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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Flash / Mini / Very Short
- Published: 01/30/2021
The traveller
Born 1953, F, from Auckland, New ZealandIt was 2020 when I first discovered something very extraordinary and, at first, I thought it was just a joke.
So here's where my story starts.
It was right in the middle of the pandemic of COVID 19 and people could not drive anywhere. However, people could walk anywhere and that's just what they did.
The pavement outside our place was just an ordinary piece of pavement, or so I thought.
I had our CCTV faced towards a section of it. I heard a police car heading our way so turned on my iPad which is connected to the CCTV to see which way it was going. People walked past every minute or so.
Then I noticed something really strange. On about a 2 metre section of the pavement everyone that walked past seemed to disappear then reappear seconds later.
I watched and watched, curiosity got the better of me and I just had to walk out and find out what was going on.
I walked into the section of odd pavement but instead of walking through it I just stood, turned, and walked sideways. One step two step and as I got further and further into whatever it was my body changed. My skin became smoother and younger, I began to shrink, My hair was long, blond and thick.
Worried about what I had stumbled across I turned back. I shrieked, I became scared, I was stuck in a time warp. There was no turning back. It was a one-way trip.
Susan, what the hell is wrong with you, stop screaming and come out for dinner.
I took my iPhone from my pocket, turned on the camera and looked at myself. Here I was. Eleven years old again.
OMG OMG, I SCREAMED. What the hell have I done?
I walked out into the dining room. My mother told me to return to my room and take off the ridiculous clothing that I had dug up from someplace.
“You are far too old to be playing dress ups young lady” exclaimed my mother.
The Levi jeans I had on were dragging on the floor and my bra was hiding nothing but a flat-chested preteen. Luckily it was hidden by my lovely floral shirt.
Not quite knowing where to go from here, I walked into my childhood bedroom, replaced my clothing with clothes from the wardrobe and hid my iPhone.
By now I was well aware of what had happened to me and would have to find a way to deal with it or find my way back.
I sat down at the table to mashed potatoes, kumara, peas and sausages.
I could not help myself and had to mention what sausages are made of and how bad they are. Babbling my disgust at how anyone could eat them.
With a slap on my hand, I was promptly sent to my room without any dinner.
It suited me as I had just eaten. I set about familiarizing myself with my past and how I was going to get myself out of this predicament.
The first thing I did was to hide my iPhone and the money I had hidden in my iPhone case. I hid them at the back of a set of drawers where no one would look. Not that we had that kind of family. Everyone respected each other's privacy.
Normally I would never have cash but with all this Covid 19 I had withdrawn $300 just in case I might have needed it.
So here I am back in the year 1970. 50 years back in time. Wondering if my life would follow the same pattern. I am guessing it would have to as here I am, same Mother, father and sister.
My first month back at school was an interesting time. Of course, I was getting the highest marks in my class as I already knew everything that this junior school could teach me.
At about the five-week mark I was called into the principal's office.
He asked me to take a seat on the opposite side of his desk.
Question time,
“You have become very clever Miss Blinders”
“I guess so sir”
“interesting story you wrote last week”
“Thank you, sir”
“you are using vocabulary that isn't in the dictionary as yet, words like computer, microwave, OMG, awesome and a few other words.
“Sorry sir I don't know what you are talking about”
Then out of nowhere, he asked, “What year did John Lennon die?” and without even thinking I said, “8th December, 1980, assassinated by Mark David Chapman.”
“Susan it's only 1970, so tell me, what year are you from? It's either that or you are closely related to Nostradamus“
I sat there looking like a stunned mullet.
“2020 sir, who are you? How do you know?"
“Names Barry,” he said as he extended his hand for a welcoming handshake.
“I'm only eleven years before you, and before you ask, no I don't know of anyone else. I'm pretty sure we have to just age our way out of this. So for me, it's another 39 years. For you, I'm afraid its 50 years from now so I hope they were good the first time around”
With that thought, I could easily have had a meltdown but at least I wasn't alone and had someone to talk to.
I gave him an insight about life in the years I had lived that he hadn't.
He laughed so much that he cried when I told him Donald Trump had become president and he suggested Homer Simson may have been a traveller like us.
I finished school early in my second life, married the same guy, had the same two kids once more. Ouch!!
Barry offered support, advice and encouragement. Invested the money I had in Gold and put it into a safety deposit box.
Many years later gold escalated in value so much so that it was enough to put a deposit on my first home.
As the years went on I kept telling my husband what would happen in the future, but he kept saying it was all a coincidence and laughed at me.
