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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Love / Romance / Dating
- Published: 02/19/2021
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There are few people in the library. Something normal. On a Saturday morning almost everyone is sleeping, or recovering from a hangover, or something like that.
The few people here are the usual ones, the librarians who cannot be absent, the old people on the corner with the newspapers, and the pregnant mothers who practice yoga.
But there is also a girl.
With the shelves full of books behind, the sun coming through the window, the wooden table with drawers with a pile of books on top and a lamp, a small cup of coffee next to it in a small armchair, sitting on a chair, there is a girl.
A beautiful girl with brown hair and white skin, wearing a gray turtleneck and a red and black plaid jacket, with blue pants, reading a novel with a green cover.
I slowly approach and sit close to her, I look at her carefully and begin to register her features, she has a small and delicate nose, with honey-colored cat eyes, her ears are a bit pointed and her bangs reach almost to her eyebrows. . . . She is beautiful.
She looks up and looks at me.
- Hello. - She tells me with a voice that is barely a whisper.
- Hello.
- My name is Adhara.
- That makes sense.
She looks at me, arching an eyebrow.
- Because?
- The variant of your name, Adara, means beauty, and your name, Adhara, is the name of a star.
She looks surprised.
- You know names.
I look at her and shrug.
- That's what the Internet is for.
She lets out a laugh that breaks the silence of the library, everyone looks at her disapprovingly, but she seems even more perfect.
- Suppose.
- My name is Adrian.
- Your name means "He who comes from the sea"
- How do you know?
She shrugs her shoulders.
- That's what the Internet is for.
I smile, and she soon returns my smile. There is no doubt, this girl is perfect.
That girl...(Agata Montoya)
There are few people in the library. Something normal. On a Saturday morning almost everyone is sleeping, or recovering from a hangover, or something like that.
The few people here are the usual ones, the librarians who cannot be absent, the old people on the corner with the newspapers, and the pregnant mothers who practice yoga.
But there is also a girl.
With the shelves full of books behind, the sun coming through the window, the wooden table with drawers with a pile of books on top and a lamp, a small cup of coffee next to it in a small armchair, sitting on a chair, there is a girl.
A beautiful girl with brown hair and white skin, wearing a gray turtleneck and a red and black plaid jacket, with blue pants, reading a novel with a green cover.
I slowly approach and sit close to her, I look at her carefully and begin to register her features, she has a small and delicate nose, with honey-colored cat eyes, her ears are a bit pointed and her bangs reach almost to her eyebrows. . . . She is beautiful.
She looks up and looks at me.
- Hello. - She tells me with a voice that is barely a whisper.
- Hello.
- My name is Adhara.
- That makes sense.
She looks at me, arching an eyebrow.
- Because?
- The variant of your name, Adara, means beauty, and your name, Adhara, is the name of a star.
She looks surprised.
- You know names.
I look at her and shrug.
- That's what the Internet is for.
She lets out a laugh that breaks the silence of the library, everyone looks at her disapprovingly, but she seems even more perfect.
- Suppose.
- My name is Adrian.
- Your name means "He who comes from the sea"
- How do you know?
She shrugs her shoulders.
- That's what the Internet is for.
I smile, and she soon returns my smile. There is no doubt, this girl is perfect.
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Jd
02/24/2021Hi Agata, Just an FYI that no one who commented on your story will know that you replied to their comments, because only the author of the story (YOU) is sent a notice about new comments made on their story. You have made a new comment on your story. In order for others to receive your comment you need to REPLY directly to each person. I know it takes more time to do it that way, but you'll earn points every time you reply, so hopefully that will help.
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Jd
02/22/2021That was a beautiful and sweet short romance story, Agata! I love it. It seems like the beginning of a beautiful relationship! Thank you for all the outstanding short stories for teens you've shared on Storystar! :-)
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Agata Montoya
02/25/2021Thanks to you Jd for taking the time to read my stories and those of all the people on Story Star, your comments are very valuable to everyone. :)
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Agata Montoya
02/19/2021Hi guys! It's been a long time since I showed up around here, right? I'm back and with all the courage to post stories, I hope you enjoy this one!
I love! Keep writing. :)
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