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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 12/30/2020
13th September 2019, Friday: Royapuram Railway Station
Karteyk is on his way to the railway station. He tells his cab driver: "Sir, can you please drive fast. I am running late".
15 minutes later, he reaches there. A railway station is always a busy place with a scene of hustle and bustle. Passengers run here and there to hoard their respective trains. The scratchy voice of hawkers can be heard all the time while they cry to sell their goods. After all, the Royapuram railway station is considered to be one of the oldest railway stations in the entire subcontinent.
The southern railway-46 arrives within half an hour. Karteyk rushes inside. To his surprise, he finds that he's the only one who has to board this train. Passengers had already taken their seats. He moved to his designated seat, window seat to be precise.
Next to him, there was an old lady who was sitting quietly. The opposite seats were taken by a young couple. It was a 3-hour journey. Karteyk was busy watching how mercifully lush trees covered the landscape. Out of blue, the lady spoke to her, "hey son". Karteyk was too confused to comprehend her. He replied, "Hi".
"It seems like you're travelling for the first time in this railway"
"Yeah granny, I generally prefer airlines even for short distances"
"Well welcome to this train. We have been travelling constantly since 2013"
"We? Whom does this "We?" include?"
"Me and all the passengers who are in this train"
Karteyk found it topsy-turvy. With weird expressions on his face, he tried to escape that compartment. The lady again says, "where are you going, my child?" Karteyk runs to the crew compartment of the train.
.....there's no engine driver. Karteyk's blood ran cold. He saw somebody else in the cab and he approached him
"Where the hell is the engine driver? How's the train running on its own? Could you please tell me what's going on? I am super horrified."
The tall-fat man says, "This train was crashed on 13th SEPTEMBER 2013- FRIDAY. All the passengers, including me, travelling on this train had died. However, the dead body of the driver was not found after the accident so I am not very sure about where he might be right now."
(dear readers, this is my second horror-mystery story. I wrote it by keeping all the suggestions and improvements I got on my previous stories. I hope you like it and do let me know in the comment section if any improvement is required. Keep supporting. Thank you)
September 13, 20XX(MAYRA)
13th September 2019, Friday: Royapuram Railway Station
Karteyk is on his way to the railway station. He tells his cab driver: "Sir, can you please drive fast. I am running late".
15 minutes later, he reaches there. A railway station is always a busy place with a scene of hustle and bustle. Passengers run here and there to hoard their respective trains. The scratchy voice of hawkers can be heard all the time while they cry to sell their goods. After all, the Royapuram railway station is considered to be one of the oldest railway stations in the entire subcontinent.
The southern railway-46 arrives within half an hour. Karteyk rushes inside. To his surprise, he finds that he's the only one who has to board this train. Passengers had already taken their seats. He moved to his designated seat, window seat to be precise.
Next to him, there was an old lady who was sitting quietly. The opposite seats were taken by a young couple. It was a 3-hour journey. Karteyk was busy watching how mercifully lush trees covered the landscape. Out of blue, the lady spoke to her, "hey son". Karteyk was too confused to comprehend her. He replied, "Hi".
"It seems like you're travelling for the first time in this railway"
"Yeah granny, I generally prefer airlines even for short distances"
"Well welcome to this train. We have been travelling constantly since 2013"
"We? Whom does this "We?" include?"
"Me and all the passengers who are in this train"
Karteyk found it topsy-turvy. With weird expressions on his face, he tried to escape that compartment. The lady again says, "where are you going, my child?" Karteyk runs to the crew compartment of the train.
.....there's no engine driver. Karteyk's blood ran cold. He saw somebody else in the cab and he approached him
"Where the hell is the engine driver? How's the train running on its own? Could you please tell me what's going on? I am super horrified."
The tall-fat man says, "This train was crashed on 13th SEPTEMBER 2013- FRIDAY. All the passengers, including me, travelling on this train had died. However, the dead body of the driver was not found after the accident so I am not very sure about where he might be right now."
(dear readers, this is my second horror-mystery story. I wrote it by keeping all the suggestions and improvements I got on my previous stories. I hope you like it and do let me know in the comment section if any improvement is required. Keep supporting. Thank you)
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Wadia Masood
12/31/2020I liked it! The ideas you fix in your stories are fantastic. Keep it up.
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