I knew ahead of time about ipads, iPods, Bluetooth, wifi, and many other things.
The day came when we sat and watched that strange piece of pavement during Covid 19.
Hubby asks “are you going to check it out?“
I answer “already have, been there done that, once bitten twice shy.
You don't get it, I just got back to where I came from.”
The end.
The traveller(Gail Moore)
It was 2020 when I first discovered something very extraordinary and, at first, I thought it was just a joke.
So here's where my story starts.
It was right in the middle of the pandemic of COVID 19 and people could not drive anywhere. However, people could walk anywhere and that's just what they did.
The pavement outside our place was just an ordinary piece of pavement, or so I thought.
I had our CCTV faced towards a section of it. I heard a police car heading our way so turned on my iPad which is connected to the CCTV to see which way it was going. People walked past every minute or so.
Then I noticed something really strange. On about a 2 metre section of the pavement everyone that walked past seemed to disappear then reappear seconds later.
I watched and watched, curiosity got the better of me and I just had to walk out and find out what was going on.
I walked into the section of odd pavement but instead of walking through it I just stood, turned, and walked sideways. One step two step and as I got further and further into whatever it was my body changed. My skin became smoother and younger, I began to shrink, My hair was long, blond and thick.
Worried about what I had stumbled across I turned back. I shrieked, I became scared, I was stuck in a time warp. There was no turning back. It was a one-way trip.
Susan, what the hell is wrong with you, stop screaming and come out for dinner.
I took my iPhone from my pocket, turned on the camera and looked at myself. Here I was. Eleven years old again.
OMG OMG, I SCREAMED. What the hell have I done?
I walked out into the dining room. My mother told me to return to my room and take off the ridiculous clothing that I had dug up from someplace.
“You are far too old to be playing dress ups young lady” exclaimed my mother.
The Levi jeans I had on were dragging on the floor and my bra was hiding nothing but a flat-chested preteen. Luckily it was hidden by my lovely floral shirt.
Not quite knowing where to go from here, I walked into my childhood bedroom, replaced my clothing with clothes from the wardrobe and hid my iPhone.
By now I was well aware of what had happened to me and would have to find a way to deal with it or find my way back.
I sat down at the table to mashed potatoes, kumara, peas and sausages.
I could not help myself and had to mention what sausages are made of and how bad they are. Babbling my disgust at how anyone could eat them.
With a slap on my hand, I was promptly sent to my room without any dinner.
It suited me as I had just eaten. I set about familiarizing myself with my past and how I was going to get myself out of this predicament.
The first thing I did was to hide my iPhone and the money I had hidden in my iPhone case. I hid them at the back of a set of drawers where no one would look. Not that we had that kind of family. Everyone respected each other's privacy.
Normally I would never have cash but with all this Covid 19 I had withdrawn $300 just in case I might have needed it.
So here I am back in the year 1970. 50 years back in time. Wondering if my life would follow the same pattern. I am guessing it would have to as here I am, same Mother, father and sister.
My first month back at school was an interesting time. Of course, I was getting the highest marks in my class as I already knew everything that this junior school could teach me.
At about the five-week mark I was called into the principal's office.
He asked me to take a seat on the opposite side of his desk.
Question time,
“You have become very clever Miss Blinders”
“I guess so sir”
“interesting story you wrote last week”
“Thank you, sir”
“you are using vocabulary that isn't in the dictionary as yet, words like computer, microwave, OMG, awesome and a few other words.
“Sorry sir I don't know what you are talking about”
Then out of nowhere, he asked, “What year did John Lennon die?” and without even thinking I said, “8th December, 1980, assassinated by Mark David Chapman.”
“Susan it's only 1970, so tell me, what year are you from? It's either that or you are closely related to Nostradamus“
I sat there looking like a stunned mullet.
“2020 sir, who are you? How do you know?"
“Names Barry,” he said as he extended his hand for a welcoming handshake.
“I'm only eleven years before you, and before you ask, no I don't know of anyone else. I'm pretty sure we have to just age our way out of this. So for me, it's another 39 years. For you, I'm afraid its 50 years from now so I hope they were good the first time around”
With that thought, I could easily have had a meltdown but at least I wasn't alone and had someone to talk to.
I gave him an insight about life in the years I had lived that he hadn't.
He laughed so much that he cried when I told him Donald Trump had become president and he suggested Homer Simson may have been a traveller like us.
I finished school early in my second life, married the same guy, had the same two kids once more. Ouch!!
