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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Aging / Maturity
- Published: 06/07/2021
When I was Lovely and Young
Born 2010, F, from Cork, IrelandWhen I was lovely and young
In my hair, there was no bun
It wasn’t all white
And I had great eyesight
When I was lovely and young
When I was lovely and young
I’d a fabulous tan from the sun
My hair was a glistening gold
At least, that’s what I was told
When I was lovely and young
When I was lovely and young
Oh, did I have such fun!
Make sure you have fun too
For one day you
Will think, my life was a dream
When I was young and keen.
You won’t be young for too long
One day, you’ll join in my song.
When I was Lovely and Young(Tara Callinan)
When I was lovely and young
In my hair, there was no bun
It wasn’t all white
And I had great eyesight
When I was lovely and young
When I was lovely and young
I’d a fabulous tan from the sun
My hair was a glistening gold
At least, that’s what I was told
When I was lovely and young
When I was lovely and young
Oh, did I have such fun!
Make sure you have fun too
For one day you
Will think, my life was a dream
When I was young and keen.
You won’t be young for too long
One day, you’ll join in my song.
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Martha Huett
06/09/2021What a nice poem! Thanks for writing and sharing it. I read your profile, and I too believe you will be a writer one day. Wait! You already are with this wonderful poem. Congratulations, Tara! PS. Cute pic of you and your pup :)
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Tara Callinan
06/10/2021Thanks so much! Your photo of the dog is very cute too. I actually wrote the poem when I was 9 and edited before I put it up on storystar.
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