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- Story Listed as: True Life For Kids
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 01/31/2021
Hi, my name is Tom my mum has just had a new baby boy, his name is Milo. Before Milo was born we lived in a really cute small home. it had a small back garden, and the house just had enough room for me, my dad and my mum, that’s why we had to move. Every single day me, my parents and Milo visit a new home, my mum loves old homes, on the other hand, I hate them! they’re really creepy and remind me of horror movies.
As I approached the new home that we were looking at, I had a feeling and it wasn’t a good one. I felt unwelcome, like I should not be there. But I knew because it was old, and my mum has a weird fascination of all old things, this was the house we are buying. As we look round the rooms they all had king-size beds, and the rooms were all really dark. I suddenly felt like I needed the toilet so I told mum and dad that I needed to go and I asked the owner if it was okay, she was a old creepy lady that had scratches all up her arms. She said it was fine to go to the toilet, but she whispered in my ear to watch out. “What does that mean?” I thought to myself, I brushed it off thinking that she was just a weird lady but she definitely wasn’t. As I crept round the house to try and find a toilet I heard running around the rooms, but it was not just in one place, it was on the first, second and third floor. I ran as fast as I could back to my parents. But no one believed me, apart from the old lady who had very worried look on her face.
The time came when it was time to decide if we want the home. Of course my mum said yes, so my dad did too, and Milo of course being a baby didn’t even have a say in it. A few months later I was getting ready to move into the home. I went to my old house one last time thinking “why do we have to buy a new one I would’ve been happy to share a room with Milo.”
I made my way into the creaky house, I felt that I had to leave as soon as possible. It was night outside, and was almost 10 o’clock. So I had to go to bed. I got ready in my massive room, but I didn’t feel safe. I didn’t wanna tell my parents as I knew they wouldn’t believe me. It turned out that everything was fine, and I slept through the night easy. I thought to myself “this isn’t gonna be that bad is it?” But boy I was wrong...
A few weeks past of living in the home and everything seemed fine until that night. I was doing my normal night routine when I heard the running, laughing was also included this time. I know heard it coming from different rooms around the house too! I shook my head and brushed it off as my imagination. That night I woke up extremely disturbed. like I was being watched I couldn’t move my hands and legs and I was shaking. I tried to move and I tried to scream but nothing worked. I closed my eyes and I felt heavy breathing right next to my face. To this day I still wonder what has happened if I open my eyes? The next day I ran extremely fast down the stairs and I couldn’t get my words out to my mother, I tried telling her everything that happened Of course no believed me.
Days past and I was fine. but that night I felt unsafe and watched again it was the exact same feeling as It was that night I had heavy breathing on my cheek, ice cold breathing not just breathing, not like human breathing. Like dead breathing... I went to sleep at night as normal and I woke up again shaking like a leaf and freezing. This time I opened my eyes...
I saw a woman in a white ripped dress she had rusty chains wrapped around her neck and arms, I looked in the mirror but there was no reflection. This woman had no reflection! I was crying hysterically but no sound was coming out. I looked at the time and it was 2 am, I thought to myself how was I going to get through this night. Suddenly, the women let out a loud scream, But my parents heard nothing. Am I being haunted? I didn’t know how to get out of this house I felt trapped, I couldn’t move, it was like I was paralysed! The woman turn around and left, I was horrified...
Now I’m 15 and Milo is five, I still live in that house, from time to time I bump into that woman, I know she wants me to leave but I don’t know how…
Lights out...(ScarlettandLucystories)
Hi, my name is Tom my mum has just had a new baby boy, his name is Milo. Before Milo was born we lived in a really cute small home. it had a small back garden, and the house just had enough room for me, my dad and my mum, that’s why we had to move. Every single day me, my parents and Milo visit a new home, my mum loves old homes, on the other hand, I hate them! they’re really creepy and remind me of horror movies.
As I approached the new home that we were looking at, I had a feeling and it wasn’t a good one. I felt unwelcome, like I should not be there. But I knew because it was old, and my mum has a weird fascination of all old things, this was the house we are buying. As we look round the rooms they all had king-size beds, and the rooms were all really dark. I suddenly felt like I needed the toilet so I told mum and dad that I needed to go and I asked the owner if it was okay, she was a old creepy lady that had scratches all up her arms. She said it was fine to go to the toilet, but she whispered in my ear to watch out. “What does that mean?” I thought to myself, I brushed it off thinking that she was just a weird lady but she definitely wasn’t. As I crept round the house to try and find a toilet I heard running around the rooms, but it was not just in one place, it was on the first, second and third floor. I ran as fast as I could back to my parents. But no one believed me, apart from the old lady who had very worried look on her face.
The time came when it was time to decide if we want the home. Of course my mum said yes, so my dad did too, and Milo of course being a baby didn’t even have a say in it. A few months later I was getting ready to move into the home. I went to my old house one last time thinking “why do we have to buy a new one I would’ve been happy to share a room with Milo.”
I made my way into the creaky house, I felt that I had to leave as soon as possible. It was night outside, and was almost 10 o’clock. So I had to go to bed. I got ready in my massive room, but I didn’t feel safe. I didn’t wanna tell my parents as I knew they wouldn’t believe me. It turned out that everything was fine, and I slept through the night easy. I thought to myself “this isn’t gonna be that bad is it?” But boy I was wrong...
A few weeks past of living in the home and everything seemed fine until that night. I was doing my normal night routine when I heard the running, laughing was also included this time. I know heard it coming from different rooms around the house too! I shook my head and brushed it off as my imagination. That night I woke up extremely disturbed. like I was being watched I couldn’t move my hands and legs and I was shaking. I tried to move and I tried to scream but nothing worked. I closed my eyes and I felt heavy breathing right next to my face. To this day I still wonder what has happened if I open my eyes? The next day I ran extremely fast down the stairs and I couldn’t get my words out to my mother, I tried telling her everything that happened Of course no believed me.
Days past and I was fine. but that night I felt unsafe and watched again it was the exact same feeling as It was that night I had heavy breathing on my cheek, ice cold breathing not just breathing, not like human breathing. Like dead breathing... I went to sleep at night as normal and I woke up again shaking like a leaf and freezing. This time I opened my eyes...
I saw a woman in a white ripped dress she had rusty chains wrapped around her neck and arms, I looked in the mirror but there was no reflection. This woman had no reflection! I was crying hysterically but no sound was coming out. I looked at the time and it was 2 am, I thought to myself how was I going to get through this night. Suddenly, the women let out a loud scream, But my parents heard nothing. Am I being haunted? I didn’t know how to get out of this house I felt trapped, I couldn’t move, it was like I was paralysed! The woman turn around and left, I was horrified...
Now I’m 15 and Milo is five, I still live in that house, from time to time I bump into that woman, I know she wants me to leave but I don’t know how…
BEN BROWN
02/06/2021BEN BROWN
Awesome!!! I'm well impressed with your story. It's just like something out of a Goosebumps adventure.
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ScarlettandLucystories
02/09/2021Thank you:)
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