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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 11/03/2020
My tears chaperoned the salty water. My remorse was as deep as the ocean. My outcry was answered back by the thrashing sound of the waves against the shore. The ocean's wind was sighing with my grief. Time can be cruel thing but sometimes you just think that you shouldn't have done what you did in the last moment. The wind was bitterly-cold . A blanket of sorrow was wrapped around me. Slowly the crowd faded and left were only the few people who were the close ones.....
.
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The party was in its full swing. I was drunk like an overflown cup of tea, too much. I don't remember much what happened , what caused me to drink so much and what the hell was wrong with me that i reduced a person from the world.
The one who loved me.
The one who knew how to grin like a Cheshire cat even in your darkest times .
The one who always had hope that everything will be fine.
The one who treated bad times as a fall, which arrives and will leave soon.
.
As much as I remember my worst deed,
I was moving towards the ocean , a loud voice astounded me , " Baby don't go there . STOP please .... The water's deep and the wind is prompt . Do Not Go There ....... " . I could sense him running towards me while he said , "Oh Haiden , for God's sake ! Stop baby pleeeease. Water is deep there.... ".
I was too unconscious to get hold of myself . I stopped there . But the waves do not wanted me to stop , so they pushed me forward , towards the deep ocean , more and more and I plummeted .
A hand grabbed me from my waist and I remember those brown eyes were burning with emotion . I held him , tight . While he handed me over to the other guy , he whispered in my ear , "I love you Haiden . Will always do ." His eyes were dark and promising .
Today , as I lay here telling you this cumbersome moment , I remember , I was brought back to the beach and every person's eyes were focused behind me and there were tears in those shiny balls . I turned around , it was then I noticed ,
He left me.
All solus .
Icy-cold .
Full of his aptitude for his love towards me .
Manifesting that I was his love.
He went , deep , deep in the unending depth of the ocean .
After that moment which tore my life apart , the ocean behaved as if nothing has happened.
.
I hated myself . I would hate myself for the rest of my life . His best friend Cain , hated me . I never argued from him as he was right . I deserved his hatred . Everyone's hatred . I deserved to be treated like shit . Only because of my absurdity , my over drunk head ,
We lost him .
I lost him , forever .
I LOST HIM .(Eesh_Howw)
My tears chaperoned the salty water. My remorse was as deep as the ocean. My outcry was answered back by the thrashing sound of the waves against the shore. The ocean's wind was sighing with my grief. Time can be cruel thing but sometimes you just think that you shouldn't have done what you did in the last moment. The wind was bitterly-cold . A blanket of sorrow was wrapped around me. Slowly the crowd faded and left were only the few people who were the close ones.....
.
.
The party was in its full swing. I was drunk like an overflown cup of tea, too much. I don't remember much what happened , what caused me to drink so much and what the hell was wrong with me that i reduced a person from the world.
The one who loved me.
The one who knew how to grin like a Cheshire cat even in your darkest times .
The one who always had hope that everything will be fine.
The one who treated bad times as a fall, which arrives and will leave soon.
.
As much as I remember my worst deed,
I was moving towards the ocean , a loud voice astounded me , " Baby don't go there . STOP please .... The water's deep and the wind is prompt . Do Not Go There ....... " . I could sense him running towards me while he said , "Oh Haiden , for God's sake ! Stop baby pleeeease. Water is deep there.... ".
I was too unconscious to get hold of myself . I stopped there . But the waves do not wanted me to stop , so they pushed me forward , towards the deep ocean , more and more and I plummeted .
A hand grabbed me from my waist and I remember those brown eyes were burning with emotion . I held him , tight . While he handed me over to the other guy , he whispered in my ear , "I love you Haiden . Will always do ." His eyes were dark and promising .
Today , as I lay here telling you this cumbersome moment , I remember , I was brought back to the beach and every person's eyes were focused behind me and there were tears in those shiny balls . I turned around , it was then I noticed ,
He left me.
All solus .
Icy-cold .
Full of his aptitude for his love towards me .
Manifesting that I was his love.
He went , deep , deep in the unending depth of the ocean .
After that moment which tore my life apart , the ocean behaved as if nothing has happened.
.
I hated myself . I would hate myself for the rest of my life . His best friend Cain , hated me . I never argued from him as he was right . I deserved his hatred . Everyone's hatred . I deserved to be treated like shit . Only because of my absurdity , my over drunk head ,
We lost him .
I lost him , forever .
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