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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: General Interest
- Published: 01/05/2021
Once upon a time you are sleeping in your bed. You are dreaming about nature and happy to see many beautiful sceneries. During this period, the alarm bell rings. You get up in hurry. You have to go university. You go to bathroom and brush your teeth. While brushing teeth, you are thinking about what you have to do today. You are thinking about dream about beautiful scenes. You feel happy and calm while thinking about different sceneries. Your phone rings and you attend the call , your friend tell you about a party in which you also invited. You take your breakfast and leave the house.
You are going to university and you are thinking about your quiz in your mind. You reach university and park your bike. Go to class and meet your friends who was study for quiz. You revise your syllabus and wait for quiz. After quiz, you go to cafeteria with your friends to eat something. You take out your wallet from pocket and you see your money.
Suddenly, you remember that you have to go to ATM. You talk to your friend and say try to mark my attendance in next lecture because you have to go ATM. Your friend nods her head say ok you go and I’ll request teacher to mark you present. You thank your friend and say goodbye.
While going to parking, you see a girl who weeps and calling her family member. You hear her conversation. She says to her family member that she did not get any scholarship and now we have to pay full fee of university. You feel pity on her and try to help but suddenly you remember to go ATM and then on your friend’s place. You go to parking, sit on your bike and heading towards ATM. You have to go ATM and then go to a friend’s place to meet him.
While going towards ATM, you observe many things on road. You see a boy who was waiting for his girlfriend in front of a restaurant. He wears a very decent and expensive pent coat and he has many roses in his hand. You observe another person as well who was standing with him but he was a guard who was doing his duty with full honesty.
While observing different persons, the single light turns on and you have to go to your destination. You heading towards ATM. You just reach at the end of street where you see a crowd of people around you. There was a scene of hustle and bustle. You try to go ATM through your bike but this impossible at that time. You park your bike aside and walking toward your destination. You walking quickly and fastly towards ATM as you have short of time.
Your heart pounds, the air whistles through your lungs and you’re not sure if you’re going to make it. Near the A.T.M. sits a man wearing dirty clothes, and there’s a tin cup next to him. You do remember what you’re supposed to do in this situation. You quickly walk past him, and when he tells you in a cracked voice that he hasn’t eaten anything in two days, you look in the opposite direction, avoiding eye contact like a pro. There’s nothing to be afraid of. It’s like riding a bike: The body remembers everything, and the heart that softened while you were alone will harden back up in no time.
At night, when you free from your daily work. You remembered the whole day. The memory which instigates you to remember the bad thing that happened in whole day or the bad thing which have done by yourself. You ignore all things and have hope for new good day.
An average day of an ordinary life(Esha)
Once upon a time you are sleeping in your bed. You are dreaming about nature and happy to see many beautiful sceneries. During this period, the alarm bell rings. You get up in hurry. You have to go university. You go to bathroom and brush your teeth. While brushing teeth, you are thinking about what you have to do today. You are thinking about dream about beautiful scenes. You feel happy and calm while thinking about different sceneries. Your phone rings and you attend the call , your friend tell you about a party in which you also invited. You take your breakfast and leave the house.
You are going to university and you are thinking about your quiz in your mind. You reach university and park your bike. Go to class and meet your friends who was study for quiz. You revise your syllabus and wait for quiz. After quiz, you go to cafeteria with your friends to eat something. You take out your wallet from pocket and you see your money.
Suddenly, you remember that you have to go to ATM. You talk to your friend and say try to mark my attendance in next lecture because you have to go ATM. Your friend nods her head say ok you go and I’ll request teacher to mark you present. You thank your friend and say goodbye.
While going to parking, you see a girl who weeps and calling her family member. You hear her conversation. She says to her family member that she did not get any scholarship and now we have to pay full fee of university. You feel pity on her and try to help but suddenly you remember to go ATM and then on your friend’s place. You go to parking, sit on your bike and heading towards ATM. You have to go ATM and then go to a friend’s place to meet him.
While going towards ATM, you observe many things on road. You see a boy who was waiting for his girlfriend in front of a restaurant. He wears a very decent and expensive pent coat and he has many roses in his hand. You observe another person as well who was standing with him but he was a guard who was doing his duty with full honesty.
While observing different persons, the single light turns on and you have to go to your destination. You heading towards ATM. You just reach at the end of street where you see a crowd of people around you. There was a scene of hustle and bustle. You try to go ATM through your bike but this impossible at that time. You park your bike aside and walking toward your destination. You walking quickly and fastly towards ATM as you have short of time.
Your heart pounds, the air whistles through your lungs and you’re not sure if you’re going to make it. Near the A.T.M. sits a man wearing dirty clothes, and there’s a tin cup next to him. You do remember what you’re supposed to do in this situation. You quickly walk past him, and when he tells you in a cracked voice that he hasn’t eaten anything in two days, you look in the opposite direction, avoiding eye contact like a pro. There’s nothing to be afraid of. It’s like riding a bike: The body remembers everything, and the heart that softened while you were alone will harden back up in no time.
At night, when you free from your daily work. You remembered the whole day. The memory which instigates you to remember the bad thing that happened in whole day or the bad thing which have done by yourself. You ignore all things and have hope for new good day.
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Gail Moore
01/05/2021Just as you put it. A very ordinary life.
Can I suggest you put some warmth into your story? It was written very robotically and needed something to catch one's attention.
:-) smiles
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