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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Flash / Mini / Very Short
- Published: 11/07/2020
Too afraid to turn around...
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It should've been hours since I am sitting like this, in front of my PC, looking not at the screen but down at the keyboard. I tried to look up a few times but quickly looked down at the keyboard as soon as I caught a glimpse of it's reflection in the PC's screen, staring at me. Perhaps it will take an eternity for it to stop staring, but right now, I am too afraid to turn around.
Too afraid to turn around...(Pratik) It should've been hours since I am sitting like this, in front of my PC, looking not at the screen but down at the keyboard. I tried to look up a few times but quickly looked down at the keyboard as soon as I caught a glimpse of it's reflection in the PC's screen, staring at me. Perhaps it will take an eternity for it to stop staring, but right now, I am too afraid to turn around.
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Kevin Hughes
03/09/2021Pratik!
StoryStar of the Month! Way to go ! You earned it in every way: structure, language, style, composition, storytelling, plot, and grammar. Not bad for just one of your languages! So proud of you and may many more literary gems, and solidly written reports pour from you pen (or keyboard!).
Smiles, Kevin
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Pratik
07/24/2021How did I miss this comment? Sorry for the late reply and thank you so much for commenting Kevin! I'm always waiting for your comments.
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Mystery writer
02/11/2021Nice short story! It was only 3 or 4 sentences but it was really scary. :)
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MAYRA
12/30/2020well, it should've been minutes since I am sitting like this, in front of PC reading your story and comments.. lol
great work Pratik!
love from your neighboring state!
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MAYRA
12/30/2020Oh my God1 That sounds so good! Thank you so much, Pratik for reading my stories. Do let me know how you liked them in the comment section!
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Pratik
12/30/2020It's been half an hour's since am sitting like this, in front of my PC going through your profile and reading your stories. I am loving them!
Thanks for reading!
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Helsa
11/09/2020Simple,Short and sweet!! Great work out there Pratik.....Keep writing!!! Regards:
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Helsa
11/12/2020In here,it's showing that "keep writi.. "is the last word. But in my email I saw the rest of it, you kept " Always: D Regards:] : )"...But my reply was for the whole message! Lol!
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Pratik
11/11/2020Wait I think my reply didn't reach you completely.
Is "Keep writi..." the last word or you can see the whole message?
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Gail Moore
11/07/2020Well I would just have to agree with Kevin on this one.
I will add that I won’t be looking at the computer again tonight. Am sure I just saw a reflection in it. Scary dude. :-)
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Pratik
11/07/2020Lol you should stop reading my stories if that's the case. Just kidding. Thanks for reading. : )
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Kevin Hughes
11/07/2020Pratik,
You just invented a new genre: Micro Flash Fiction. Well done.
Smiles, Kevin
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