Really shy. I stick to people I know or I hang out with no one at all. All of a sudden this came to my head: I should ask Lili out. I mean when is a better time.
I motion for her to come. She looks as though she’s discussing whether to come or not with Michelle. My heart starts to pound. Michelle is that type of girl to say “no!”. Eventually, Lili gets up. I sigh with relief. She’s coming. When she arrives I pull her into a huge hug. “I love you!” I whisper into her ear. She blushes and then kisses me on the cheek. She told about what Michelle was gushing about. I smiled and laughed. Time to get this over with. “Wanna go out tonight? Or tomorrow night?” I ask. She gave me a weird look. My heart sunk. “Um…,” she whispers, “I don’t know if I’m ready to do that with you. Sorry.” I’m so heartbroken I want to die. She kissed me on the cheek. “Sorry.” She repeats. She turned and walked away, as she did so my heart hurt more and more.
lili & brian(Isobel steeves)
Lili
my name is Liliana Elena Smith, but everyone calls me Lili. Here’s a bit about me. I’m a blondie and I have close to pale skin. I’m a younger sister. My mother is divorced, my father is actually dead now from cancer, but they divorced before he died. My older sister is in 12th grade. Her name is Sara Olivia Smith. I’m in 11th grade. Everyone says that I’m one of the prettiest girls in my school, which is a huge compliment because there are like 800 people in our school (and half of the girls are models and boys are super-rich). I live in Jordan City. Which has thirty percent of the population of the USA! My mother is from Michael County. It’s a small town in Ser. Nobody that’s somebody knows what that is, basically what I’m saying is that my mother is a nobody.
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“Liliana, please pay attention! I know you get good grades but you have to pay attention!” Ms. Doria exclaimed. In school, I got really good grades and was like the star student even though I rarely paid attention. “Psst! Lili! Can you tell Brian I have a crush on him? I think he’ll listen to you since you guys are pretty close.” Whispered Diana. I’m really popular in school. Honestly, I don’t know why. When it was break I walked over to Brian. “Sup, Lili Mc Fily. Are you coming to tell me that you actually do have a crush on me?” Asked Lil Pete. His name isn’t actually Lil Pete (it’s Peter L’enoy), but he is so short so we call him that. He has a huge crush on me and is sure I have a crush on him. “My name is Lili, and no I don’t have a crush on you and you know it!” I reply. I walked over to Brian. He pulled me into a hug. “Hi, Little Miss Lili. How are you doing?” Asked Brian. Brian is so sweet. He's sweet enough for me to have a tiny crush on him. I looked him in the eyes. “Diana wanted me to tell you this. Diana has a huge crush on you.” I told him. He laughed, a beautiful laugh. The bell rang. He kissed me on the cheek and said bye. Okay. I have a tiny crush on him. I’m not going to hide that any longer.
Brian
Let me just tell you a bit about me. My name is Brian Joseph-O'Neil, but my close friends call me O’Neil, with an exception of Lili (she calls me Brian as do all the other girls). I have brown hair and close to pale skin. I’m a twin. My mother and father are divorced. My father lives in Michael county and my mother lives in Jordan city. My parents were both originally born in Milano. My twin is in 8th grade. I’m in 8th grade. Everyone says that I’m one of the most popular people in my school, which is really awesome because there are like 800 people in our school.
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“Brian you’re with Chloë. Jordan you’re with Cecilia. Andrew, you’re with…” Mr. Tumbler droned on and on. There are literally 60 people in our class and he always chooses to do things with partners. It’s so annoying! Especially when you always get put with girls that have crushes on you. “Brian pay attention!” Yelled Mr. Tumbler. I looked up. I always get the best grades in this class (science), without even paying attention. “Please meet with your partners. We will begin brainstorming for the project.” Mr. Tumbler whispers. For some reason, he does that. I think he thinks that’s a way to get us to be quiet. It doesn’t work. Chloë walked over. “Hi! My name is chloë! I’m so excited to work with you! I think that we should do the art of kissing! Doesn’t that sound fun! We need a test subject though. How about… to you!” She exclaims. “Um…” I reply. “Great! So basically we have to show the different emotions from kissing in certain spots!” She whispers yells “Um… I was kind of thinking we could do volcanoes. I find them really interesting.” I say. I actually don’t think it's interesting at all, but anything other than the “art of kissing with me as the test subject is great. “Uh… sure Brian,” she says sadly. “Class is over! Clean up!” Yells Mr. Tumbler. Chloë kisses me on the cheek and runs away.
