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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Survival / Healing / Renewal
- Published: 06/12/2021
Karen
Born 1935, M, from Bradford, PA, United StatesKAREN
He twisted the den doorknob, listening for activity. He did not want to startle her, he just needed to talk. She had a wicked temper, but he loved her and wanted to get her back. Karen did not know that George had kept a key when she threw him out two weeks ago. If she remained calm, they could resolve their issues. Soft background music filled the room. The Theme from Out of Africa was playing in an endless loop on her dad’s old tape deck. Karen must be in her bedroom.
The flashing red neon sign from the neighborhood bar across the street invaded the Venetian blinds in a monotonous cadence, splashing bands of purple onto the gaudy blue walls and ceiling.
Her dad had been eccentric for years, and a widower since Karen was five. He died a year ago. In his last few years, his demented mind had created an African fantasy world she couldn’t escape. Now twenty-two, she had trouble coping with his death. She held his den in a near shrine state – untouched, music and all, since his death.
George had been dating Karen for a year when he moved in with her a month after the funeral. They had often argued about the den. Two weeks ago, she evicted him.
George crossed to the fireplace as a violin crescendo led into Karen’s Song. God, he even named her after the Meryl Streep character in the movie. He crept along the walnut-paneled wall with a gallery of 8 x 10, sepia toned photos, for authenticity, of old pals in safari jackets, jodhpurs, leather puttees, and shotguns, lounging around tents. Her dad, in one larger framed photo-shopped image, posed like a triumphant Teddy Roosevelt with one foot on the body of a trophy male lion. He cradled his long rifle in the crook of his elbow while he flashed a white, toothy grin beneath his safari hat. The wild boar’s head mounted on the opposite wall looked ominous as his lifelike eyes blinked in time with the red light from the bar.
George fingered the wood carved Ghanaian mask that lorded over the mantle...obviously Pier One. He found the tape deck and turned it off. The silence was sudden and complete.
“Is somebody there?” Her voice came from down the hall.
“It’s me, Karen, George.” The rustle of her silk robe told him she was running. The door burst open, and Karen stood frozen, framed in the hallway light.
“How Dare You!” In a single movement she snapped on the overhead light, grabbed a flower vase from the end table, and threw it at him.
George ducked as the vase flew over his head. It wiped everything off the mantle. The now broken African mask lay next to the bronze vase that hit the stone hearth with a metallic clang. Karen gasped, and she sank to her knees on the hearth, cradling the vase to her breast. She rocked back and forth, sobbing. “Now look what you made me do!”
“I’m so sorry, Karen.” George, hesitant to move, stayed next to her with his hand on her heaving shoulders. Her sobbing morphed into half-laughter. She glanced up at him, still laughing, and said, “Oh, George, won’t you please come back.”
“Of course, baby, that’s what I want too. I love you.”
Karen stood, flung her arms around his neck, and filled his face with kisses, repeating, “I love you too, George. I really do.”
He stepped back a bit, his raised palm warding her off, and said, “Ahh, Karen... what do we do about the den?”
She looked at him and grinned. “Oh, Hon, can’t you use it as an office or something?”
“Of course... and I am sorry about the vase.”
“I know.” She dropped to her knees again, looked up to him, and said, “Let’s just forget the whole thing. Now help me sweep up Daddy’s ashes. You know... I couldn't stand the old b***tard, anyway.”
Karen(Richard Marcott)
KAREN
He twisted the den doorknob, listening for activity. He did not want to startle her, he just needed to talk. She had a wicked temper, but he loved her and wanted to get her back. Karen did not know that George had kept a key when she threw him out two weeks ago. If she remained calm, they could resolve their issues. Soft background music filled the room. The Theme from Out of Africa was playing in an endless loop on her dad’s old tape deck. Karen must be in her bedroom.
The flashing red neon sign from the neighborhood bar across the street invaded the Venetian blinds in a monotonous cadence, splashing bands of purple onto the gaudy blue walls and ceiling.