Barry offered support, advice and encouragement. Invested the money I had in Gold and put it into a safety deposit box.
Many years later gold escalated in value so much so that it was enough to put a deposit on my first home.
As the years went on I kept telling my husband what would happen in the future, but he kept saying it was all a coincidence and laughed at me.
I knew ahead of time about ipads, iPods, Bluetooth, wifi, and many other things.
The day came when we sat and watched that strange piece of pavement during Covid 19.
Hubby asks “are you going to check it out?“
I answer “already have, been there done that, once bitten twice shy.
You don't get it, I just got back to where I came from.”
The end.
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Aleena Nawaz
05/21/2023The story was fantastic. Every detail was crafted with such precision and care. I appreciate the hard work that went into creating this masterpiece. Well done!
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Shelly Garrod
02/27/2023Loved your story Gail. I'm always intrigued by time travel stoies. This story was amazing. Had me doing a lot of thinking. Great job.
Blessings Shelly
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Gail Moore
02/28/2023Thanks very much Shelly, yep, I have a bit of an obsession with this kind of subject.
Take care and thanks :-)
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Bernardo Mendes
11/05/2021Amazing story Gail! I always loved these sci-fi/time travelling stories!
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Mohid
06/27/2021Beautifully written, my sister and I enjoyed reading it along with our mom. Amazing indeed.
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Gail Moore
06/27/2021Thank you so much. I really appreciate you reading and your lovely comment :-)
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Kevin Hughes
03/16/2021Aloha Gail,
I hate to brag, but I knew this would win an Award when I first read it. I am so glad New Zealand has flies! Smiles, Kevin
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Gail Moore
03/15/2021Thank you so much. This is the highlight for my week.
Very excited to be honoured for the entire week.
Sending many thanks to you xx
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Sylvia Maclagan
02/22/2021Hello Gail, what a wonderful story. It had me guessing all the way. There are so many things I'd change, that the list would be too long.
It is very well written and as others have said, highly original. I hope you cultivate this style and bring us some more. Best wishes, Sylvia
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Diego
02/04/2021It’s different from all the time travel stories I have ever seen.
This is one of those stories which makes you think about the situation and how would you lived it, in my case, I would appreciate some moments whit my family, some events and other things I want to live again.
I liked how you included the COVID-19 situation, I’m sure most of the people now only want to travel to another time.
Finally, the language problems like using word that doesn’t exist in the past it’s something I didn’t think before, I guess I will have to learn to speak like in 1970, just in case I’m in that situation someday.
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Gail Moore
02/06/2021Thank you for reading and your comment, Oh the things we could change.
Awesome. :-)
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André
02/04/2021Hello Gail
Your story got me thinking that if I traveled to the past, at what stage of my life I would go to.
I also found interesting your story. If I would go to the past I would correct mistakes
and bet on events to get a lot of money. Specially in sports events and if I went to
the future , I would like to know what happened to the world and with Lionel Messi to find out if he stayed
at Barcelona :/
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Gail Moore
02/06/2021Wow, yes we could change so many things, just imagine what we would know that we don't now.
Thanks for reading and your comments :-)
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Ana Paula
02/04/2021Hi Gail,
This story is really interesting and enjoyable, it made me think how would it be if I traveled back in time. Is also interesting how people travel back in time in this story, why the people that traveled in time go back to 1970 or does the CCV is the only way to travel in time? The story is very good, I think is different from other “traveling in time” stories. It’s a creative story, also it was funny. You did a good job writing this story. Thanks for sharing it.
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Gail Moore
02/06/2021Thank you very much, it's good to know it left people thinking about what they would change.
Thanks for reading and your lovely comment :-)
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Fernando
02/04/2021Hello Miss Gail, your story is very interesting, very funny and above all it is suitable for all audience ,and the truth i think that it can also by a power to travel in time is even a power that could be used for good, to support, prevent and not regret losses and to be able to have more advances in science and technology, and honestly I would like to travel back in time and be able to see people that I can no longer see and it would even be a good way to make money by being able to predict what we already know is going to happen or even to be able to predict natural disasters and be able to prevent and avoid damage to the population, muy buena historia muy recomendable y gran trabajo y creatividad tiene senorita gail. And have a good day miss gmail
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Gail Moore
02/06/2021Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
Yes just imagine all the good we could do if we where able to see into our future.
What a great world that would be. :-)
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Margaret Luna
02/04/2021Such an interesting story. It was amazing that you included 2021 situations, as Covid, I mean, who would imagine we will be in our houses with electronic devices to communicate, having meetings and having classes without going to school.
