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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 11/18/2020
Haveli of death
Teen, F, from Allahabad, India.jpeg)
I still remember that frosting day...just a week before my summer vacation-
Alexa: Honey, I'm tired of staying in Canada. Why don't we visit your country for a change ?
Me: You mean India ? Alexa...You know Alan is only a year old. It's not safe!
Alexa: oh come on, your vacation is also coming and I even contacted the pediatrician.
Me: I'm not sure. And when did you contact her?
We both had a long talk that day but then we finally agreed to go to India. I booked the tickets. Later that night, I even contacted my dad -
Me: Paaylagu papa! How're you ?
Papa: All is well. What about you and my little grandson ?
Me: All of us are good too..
........
Me: Well dad, I decided to come to India....I actually even booked the tickets.
Papa: that's great! When are you coming ?
Me: after a week and three days from today!
Papa: Good. I am bought a haveli in the forest.
Me: wow! Where is it located?
Papa: in the forest ... but it's beautiful... oh son, talk to your mom.
All of them were excited to see Alan and us ofcourse. The day finally came and we boarded the flight. The whole journey I had a bad feeling about going to India. I just letted it go as I thought it's because its Alan's first time travelling. We reached Indra Gandhi's airport and then we stayed in Delhi for a day. The next day we had a train from Delhi to Chattisgarh. When we reached my dad picked us from there and straight away took us to the haveli. It was beautiful. Firstly it had a big front yard and then a gate to open the haveli. It was having enormous stairs coming from both of the sides and a door in the middle leading to the basement. (as shown in picture) My dad had to go to get my mom and he left. After two minutes, 4 little kids of the age 4-5 came running towards us-
Me: huh?? Who are you four?? How're you inside here? Did you sneak in ?
The kids: we live here forever.
Me: Don't fool me ... ok! Now tell...
Alexa: stop it Krish. They are just kids and if they live here they can show me the way to the bathroom. I need to go and Alan needs a change of diaper...Don't you little one??!!
Alan: Ba ba...aaaa.
The kids: come with us, Mom!
I was so confused but when Alexa pleaded I agreed. 5 hours passed Alexa didn't came back. I was going inside when I saw dad coming with the contractor. He stopped me-
Papa: Krish. Wait! Where is Alexa and Alan?
Me: in there! Why??
Papa: Oh no....*starts crying*
I got so scared I asked what happened and he replied-
Papa: the contractor just told me that here 4 kids stayed with their mother. Their father died in an accident and soon the mother was forcefully taken away from her children and killed. The kids were forced to work till they died. They're soul stays here and kills all woman to make her their mother and the kids which are under 5 years are killed by them to make them their brother or sister.
Me: For real?!
*I started crying*
We went inside and saw dead bodies of two other woman , Alexa, Alan and the four kids.
My family was ruined. I NEVER went back to India and my dad even sold the haveli to a single 80 years old.*starts crying*
Haveli of death(Riya)
I still remember that frosting day...just a week before my summer vacation-
Alexa: Honey, I'm tired of staying in Canada. Why don't we visit your country for a change ?
Me: You mean India ? Alexa...You know Alan is only a year old. It's not safe!
Alexa: oh come on, your vacation is also coming and I even contacted the pediatrician.
Me: I'm not sure. And when did you contact her?
We both had a long talk that day but then we finally agreed to go to India. I booked the tickets. Later that night, I even contacted my dad -
Me: Paaylagu papa! How're you ?
Papa: All is well. What about you and my little grandson ?
Me: All of us are good too..
........
Me: Well dad, I decided to come to India....I actually even booked the tickets.
Papa: that's great! When are you coming ?
Me: after a week and three days from today!
Papa: Good. I am bought a haveli in the forest.
Me: wow! Where is it located?
Papa: in the forest ... but it's beautiful... oh son, talk to your mom.
All of them were excited to see Alan and us ofcourse. The day finally came and we boarded the flight. The whole journey I had a bad feeling about going to India. I just letted it go as I thought it's because its Alan's first time travelling. We reached Indra Gandhi's airport and then we stayed in Delhi for a day. The next day we had a train from Delhi to Chattisgarh. When we reached my dad picked us from there and straight away took us to the haveli. It was beautiful. Firstly it had a big front yard and then a gate to open the haveli. It was having enormous stairs coming from both of the sides and a door in the middle leading to the basement. (as shown in picture) My dad had to go to get my mom and he left. After two minutes, 4 little kids of the age 4-5 came running towards us-
Me: huh?? Who are you four?? How're you inside here? Did you sneak in ?
The kids: we live here forever.
Me: Don't fool me ... ok! Now tell...
Alexa: stop it Krish. They are just kids and if they live here they can show me the way to the bathroom. I need to go and Alan needs a change of diaper...Don't you little one??!!
Alan: Ba ba...aaaa.
The kids: come with us, Mom!
I was so confused but when Alexa pleaded I agreed. 5 hours passed Alexa didn't came back. I was going inside when I saw dad coming with the contractor. He stopped me-
Papa: Krish. Wait! Where is Alexa and Alan?
Me: in there! Why??
Papa: Oh no....*starts crying*
I got so scared I asked what happened and he replied-
Papa: the contractor just told me that here 4 kids stayed with their mother. Their father died in an accident and soon the mother was forcefully taken away from her children and killed. The kids were forced to work till they died. They're soul stays here and kills all woman to make her their mother and the kids which are under 5 years are killed by them to make them their brother or sister.
Me: For real?!
*I started crying*
We went inside and saw dead bodies of two other woman , Alexa, Alan and the four kids.
My family was ruined. I NEVER went back to India and my dad even sold the haveli to a single 80 years old.*starts crying*
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