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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 05/10/2021
Blue
Born 1998, M, from Kolkata, IndiaBlue
Well, what is blue?
Is it the colour of my night lamp?
Or is the night itself?
Perhaps it is the quiet shade of sanity
Amidst the madness of a starry night.
I guess it is the colour of the sea
And the beauty of the sky,
Until, of course, it smears itself scarlet
By the wound of a departing sun.
Maybe they are the order of the high
Whose mighty sword slips into my gut
The blue of my ink runs dry,
As I bleed red all the same.
They say blue is purity,
Like the skin of Ram and Kaali
And the blood of my mother, my sister, my wife;
Bluer than the eyes of Jesus
Is it an expression of my melancholy?
Or is it simply the colour of my curtains?
Oh Blue! You're just a tint
On the looking glass I use to see the world through.
Blue(Kanishka Roy)
Blue
Well, what is blue?
Is it the colour of my night lamp?
Or is the night itself?
Perhaps it is the quiet shade of sanity
Amidst the madness of a starry night.
I guess it is the colour of the sea
And the beauty of the sky,
Until, of course, it smears itself scarlet
By the wound of a departing sun.
Maybe they are the order of the high
Whose mighty sword slips into my gut
The blue of my ink runs dry,
As I bleed red all the same.
They say blue is purity,
Like the skin of Ram and Kaali
And the blood of my mother, my sister, my wife;
Bluer than the eyes of Jesus
Is it an expression of my melancholy?
Or is it simply the colour of my curtains?
Oh Blue! You're just a tint
On the looking glass I use to see the world through.
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Carol MC.
10/03/2021Love love love! Love this poem! You made it perfect! The tones, the figures, it is just so good to read! Just perfect! Thank you for sharing
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MAYRA
10/02/2021Congratulations on being the SHORT STORY WRITER OF THE MONTH! I am just going through your profile, reading the well-written stories and it's fascinating to me how rich these little gems are. Truly deserved! Speaking specifically about this one, blue is such a gorgeous color and your writing made it even more special.
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Kanishka Roy
10/02/2021Thanks a lot MAYRA! Appreciation like this makes my day. I am grateful for you taking your time to read my work.
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Shirley Smothers
05/24/2021Beautiful writing. Blue can mean peace and harmony. Congratulations on SHORT STORY STAR OF THE DAY!
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Jason James Parker
05/18/2021Great to see you back on Storystar, Kanishka. I love: "The blue of my ink runs dry, As I bleed red all the same..." It's simply exquisite phrasing that reads beautifully and evokes some profoundly deep feelings. I love how your work reflects your culture and thereby enriches the experience. A pleasure to read. : )
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Kanishka Roy
05/18/2021Hey Jason,
Great to be back! I completely agree with your observation....even though sometimes it's a swing and a miss
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Radrook
05/12/2021So when applied to the night, a Western reader will imagine a sad night. In Hindu culture, it represents manliness...
Sorry about the typos. I have bad vision.
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Kanishka Roy
05/12/2021Poetry is often open to interpretation...and while most of your viewpoint matches mine here's how mine's different.
Blue as a color of purity. This is a satire. In hindi culture, ancient books and literature have portrayed Ram and Kaali as dark-skinned deities. In western culture Jesus is represented as a caucasian man with blue eyes even though He is portrayed as dark skinned in many cultures as well.
Modern representation of these figures as blue instead of black is the satire here since it seems that black is 'impure' .
And blue as purity in my mother, sister and wife is also a satire. Modern television and advertisements represent menstruation blood as a blue liquid in our country, I'm unaware of others. Menstruating women have been considered impure since ancient times , and even today in some places, in our culture. So this delusional approach of menstrual hygeine companies is what I've targetted out.
This viewpoint requires context which is difficult for any other culture outside mine to grasp.
However I really, really appreciate you taking the time to jot down your thoughts.
Thanks a lot!
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Radrook
05/12/2021Here is the way I understood the poem.
In western culture. one way in which the color blue is viewed is in relation to sadness. I am feeling blue, means I am sad.
So when applied to the night, a Western reader will imagime a sad nioght. or night of sadness. In Himdu culture it represents mniness, depth of character, ability to deal with difficult situations, bravery, determination. Thus Kali, Rama and Krishna are depicted as blue. Kali
In the poem, the blueness of sea and sky are suddenly smeared with redness, bringng blood to mind as the result of a wound. It is described as a result of a wound inflicted by God. Ultiimately, we are all wounded by death at the end of our life because it is decreed by God that we must die. So our blueness is suddenlly gone. This concept is further reinforced by reference to the ink of life running dry and being replaced by the redness, once more indicatng a mortal wound delivered by the Most High.
At the end, you classify blueness ass being able to represent purity. Perhaps because in your culture the goddess Kali, who is pure, is represented as being blue? You describe your female family members in the same way. Also, you refer to the blueness or purity of Jesus' eyes as blue. Is this because he is described that way in yor culture? After all, there are records saying that Jesus was indeed in India form many years before he retured to his homeland Palestine.
Well, that is my understanding of the poem.
At the end, you choose to classify the color blue as merely a tint or a viewpoint since its meaning can vary from one situation to the next.
That is my understanding of the poem. I could not find anything on the god you call Ram. Is he depicted as having having blue skin aswell?
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JD
05/11/2021It is nice to see a new writing from you Kanishka, but I have to admit I was disappointed when I opened it up to discover a poem instead of a story. You are a brilliant writer. Poet not so much. Partly it is because you built up my anticipation about what to expect when you wrote your description about it saying it would be random thoughts about how blue relates to romance, bigotry, politics, etc... so I was expecting something more in depth and analytical/philosophical. For this reason your simple poem did not live up to my expectation. Nevertheless it was a nice poem and I am glad to see a new short writing by you, whatever it is. Thank you :-)
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JD
05/24/2021Thanks for saying that, Kanishka. I was worried that maybe I had offended or discouraged you. I'm glad to hear that I did not. Take care : )
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Kanishka Roy
05/24/2021Hey Julie,
I need to make this absolutely clear to you - never have I ever mistook or misunderstood any form of critique of my work here as an attack on my skills but rather a genuine motivation to sharpen them. I am an amateur writer and I can't be better if I am not able to understand my strengths. And I completely agree....I am a few steps ahead in story writing than poetry.
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JD
05/24/2021Kanishka, please note that my comments about your poetry were not meant to diminish your skills as a poet, since you are superbly skilled as a writer no matter what form your writing takes. I am neither a writer nor a poet. I am only a reader, so I was simply stating my reader's preference for your short stories over poetry. In general, I always prefer a short story over a poem. :-)
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