Her dad had been eccentric for years, and a widower since Karen was five. He died a year ago. In his last few years, his demented mind had created an African fantasy world she couldn’t escape. Now twenty-two, she had trouble coping with his death. She held his den in a near shrine state – untouched, music and all, since his death.
George had been dating Karen for a year when he moved in with her a month after the funeral. They had often argued about the den. Two weeks ago, she evicted him.
George crossed to the fireplace as a violin crescendo led into Karen’s Song. God, he even named her after the Meryl Streep character in the movie. He crept along the walnut-paneled wall with a gallery of 8 x 10, sepia toned photos, for authenticity, of old pals in safari jackets, jodhpurs, leather puttees, and shotguns, lounging around tents. Her dad, in one larger framed photo-shopped image, posed like a triumphant Teddy Roosevelt with one foot on the body of a trophy male lion. He cradled his long rifle in the crook of his elbow while he flashed a white, toothy grin beneath his safari hat. The wild boar’s head mounted on the opposite wall looked ominous as his lifelike eyes blinked in time with the red light from the bar.
George fingered the wood carved Ghanaian mask that lorded over the mantle...obviously Pier One. He found the tape deck and turned it off. The silence was sudden and complete.
“Is somebody there?” Her voice came from down the hall.
“It’s me, Karen, George.” The rustle of her silk robe told him she was running. The door burst open, and Karen stood frozen, framed in the hallway light.
“How Dare You!” In a single movement she snapped on the overhead light, grabbed a flower vase from the end table, and threw it at him.
George ducked as the vase flew over his head. It wiped everything off the mantle. The now broken African mask lay next to the bronze vase that hit the stone hearth with a metallic clang. Karen gasped, and she sank to her knees on the hearth, cradling the vase to her breast. She rocked back and forth, sobbing. “Now look what you made me do!”
“I’m so sorry, Karen.” George, hesitant to move, stayed next to her with his hand on her heaving shoulders. Her sobbing morphed into half-laughter. She glanced up at him, still laughing, and said, “Oh, George, won’t you please come back.”
“Of course, baby, that’s what I want too. I love you.”
Karen stood, flung her arms around his neck, and filled his face with kisses, repeating, “I love you too, George. I really do.”
He stepped back a bit, his raised palm warding her off, and said, “Ahh, Karen... what do we do about the den?”
She looked at him and grinned. “Oh, Hon, can’t you use it as an office or something?”
“Of course... and I am sorry about the vase.”
“I know.” She dropped to her knees again, looked up to him, and said, “Let’s just forget the whole thing. Now help me sweep up Daddy’s ashes. You know... I couldn't stand the old b***tard, anyway.”
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Kevin Hughes
06/21/2021Congrats Richard,
I guess because of my Autism, I saw this story in a different light. I don't think she liked her Dad, and she loved George. But in order to hide her guilt over his power over her life, she took it out on poor George. She had to constantly play the role of "absentee mother" to her Dad ...when she was only five.
Not in any sexual way, but in the way that a female supports and helps a man deal with life. To much to put on a child's shoulders. So she stuck it out...and George recognized the selfishness of the "old Bastard" and his use of duty and grief to keep his daughter in her life.
So, when she threw her Dad at him, litterally, that old wound shattered on a wall of love. She was free. And thus, the happy ending. At least that is how I read the story.
Smiles, Kevin
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Shirley Smothers
06/21/2021Great story. I think we all have things we hang onto that we don't really want or like. But guilt keeps us from moving on.
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Richard Marcott
06/21/2021Thank you, Shirley. What a nice thought. I think you've captured the essence of the story
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JD
06/15/2021I guess she inevitably decided to get 'Out of Africa'! Great short with a suprising and fun end. Thanks for sharing this dramatic romance short on Storystar, Richard. Well done! :)
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Richard Marcott
06/16/2021Glad you enjoyed Karen, JD. Out of Africa is my wife's favorite movie. We watch it at least twice a year.
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