And I have always thought about The Simpsons being time travelers, the production, they have ¨guessed¨ or predicted a lot of situations that now, in 2021 we have been through, as the giant wasps, Trump as a president, Obama's wife purple coat, or even Covid 19. I wonder if someone on this earth have travelled on time, it would be such an incredible experience, but if you could go back to the time you are actually living.
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Gail Moore
02/06/2021Very thought-provoking Margaret.
I'm sure there is some truth to the story in many aspects of it.
Time travel has always been an interesting subject.
Thanks so much for reading and your lovely comment. :-)
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Sebastian
02/04/2021Hi Gail
I have just read your story in english class,and it is awesome,I loved the characters and
the way you made them,the surrounding and locations also are awesome,this made me
think in which ways I could travel in time,and discussed with my classmates,and found
out that if we traveled to any sport event,we could bet a lot of money and win,or to
repair an old mistake,so congratulations and thanks
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Gail Moore
02/06/2021Thank you so much, I really appreciate your reading and your lovely comment.
Yes, just imaging what we could do if we had the knowledge we hold today.
I think our lives would be incredibly different.
Would you choose to be famous?
I think I would stay under the radar but help the poor.
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Emiliano Maldonado
02/04/2021I liked it a lot and I have thought about how I could repair the mistakes I made but the truth is something that I don't think anyone can do and we can only learn a great story with a great plot of something I love.
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Emiliano Maldonado
02/04/2021And i forgwt to add something, i think that time travellers can be with us now. What do you think?
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Cristian Daniel
02/04/2021This story is awesome Gail!
Really well done, this could work wonderfully as a children's movie actually, the characters are entertaining, the plot is interesting and could be expanded upon if you keep at it, your writing style reminds me of those children movies you would watch on TV and that would make you have a good time.
What i mean, is that you did a great job Gail.
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Gail Moore
02/06/2021Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
There is so much you can do when writing this kind of story. Hence, keeping it simple made a difference or it could easily have ended up like many other time travel stories.
Have an awesome day :-)
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Kevin Hughes
02/02/2021Gail,
In my younger years I would have said: "Far out!" Now...well, I have learned along the road. I would say: "Brilliant." But that word doesn't carry enough weight...so I have to use a now overused word: unprecedented. Yep. this story is exactly that.
Smiles, Kevin
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Gail Moore
02/02/2021Awww Kevin, You are too nice. Thank you.
So I have to tell you. Me and my crazy mind. I thought this story up while watching flies.
They just seem to disappear then reappear hehehe :-) just to annoy!!
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Herm Sherwood-Sitts
02/02/2021I always wondered what I would do different... Great story Gail, Loved it!
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Gail Moore
02/02/2021Thanks Herm. Yeah I think it would be very strange and you couldn't help yourself with how knowledgeable you were.
Thanks so much for reading :-)
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BEN BROWN
02/02/2021BEN BROWN
A most outstanding story. There are times when I think about such things as going back in time thousands of years to long lost ages forgotten by humanity.
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Gail Moore
02/02/2021Thank you very much Ben.
I think that would be a really interesting thing to do. Oh What stories could be told.
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Jason James Parker
01/31/2021What a great story! I have to admit, it was hard to come back to the present day afterward. I loved the moment of sausage-horror. Lol. Very creative and clever. Loved every bit of it, Gail. : )
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JD
01/30/2021That was a really FUN read, Gail! Full of history and mystery and intrigue. I would especially enjoy being able to have a second chance at all the things I might have done differently. And knowing in advance to invest in things like Gold and Apple and Homer Simpson originals, etc....! What fun! Thanks! :-)
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Gail Moore
01/30/2021Hehe, thinking like me.
I could have gone on forever with what I could have changed but then I thought it's been done to many time so I just kept it simple.
I think what I would do is invest in Microsoft, Apple, and have purchased the car number plate Google.
Then of course you have to ask yourself, are you already happy with your lot in life.
Oh the thoughts go on :-)
Thanks for your lovely comments.
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Mary Eileen Callan
01/30/2021Gail I loved the time travel aspect. It would be hard to live in a time when you know what's going to happen. I'm not sure I'd want to. Nice job.
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Martha Huett
01/30/2021Another great time travel story! You're so good at this, Gail. Thanks for sharing them with us. Homer Simpson fit in perfectly. LOL :)
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Gail Moore
01/30/2021Thanks very much Martha,
Yep I guess it’s the kind of story you could put to little or to much so I left it at Homer.
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