I walked out to break meeting my friends along the way. We talk about the usual: NHL, NFL, NBA and sometimes a little about girls. I break off with Jona (my twin). “Jona, do you actually have a crush on Lili? You know how much I like her! Don’t you? Why don’t you have a crush on Michelle?” I basically screamed. “I don’t have a crush on Lili. I have a crush on Lila.” Says Jona. I sighed with relief.
During break, Lili walked over to me. As soon as she was in reach I pulled her into a hug. “Hi, Little Miss Lili. How are you doing?” I asked. She looked me in the eyes. I love her eyes. They’re soft and playful light blue. I smiled.“Diana wanted me to tell you this. Diana has a huge crush on you.” She says. I laugh. The bell rings. I kiss her on the cheek and say bye. I love her so much. She’s so beautiful, nice, smart, athletic and most of all she is just herself.
Lili
“Lili, aren’t you so excited! Brian just kissed you on the cheek! You guys are going to be the cutest couple! Oh My God! I just can’t wait! Can I be the one to dress you up for your first date?! I’m so excited! It’s probably going to be, like, tomorrow!” Michelle gushes. Michelle is making such a huge deal about the fact that Brian kissed me on the cheek. I don’t care, I mean we’ve been friends for like 10 years. We’ve honestly never had a crush on each other which is surprising, as in most books close friends like us end updating. I know that’s not going to happen. “Lili, don't you completely agree that Jona has a crush on me? I mean I don’t think anyone just stares at me like that,” says Michelle “I think Jona is cute, so this is a good start! Maybe we can be like the double daters! Do you know? I don’t think you’re listening to me.” She gives me a weird look. I sigh. She starts talking to Miga. Brian motions for me to come. “Michelle, I’m going to go study in the library,” I tell her. “You? Study? You never study. Oh No! Are you failing? I’ll help you cheat to get your grade up,” she gave me that are-you-even-listening-look “oh, never mind. You’re obviously lying to me. Tell me the truth! Sis?” She stops talking. “Why did you call me sis? Oh, whatever! I have to go! See you, after school. Um, actually, I can’t. Sorry! See you tomorrow! Bye!” I respond. As I walk away I feel like I’m betraying her. She is, like, basically my closest friend (not including Brian). I sigh. Sometimes you have to sacrifice something to get something else, and that’s what I did.
Brian pulled me into a huge hug. “I love you!” He whispered in my ear. I blushed and then kissed him on the cheek. I told him how Michelle was making a huge deal of him kissing me on the cheek. Brian smiled and laughed. I almost kissed him on the lips! “Wanna go out tonight? Or tomorrow night?” Asked Brian. I looked at him like he was crazy. “Um…,” I whispered “I don’t really know if I’m ready for this with you. Sorry” He looked heartbroken. I kissed him on the cheek with lots of love. “Sorry,” I repeated. I turned around and walked away.
Brian
“Are you going to do it? Is it finally your time?” Asked Jona. I sighed. He’d been bugging me about this forever. “Maybe. I don’t know.” I replied. Jona turned to listen to Kofi. Kofi was describing his latest basketball game. Jona was busy admiring Lila. Lila was busy talking to Caleb (her best friend). Caleb was busy talking to Lila. Michelle was busy gushing about something to Lili. Lili was pretending to listen to Michelle. I was busy looking around. Brian, one of the most popular people in the school, was not the center of attention. Big surprise. I was never the center of attention. I liked that. A lot. What no one knows is that I’m secretly shy. Really shy. I stick to people I know or I hang out with no one at all. All of a sudden this came to my head: I should ask Lili out. I mean when is a better time.
I motion for her to come. She looks as though she’s discussing whether to come or not with Michelle. My heart starts to pound. Michelle is that type of girl to say “no!”. Eventually, Lili gets up. I sigh with relief. She’s coming. When she arrives I pull her into a huge hug. “I love you!” I whisper into her ear. She blushes and then kisses me on the cheek. She told about what Michelle was gushing about. I smiled and laughed. Time to get this over with. “Wanna go out tonight? Or tomorrow night?” I ask. She gave me a weird look. My heart sunk. “Um…,” she whispers, “I don’t know if I’m ready to do that with you. Sorry.” I’m so heartbroken I want to die. She kissed me on the cheek. “Sorry.” She repeats. She turned and walked away, as she did so my heart hurt more and more.
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