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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Love / Romance / Dating
- Published: 12/20/2020
It was a cold season of 2020, the day when you drove my consciousness at the glamour place for two fellas who wanted to reenact desires and collide their hearts intentionally. I have no plans to entertain again. However, my instinct whispered to me that I should do what is necessary to enclosed myself.
After getting rid of my hesitation, I immediately noticed your delicate skin wondered if you were a celestial being.
Honestly, I am aware of your innocent face trying to convince everyone of your purity; your glimmered eyes try to figure out things why on earth only today I saw you.
I imagine that I am inside the atom. It was like a clashing proton attracted to a steady electron; your hair strands waving all the time calm and peaceful and last your symmetrical teeth reminding me about symmetrical balance occurring in the artwork of "Cara Grande feather mask."
It was so early to feel these strange things. Before I am on chaos, strategized plan on how I can escape. Damn it! I don’t want to rush things but it’s now or never. Now my lips hang like on the garden of Babylon that no one attempts to pass. I admire you a lot. I think you can occupy the vacant seat in my life.
Here I am writing a confession. I’m hoping that you’ve read this one. I’m looking forward to meet you soon and know you on person. Don’t be wandered. No more con.
My Utopia(Zlour)
It was a cold season of 2020, the day when you drove my consciousness at the glamour place for two fellas who wanted to reenact desires and collide their hearts intentionally. I have no plans to entertain again. However, my instinct whispered to me that I should do what is necessary to enclosed myself.
After getting rid of my hesitation, I immediately noticed your delicate skin wondered if you were a celestial being.
Honestly, I am aware of your innocent face trying to convince everyone of your purity; your glimmered eyes try to figure out things why on earth only today I saw you.
I imagine that I am inside the atom. It was like a clashing proton attracted to a steady electron; your hair strands waving all the time calm and peaceful and last your symmetrical teeth reminding me about symmetrical balance occurring in the artwork of "Cara Grande feather mask."
It was so early to feel these strange things. Before I am on chaos, strategized plan on how I can escape. Damn it! I don’t want to rush things but it’s now or never. Now my lips hang like on the garden of Babylon that no one attempts to pass. I admire you a lot. I think you can occupy the vacant seat in my life.
Here I am writing a confession. I’m hoping that you’ve read this one. I’m looking forward to meet you soon and know you on person. Don’t be wandered. No more con.
Gail Moore
12/20/2020Not quite understanding the story, Was there more to it than this.
Maybe a part 2 so as we may understand the entire story.
Thanks for your writing :-)
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JD
12/20/2020I'm sure that your writing is beautiful in your own language, and I can see some beauty in it in English as well, but there is too much lost in translation. Perhaps you are using some sort of language translation service, which has not worked very well, since a lot of sentences do not make sense, with wrong words used to convey wrong meanings.
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