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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 03/01/2021
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A single thread
Plied blue and red,
With wisps of gold and green,
Through needle’s eye
Is passed – and I
Watch what I once had been.
This thread a soul
It’s length the whole
Stretch of a person’s life.
Each color twined
Is underlined
As peace or joy or strife.
First knot the thread
Upon the head
Of this loom’s starting nail,
Then under weave
And over leave
A length and then a tale.
Each thread is passed
Over this last
And final thread of all,
They touch and glide
Along beside
Until away they fall.
This little thread
Taking the stead
Of those who’ve passed before,
Living “The End”
Where stories wend
To close forevermore.
Last thread alone,
Your piece is done,
So far the tale has led.
Dear striving heart
You’ve played your part.
We cut the final thread.
The Final Thread(Thalassa Brytaye)
A single thread
Plied blue and red,
With wisps of gold and green,
Through needle’s eye
Is passed – and I
Watch what I once had been.
This thread a soul
It’s length the whole
Stretch of a person’s life.
Each color twined
Is underlined
As peace or joy or strife.
First knot the thread
Upon the head
Of this loom’s starting nail,
Then under weave
And over leave
A length and then a tale.
Each thread is passed
Over this last
And final thread of all,
They touch and glide
Along beside
Until away they fall.
This little thread
Taking the stead
Of those who’ve passed before,
Living “The End”
Where stories wend
To close forevermore.
Last thread alone,
Your piece is done,
So far the tale has led.
Dear striving heart
You’ve played your part.
We cut the final thread.
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Jason James Parker
03/07/2021I love the rhythm, the premise, and the composition. Excellent work, Thalassa. You're one hell of a talent. : )
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Thalassa Brytaye
03/07/2021Thank you so much, both for reading and your kind compliment. :) I am glad you enjoyed.
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Thalassa Brytaye
03/02/2021I should have expected comments on this thread of thought. XD Thank you!
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