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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Miracles / Wonders
- Published: 07/27/2021
The Magical World
Born 2012, F, from Portland, Oregon, United States"Come on Ace!" I said as I sprinted across the field. The black german shepherd raced through the tall grass as I threw the frisbee high up in the air. Today was a big day! Ace was going to be a show dog!! Today is the first show Ace ever went to! I was so excited. I jumped high in the air and twirled around. I brought Ace back home and put on his collar. "Matilda!! Groom Ace before we go!!" My mom yelled as she put on her shoes. I took the blue brush and started brushing his fur. His fur was shiny and wavy, it looked beautiful! Then, I brushed his teeth with the beef flavor toothpaste and walked him into the car. After a long 20 minutes, we arrived! The big gray building towering above looked gigantic! Suddenly, I saw something shining next to the door. I held Ace's leash so tight my hand started to sweat. The shining thing looked like a big bubble, but stuck on a wall. I touched it and...my hand went right through! I've always believed in magic, but this...THIS!! I trembled as I stepped through. Then, Ace sneezed. He sneezed again! "Ace, are you-ACHOOO" I paused to look around. There were little creatures with tiny wings - fairies! There were huge lizards with gigantic wings - dragons! "Magic IS real!" I squealed as I pet Ace on the back. It turned out, that we sneezed because of the fairy dust! Suddenly, a fairy came up to me. She was really small, probably the size of an eraser. "Hello? Why am I here?" I said as I looked at her in the eye. She shivered as I waved my hand at her puny face. I could tell from her eyes that this situation was bad. Her face had an "uh-oh" sign all over it. I tried to pet Ace, but he wasn't there!! I looked around, searching for a furry black animal running. But I couldn't find him. I forgot about everything that just happened. I had JUST lost my dog.
The Magical World(Martha Kang) "Come on Ace!" I said as I sprinted across the field. The black german shepherd raced through the tall grass as I threw the frisbee high up in the air. Today was a big day! Ace was going to be a show dog!! Today is the first show Ace ever went to! I was so excited. I jumped high in the air and twirled around. I brought Ace back home and put on his collar. "Matilda!! Groom Ace before we go!!" My mom yelled as she put on her shoes. I took the blue brush and started brushing his fur. His fur was shiny and wavy, it looked beautiful! Then, I brushed his teeth with the beef flavor toothpaste and walked him into the car. After a long 20 minutes, we arrived! The big gray building towering above looked gigantic! Suddenly, I saw something shining next to the door. I held Ace's leash so tight my hand started to sweat. The shining thing looked like a big bubble, but stuck on a wall. I touched it and...my hand went right through! I've always believed in magic, but this...THIS!! I trembled as I stepped through. Then, Ace sneezed. He sneezed again! "Ace, are you-ACHOOO" I paused to look around. There were little creatures with tiny wings - fairies! There were huge lizards with gigantic wings - dragons! "Magic IS real!" I squealed as I pet Ace on the back. It turned out, that we sneezed because of the fairy dust! Suddenly, a fairy came up to me. She was really small, probably the size of an eraser. "Hello? Why am I here?" I said as I looked at her in the eye. She shivered as I waved my hand at her puny face. I could tell from her eyes that this situation was bad. Her face had an "uh-oh" sign all over it. I tried to pet Ace, but he wasn't there!! I looked around, searching for a furry black animal running. But I couldn't find him. I forgot about everything that just happened. I had JUST lost my dog.
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JD
08/03/2021There's a lot going on in your story... it makes it fun and exciting... but it doesn't seem complete because your story doesn't continue with all the things that happened... where did your dog go? Is he with the fairies? Where did the fairies come from? Where did they go? What happened next? Great story, but it ended too soon, with too many questions unanswered.
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Radrook
07/31/2021Interesting story! Wow! I wish I had been so fluent in English as you are at your age. Unfortunately, at your age I didn't know how to speak English and barely knew how to speak Spanish. Yes, losing a dog is like losing a family member. I will always remember my dog Danny Boy as such. Concerning magic, well, being a Christian I have learned that it is o be avoided since thesorces of it are related to the occult. I do imagine that persons of other religions don't share that concern. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks for sharing.
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Martha Kang
08/02/2021Thank you! I am also a Christian, but I speak Spanish and English. My English is a bit better!
Cheers,
Martha Kang
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Martha Kang
07/27/2021My dad had 2 show dogs, George and Gigi! George got the Canadian Championship for german shepherd show dogs! I wrote this in memory of him!
Happy Reading,
Martha Kang
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